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Personally, I like this second novel very much. The writing is good and the plot arrangement surprised me. The author is still coding when he is approaching the college entrance examination. I admire and worry about it. I think I have only finished reading it in my freshman year, so I can guess some of the difficulties the author will encounter during this period. The two works "Hungry Death" and "Aihong" have become the other and only works that moved me again after "Dragon Clan". I also have the most difficult emotions for Pian Pian to calm down. The author's remarks at the end also made me feel quite emotional. If I think about it carefully, all of us who have not been young and frivolous will have old things that are finally sealed in the bottom of our hearts. I hope the author will have a smooth road ahead and no longer have to dwell on his memories.

I have read the latest chapter. The writing is good and the author is quite honest (I almost stopped reading when I was reading chapters 30-50). I hope the author will continue to work hard, write books better and better, and get admitted to the university of his choice [blowing kiss]

The writing is pretty good, the character is relatively close to the original work, the plot is not obtrusive, the writing is okay, and it is quite interesting in some places. The shortcoming is that the plot jumps too fast in some places and is a bit abrupt. Also, please update quickly [laughing evilly]

Write to Pianpian that the ice cellar is not tight Only then did you know that you were exhausted from playing the game yourself and showing me

Drive low and go high, I won't comment on the second review, the third review is too thunderous [face covering], I guess it scared away many readers. There were too many repetitions in the middle, and it only started to work hard around chapter 60 or 70, but I guess there aren't many people left. The characters also fit the game relatively well, and the content after chapter 80 is really good. But I don't know if the author can go further. Come on

I feel that the author has been in love many times. We laymen often can only think of the happiness of marriage, but forget that there will always be a lot of friction in real life. This book is very well written.

It's very similar to Lao Fang's character design, and the writing style is also bookish. It seems to be very good so far. Lao Fang's Rebirth is one of the best fics I've seen so far.

Very nice, better than 🐔0

This writing is interesting, and the setting of double life in the fourth week is

A good novel by Lin Pianpian

Wonderful book, ups and downs, excellent writing

I originally planned to play Hungry Death Erchuang and Su Qingri. Anyway, it is like this. Lin Pianpian is so beautiful! Right, right. Although I only read a few chapters...😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇By the way, I bought a collector's edition of Hungry Novel😋😋😋😋😋😋😋 😋😋😋😋😋☝Come on more meow😇~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~:)

Can only one be saved? Can't he save Su Lianyan too? [Almost crying]

The idea is good but the writing style is too immature. It should be the author's debut novel. There are a few things I have to say. First of all, the author should ask clearly what he wants to write, what is the biggest regret of the original plot, and to what extent he should write it. Think carefully before considering the plot. Otherwise, if you only act impulsively and exhaust the inspiration, you will be left with nothing. Secondly, you must reconstruct the character. Since it is a fanfic and the adaptation is unrestrained, you must redraw the character portrait. Make the plot logical, that is, talk less nonsense, tell less lies, and let Lin and Fang really "live" instead of puppets. Moreover, you need to accumulate more. There are countless articles on the same genre, and there are also excellent works. Love first, then learn. You can start with short stories, such as writing about Lin's daily life of taking care of Fang (when his madness improves), or Lin's day in Goulan. Don't be too ambitious. If there is still fate, I hope to see your more mature works, come on

It's still okay to write Quite productive

Come on wow come on wow

Really beautiful, highly recommended! !

Good-looking, good-looking, love to watch

How come this guy is so sickly? Could it be that love must be two-way?

Come on, author, your writing is very good.

Very good writing style. The idea of ​​going back and starting over is also very good. I am still studying and can update frequently. The author is also working very hard. Come on [Love]

The emotional grasp is very delicate, coupled with the smooth writing, it is very comfortable to watch, come on [send heart]

It's only been a day since I've seen so many chapters.

I really think it's pretty good, I hope my last life can make up for all my regrets

Dear author, is this article about a single heroine? [Crazy]? I hope it's a single heroine [Blowing Kiss]

Come on and write. Don't forget to review it after you finish writing it.

Very well written, very uncomfortable to play the game

It's pretty good-looking. It's very sweet after carrying the knives of the previous three lives.

The author writes very well, I hope Pianpian can be happy

I've only read a little bit, but the author's setting is unconventional. I believe it will be a wonderful story.