My Perception of Youth May Be Wrong

The protagonist fits the youthful and melancholy appearance of some high school students, and at the same time is slightly mature due to family reasons. The author depicts the protagonist's character, thoughts and mental journey in great detail, which is very realistic and immersive. Some of the minor points are harmless, but I don't know whether the author plans to write with multiple female protagonists, a single female protagonist, or no female protagonist [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

This work is well written to my taste. There are some flaws in some places, but the problems are not major for the time being. It feels like the story is still in the daily stage, and no one has entered the main plot. As for the follow-up direction, my suggestion is that the author first follows the original idea, then tentatively writes a few test chapters and then makes major outline changes based on feedback. Of course, the things buried before can be used, but they cannot be left out, and they cannot be completely disconnected from the later chapters. For example, the junior high school stage left a four-eye clue for the later chapters, which is actually very sad. Fortunately, the plot of junior high school is not that important in the story line, but I still hope to have the opportunity to dig more in the future. After entering the high school home field, the connection between each scene from work to home to the club must be careful.

It's good to watch. Although the plot is a bit contrived and many of the stories are bad in the old version, the details are about 75 points. But to be honest, there should be very few people reading this kind of youth pain literature nowadays.

The author's plot design overuses emergencies, which are events with extremely low probability of happening. In fact, it can be understood that novels are stories, and plot development requires motivation. Generally speaking, novels will give an initial motivation through various methods, or characters, systems, tasks, etc. However, this book is purely a daily novel. The protagonist's character is set to be passive and avoid the world. The overall writing style is close to reality, so there is a lack of motivation. Therefore, unexpected events are needed to provide motivation for the story. But the handling is too rough, many events lack foreshadowing, and the time and plot arrangements are too concentrated. Especially in the early stage, the author seems to be eager to let a large number of characters appear. I don't know why, but the author has designed too many emergencies for this purpose, and they appear many times in a short period of time, which makes the protagonist look like a disaster, and also makes the protagonist's character uncertain. The author's description of the protagonist is very good, but because the protagonist's different responses to multiple emergencies make the character unstable, this advantage is somewhat covered up. Secondly, a major feature of this article is that the character creation and even the entire writing style are relatively realistic. This is rare and very attractive. However, a large number of unexpected and rare storylines have greatly impacted this feature. To put it bluntly, it makes people laugh. In addition, there is a small problem. The author doesn't care much about the characters in his book and treats them a little too casually, but it doesn't hurt. In short, the biggest problem so far is that the author is too impatient and eager to advance the story. However, as a daily novel, this is not necessary. The author's daily shaping and psychological description of the characters are good. If it is written smoothly, this book is still very hopeful to become a classic of daily novels.

Maybe it's because I've read too many refreshing novels. I've read such delicate and complex psychological journeys and emotional novels. I can't say that I feel uncomfortable, but not much. I'm caught between these two. To be honest, I personally feel that Chen Yu has two points that have a great impact on his life path. Among them, parents are the key. If his parents are here, the protagonist may live a better life. And the situation is so bad, I can already assume that the protagonist's parents are dead. Of course, if the author wants to return to the factory in the later stage, I will pretend that I didn't say it. Secondly, Grandpa Chen Yu can be said to be the only blood and family character in the early stage of this article. However, because the plot requires the script to be killed directly in advance, the subsequent viewing experience will be discussed after the author updates [Chigua]

Youth🥚Painful Literature I remember liking to read this type of book when I was in high school. I can't say how good it is to read it. Four stars should be an encouragement to the author.

It's really well written, I hope you can continue writing. If you calm down and read it, it is actually a good novel with plenty of conflicts. But it may be that the beginning is too bland and the title of the book is not attractive enough, resulting in poor data. It may be a victim of the Tomato algorithm mechanism.

Regarding the questions raised by readers, the author has made preliminary revisions.

"Maybe the world thinks you are frivolous, but you are still young." "The young man has no side, he is Huazhang himself."

I don't know why the score of this book is so low The book is quite good, but it still has flaws, but these can be ignored. I really don't know why the score of this book is so low. A book like this can get about eight points in Tomato.

I have read Chapter 27 so far. The feeling of the male protagonist reminds me of Glass Lips (the male protagonist of the anime). I don't know where it fits. Anyway, I feel a strong sense of immersion. The plot of the novel is relatively daily, but it looks very comfortable. It seems very ordinary so far, leaning toward realism. I really like reading it.

Very well written! You must keep writing it!

Potential book, you can read it

A good book with its own style

What kind of job does Xiaomeng do?

So Xiaomeng's husband was killed by the protagonist?

Come on, keep writing, don't worry about the words.

It's pretty good, I haven't seen anything like this in a long time.

It's good-looking, eye-catching, and the bland plot is exactly the best

There are some novel places worth trying [Like]

The future is bright, come on

Reality is always cruel

Well, that's more than enough. Come on, author!

I'm a local dog, I like to watch

I met my favorite type

After a little taste, I still feel it's not enough for Akaashi.

I hope the author will not disappoint readers' expectations.

I'm a warm man, I just love watching this stuff

I'm not sure what you want to write, but I'd better keep writing. The writing is very engaging.

The writing is okay, but it's too bland, which may not suit me. But the storyline is still very good, so try your best.