Ming Tide: Saving Frollo from Childhood Sweethearts

I still look very good now. I can tell that the author has carefully understood most of the world of Mingchao, but I still want to adjust the logic as much as possible. You can see that suddenly it is four or five hundred years in the middle. It may be sudden, you may be a little confused, or you may be a little confused when you look at it. If you look carefully, it doesn't matter. , But most readers may not read it carefully. At present, I feel that this is the only one, and the others are good. After all, there are not too many plots now. I think it is okay to write it like this. I think that for now, this novel should either be streamlined and ended according to the existing plot. It should not be too long, otherwise it will easily break. Or just wait for the various plots and foreshadowings of Mingchao, and then add them in. If you write it that way, the cycle may be longer, and it's hard to say in terms of profit, but if it is written, it will definitely be a highly praised book.

There are very few Mingchao articles that can be read. The author must continue to write more.

If no one is watching, then I have to taste it [laughs]

Hurry up and push the plot, I want to watch Frollo's plot

This is one of the few second-generation novels I have read that has exquisite writing, coherent plot, unobtrusive plot, and vivid characters. Especially this kind of slightly sweet plot, I really like it [Love]

Good looking, good luck to the author

The writing is good. I gave it.

Self-evaluation of five stars

Floro is unparalleled

It's good, but if it's too bland afterwards, it might make me feel a little tired [face-covering][face-covering]

Delicate writing style, one of the few good fan works

Single heroine or author with multiple heroines?

The plot in the middle is a little stiff, but overall it's good