A Top Assassin Reborn as a Frostwolf in the Beast World

It's hard to comment. How can I say this? The protagonist is also a time-travel killer. He was so powerful before time-travel, but after time-travel, I feel that the author has been weakening his power. He is either abused or suppressed. And judging from the current situation, one of the two protagonists will definitely die in the end.

To be honest, I think the two protagonists are a bit crazy. The way they got along in the early stage, it is hard for me to imagine how they can be together in the future. Well, from the first picture to the current one, Chun Chun is torturing Yue. I don't understand it. It feels like I am torturing him just for the sake of torturing him. Also, I don't understand where Yue has such a great sense of responsibility. Didn't he come from time travel? You can leave after revenge. Also, the author writes in too detail. The pain of the wound and the harshness of the environment are all too detailed. In fact, there is no need to be so detailed. The author can divide it into paragraphs. One paragraph is too long, which will easily weaken the desire to read😐😐

The description is too detailed and can even be said to be ridiculous, which affects the reading very much [laughs awkwardly] Even a coma is a long paragraph, and a very common action or state is described in a long paragraph, which makes it feel gorgeous and unreal.

Judging from the story line written by the author in the early stage, one of the two protagonists may have to die in the later stage. Otherwise, it will not match your character and the development of the story line. This will easily destroy the article. It's not that I have a big opinion, but judging from the story line you wrote, one of the two protagonists will really die in the later stage. No. Otherwise, the development of this story will be very confusing, but if the author's later chapters are perfectly combined with the previous ones, and then the misunderstanding between attack and reception, as well as the damage caused by attack and reception, it is still very possible for the two of them to be together. I am still looking forward to it. Big boost for the author.

Tiantian is injured, I think the injury is a bit serious, there are too many articles about fighting in the early stage, eh, the character's personality is not described in detail, but I feel that eh, the protagonist is a beast-killing machine, just talking about fighting and the like is too much, it can be reduced. (Personally, I think) If there is something wrong, please forgive me, thank you

No, it's too exhausting for me to watch. It's too messy. There are no transitions. Half of the time I watched it was all about fighting. The wolf was vomiting blood every day, saving children, saving children, saving children. The tiger was going crazy and crazy every day. That's it for life-and-death enemies. Love can still happen. That's very Stockholm. I hope this comment can be higher. I can only say that you should read it carefully.

After reading the introduction, I felt that this book was quite interesting to read, so I came to read it. However, the plot was not coherent and a bit confusing, and I couldn't quite understand it. There are too many descriptions of injuries and fighting, and too little description of the relationships and emotions between the characters. It would be good to improve the coherence and development of the plot, come on!

It is not recommended for people who have a strong sense of immersion. It is really easy to feel nauseated after watching half of it. I am referring to me here. I saw everyone humiliated in front of him, saying that he was a thief, private property, like a hound chained next to the throne?? . ? I really can't stand it anymore. I can only say that the sense of immersion is too strong, so I'd better stop reading.

How to say it? The theme of this story is quite fresh. I feel a little messy, but okay. Come on, the storyline is okay.

The abuse made me physically and mentally hurt. 😢😢😢😢 After watching it for so long, I just have no concept of time 🤦🤦🤦