Transformed into Elysia, I Travel the Myriad Realms

It's great. This is the most enjoyable and enjoyable Ellie adventure story I've ever seen♪ There are some words that Ellie says that don't have a note 🥺, but I still give it five stars.

Changes are single, the writing is average, flowing prose, and there is zero description of women's clothing, women's bodies, and women's degeneration. A novice author is on his way. Please support him. He has an original world view, unlimited flow, and the main world family is well written. However, the writing style does need to be improved. It is more like the outline of a book~ Come on!

The first world gave me the feeling of being invincible and relaxed. Then when I returned to the main world, I felt like the protagonist was locked up, and his motorcycle was "threatened" by Sister Zhao. After putting out the fire at the Comic Exhibition, another "threat" came, and a specially built car was built to protect the protagonist. Although the force was very small, it was quite uncomfortable to watch. I feel like I'm a little sensitive and think a little too much. Ever since I read what the police officer said, I felt that something was wrong behind it. That car was built with modern stuff and could still defend against the protagonist. It was definitely not something that could be built simply. This makes me feel like they don't trust the protagonist, as if she is a time bomb with power.

It's okay, but the main world chapter has a bit of an AI feel. I don't know if it's because I read it too complicatedly, or what happened. There are many chapters that feel a bit weird. The weirdest ones are the first few chapters of Recognition and Family Recognition. It doesn't say when the cognitive impairment was added, but it just feels like a little bit here and there. Of course, I don't mean to attack you. The first few chapters of your magic chapter are still okay. This is just my opinion and some thoughts.

There is a feeling of a teacher trying his best to instill knowledge on the stage. The pace is too fast and the plot flows through the brain without leaving a trace of emotion. It is obviously a novel, but it is like reading a report. Moreover, the protagonist is too strange, like a robot mechanically reproducing some stereotypes. This is not bad at all, but the timing of the reappearance is wrong.

History,,,,

Although I've only read the first few chapters, I think it's really great.

Although it is a bit ordinary, I personally feel that it can be read. However, the author wrote a fusion of Ellie after all, but the protagonist does not seem to have much of her character. I suggest that the author should not add a fusion setting if he cannot write it.

It's pretty good, but I don't know why, but it sounds a little weird when I listen to the book.

Not bad, very beautiful