Luo Xiaohei: the Start Time Is Still, Shocking Laojun

The current pace is pretty good and makes me want to read on. What I am most worried about right now is the heroine issue. It is best not to have a heroine. There are already many books on my bookshelf that have emotional plots that break the whole book. Especially for senior sisters, the relationship between family members is very good. Don't let the family relationship deteriorate! ! ! The last and most important point is, it looks good, if you like it, do more [learned]

There are no problems with the setting, but the protagonist progresses too fast, his abilities are too unclear, and the protagonist is not portrayed enough, and the process of spiritual cultivation is not explained in detail. It is an empty body with no content. Even if the time perspective of Luo Xiaohei's War Chronicles is large, it will not be long. The combat power may collapse in the later stage, and the villain is not dangerous to the protagonist. As strong as infinity, Laojun's characters all have their own weaknesses and their abilities have ways to restrain them. Characters with weaknesses are the most attractive.

Your copy is a little lax, but your plot makes up for it. [Eating Melon] The OOC phenomenon is too serious, and "black" fans who are too familiar with the plot may not be satisfied. At the same time, it is also difficult to get out of the circle based on Luo Xiaohei's IP creation, which is relatively niche, and it will not please both ends. [Huge face] Apart from these shortcomings, it is still good to watch alone. [Send heart] (using modern terminology in ancient times, others did not react at all and it felt very fragmented [laughing and crying])

Some time ago, in order to improve my cultural literacy, I signed up for a calligraphy training class. Because my peers were all primary school students, everyone ostracized me and looked down upon me for still learning this at such an old age. It was nothing at first, but the maliciousness of the primary school students was really beyond my imagination. They said that I came to learn calligraphy with my foot half in the coffin. I was so angry that I cried. I wiped away my tears and ignored them as they continued to practice calligraphy. I swore that I would practice a good calligraphy and not let my money go to waste. I calmed down and carefully wrote a line of words on the paper: Teacher, you are a god.

It's a very good fanfic of Luo Xiaohei, but I don't know why it's so low-profile even though it's better than the other one [laughs awkwardly] I'm sure you'll get rave reviews [smile]

It looks good, I was looking forward to the interaction with Xiao Hei and Mirai Lu Ye. But the inexplicable martial arts competition, the original, and the unfinished ending made my original perfect evaluation drop. I want to watch the follow-up, I'm going to die.

It's very good. The fighting scenes and love scenes are all very well written. This is the first fan novel that I really agree with. The protagonist, Dog Brother, Qing Ning, Lao Jun, etc. Are all described very clearly. Five-star praise! [If there is a female protagonist, it is best not to tear down the cp. If there is no female protagonist, just fight for fun. In the end, we should fight for a normal cp, so that we will not engage in such messy things as sexism]

My bad mouth! I accidentally bitched my tongue just now because it was a bit confusing... Sorry! The author is deeply sorry! The characterizations in this book are very flexible. Among fan novels, the writing style of Reversing Time and Space has the same natural feeling as Luo Xiaohei's War Chronicles, which makes it very comfortable to read. The main characters and plot are also logically smooth. In short, I praise the author greatly! ! !

The writing style is really good, and one of the few that is comfortable to read, but the appendix... My appendix is gone, wow wow wow...

They're all pretty good, but the one-two punch thing isn't so good. Some people don't watch Date A Live, just like me, and it bothered me later. I went to check it out [facepalm] If I have to comment, the author's writing style is very good. I have been following it for a long time. Among the Luo Xiaohei fanfics, I think it is top-notch, but I still don't recommend it very much. This book was unfinished. Maybe the author had something wrong. Although I was a little angry, which is normal. After all, I like this fanfic very much. I didn't expect that the author's writing style was so good that it would be unfinished.

The keyboard produces flowers, Thirty-eight thousand updates per day. Don't sleep, get up quickly, Readers are waiting! Breakfast becomes lunch, Don't lose your inspiration. The toilet serves as a throne, Don't stop breaking the news! The bags under my eyes are hanging on my mouth, Dark circles are like coal. But the words are really beautiful, Long live baldness! At half past three in the morning, The document is still shiny. Before finger cramps, Five thousand more chapters! Quick update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

It's really good [Chigua], but it's still a bit lacking now [Laughs] As long as it keeps updating, it's actually worth pursuing. I know you can see the author [Chigua], so come on, big brother/big sister who writes novels [Laughs]

Don't watch the finale! ! ! (The following content contains spoilers) The early stage of this article is really well written. Even if the story ends in the competition, it is better than the last moment: everyone is filming, but the theater actors are good [crying] Although Mingmingzi seems to have time-based abilities (can make deals with the river of time), she has a very lovable personality, which really fits Luo Xiaohei's fairy-tale worldview. What a pity.

My personal impression in the early stage is still very good, the structural framework is perfect, and the emotions of the characters are very delicate. However, when other things are added in the later stage, such as Genshin Impact, it seems very confusing. Moreover, Luo Xiaohei has not finished the novel, and the novel is already unfinished. But the author's writing style is very good. I hope that when Luo Xiaohei's follow-up works come out, the author will be able to write a second fanfic about Luo Xiaohei. Still looking forward to it. (›´ω`‹ )

Beautiful and well written. The emotions are delicate and the characters are well created. The original characters in Blue Brook Town are not OOC, but there are too few and they are not interesting enough. _(:з∠)_

I like it very much. I think it is a good book, but the number of words is slightly less.

It looks good, there is no pure invincible self-description, the storyline of each character is pretty good, there is a shadow of Luo Xiaohei, come on, author, I really like this book, don't finish it. Story is the essence of life. I also ask you, the author, to leave your mark on me during the period of time when I read your works (come on, author) [Blow a kiss] [Flow a kiss] [Sneak smile] [Laugh] [Cherish it carefully]

It's okay, but what's funny to you is that Luo Xiaohei, a fan of Luo Xiaohei, didn't show up [smile] [smile]

Must give full marks! Such a good book, where can I find another one? Super super super pretty! There is no CP, no Shuangnan, but a pure male protagonist, and it is not a cool novel, but a growth type with top-notch magical skills! I cried to death 😭, why didn't I find him earlier and become familiar with her, it's just that she looks good! !

The front part is very good, the characters are handled well, the emotions are created, especially the fighting scenes, but the ending is a dream ending, ahhhhhhh, ahhhhhhh, I hate you author, you deceived my feelings [crying]

The writing is very good, and it suits my taste. I like to read this kind of fan fiction, which is powerful, mysterious, and interacts with the original characters. Before I read this book, I haven't seen anything so suitable to my taste in a long time (only personal evaluation) This is the first book that I have given a five-star rating and also reviewed at the same time. In the past, I only gave a five-star rating and no comments on novels such as The God of Drama, Toka, Zhanshen, Dali, etc. This is because many people have read these books and they all love to read them. The reviews are the same with or without me, so I never comment, but This book is really to my liking and I like to read it, so I hope the author will never stop updating it, because most unknown novel authors stop updating it and change it to new books, but this book is very interesting. I read other reviews saying it is very interesting, so the author must keep updating it [smile] [smile] [smile]

4.2 I like a book by Luo Xiaohei very much. It should be regarded as one of the best written ones, but like Duan Geng, it ended directly [face covering] [face covering]

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In fact, there are development templates for the power of time. For example, like Gojo Satoru, time can also be used. Putting a time around to slow down the passive means there is no lower limit. The captured time has impurities stored in it. When fighting, all the time is given to the enemy, which means that the field expands into an infinite space. Omitting the process of one's normal attack is the virtual style. Another example is to add a time anchor point to yourself, based on your peak state in the past time, and automatically refresh it every day.

Hmm... It looks a bit awkward from the front, but it looks good from the back. The author's writing style is still good and making progress. It's quite good.

It's good to watch. Many excellent fans have appeared recently after the big movie came out.

The main experiences were in the era of Lanxi Town. Luye appeared, but Xiaohei did not appear, and Lanwei appeared. That's about it. Well, anyway, some of the experiences in the middle are quite interesting. Except for the ending, I give it a five-star praise! ! [Cool][cool]

It looks good, why is the score so low? Personally, I think it should be 9 or above. Good book, but the ending is bad, "dream ending" [crying]

Among foreign persimmons, the novel about Luo Xiaohei's War Chronicles is already a top-notch one [sending my heart]

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