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Nice! Super super pretty! Although the author said in the first chapter that some words would be polished by AI, I really can't stand how good-looking it is. Severus and Xiaojiu find each other in a dark and dirty little world. The personality characteristics of each character are also very obvious. There are also Severus and Xiaojiu's respective psychological growth and changes in their pursuit of future and power after specific events, especially their cherishing each other. They are two people in darkness, but they choose each other and choose to move towards the future together. "Behind them is a broken home, a chaotic crowd, and a mess of accusations and curses." "Every step they take is based on pain and ruins, but each step becomes stronger due to each other's support." "Let's go home!"

Snape and our protagonist are really two little bitter gourds, but I saw that even if they both put up their hard shells, they are still willing to walk towards each other. It's really beautiful! Because when I was a child, I saw that the only attachment to each other was that even if I was shaking all over, I would stand up when I saw the other person being beaten and scolded. The relationship is really delicate! Be sure to come and see it! Ahhhhhhhhh

I have read the latest chapter. The content is good, but I am a little confused. Is the author's tolerance set for the protagonist too low? Since the time he traveled back in time, the protagonist has been immersed in the shadow of domestic violence by his father. Descriptions such as confused thoughts and uncontrollable body stiffness have appeared many times. It seems that the psychological problem is very serious and he will fall ill at any time. I'm a little curious about how he grew up to study abroad alone under such circumstances in his previous life, especially since the protagonist seems a bit confused.

The relationship is particularly delicate. The mutual dependence and help between Xiao Jiu and Severus makes Hart soft. Of course, life is also quite bitter. I can't wait to see the next chapter. I hope they can get better and better, and life will be sweeter. The writing is very smooth, and the author chose to write Severus's voice, which is really a plus for me. After all, Severus is a poisonous cat. Xiaojiu's ptsd made me feel a little cardiac arrest. The baby was in pain, but this time Severus was with him. Lily is also a little sunshine, always optimistic and cheerful, and considerate of others. The little black cat is really smart and very good I just feel sad for Erin I hope Xiaojiu and Severus will be together for a long time.

All I can say is that this book brings to readers the most real human heart, wandering environment, as well as the strong will of two children who desperately want to live and the difficulties and obstacles in the process. The emotional line is natural and delicate, and it very reasonably lays the emotional foundation for the future love between the protagonist and Snape. The characters and environment are vividly depicted, making readers feel as if they are immersed in the scene, and the emotions of the characters are perfectly conveyed to the readers. Doesn't appear abrupt or artificial. Unlike some books, Snape liked him just by doing small things and saying a few words. That kind of love that seems to come easily and inexplicably feels very cheap. I don't think anyone can fall in love with someone so easily. I couldn't stand that kind of writing after reading a few chapters anyway. In summary, it looks good, but there are too few, not enough to look good [grievance]

It shouldn't be considered cruel, but I felt a little sad and distressed. When I saw Lily telling her family about Xiaojiu and Severus, the little pearl was about to fall off. There is only chapter fifty-eight and nothing much can be seen yet, I will follow up on the review later. Rating: Excellent, writing is okay, readable

It's really beautiful. I like the author's writing style and delicate emotions very much! It's really a rare good book! This new book gave me the desire to write a review for the first time, and I am very much looking forward to the author's updates! It would be better if more updates could be added

I like it very much, I just like this kind of ordinary life, not the kind of protagonist who is full of aura of the protagonist just looking at it. I love watching it.

Very nice! I really can't get enough of it. When Sif's magic rioted, I always hoped that someone from the magic world would take them away. These two little bitter gourds, ahhh, I'm really looking forward to the update. I hope to see them getting better and better soon.

It looks great, keep it up! I hope the emotional scenes can be more detailed [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [shy] [shy] [admiration] [admiration] [admiration] [like] [like] [like] [please ask for more updates] [please ask for more updates]

It's really well written, it's nice to read [laughs] and it's the slow pace that I like [blowing kiss]

Oh my god, this is the first time I've seen an HP article with this setting. It's really good! The part where the two children depend on each other is also very heartwarming. I declare that this is my third favorite HP article! !

Okay, okay, the two little ones are really warm when they stay together, and the descriptive language of the article is also very beautiful. Five stars must be five stars. When can they live a better life? I look forward to it.

Why do you want me to read this book at night? It's so beautiful, I tied it in one breath, I couldn't sleep most of the night What should I do tomorrow morning? Can the author update it a little more? . . I like it very much, I like it very much

It's really, really great. Oh wow, what a pity. Why did I find this book when it was still being serialized? I really want to read it in one go.

What an excellent article! ! ! It's so heartwarming that the two people support each other. They must be the youngest and top potion masters and alchemy masters in the future [I'm about to cry]. However, they only entered Hogwarts after more than fifty chapters. If not, it feels like the battle line will be very long. Qiuqiu will be greatly updated! ! !

The content is very novel and interesting, and it is pro-age and teaches young children to save each other!

It's beautiful! The description is very delicate [like] Looking forward to the follow-up! The author keeps updating [smile] Ahhhhhhhh! [Laughing] I'm really excited! I've been in a book shortage recently and I wanted to find some books to read, and then I found this one, and its cover immediately attracted me! Because the author has just written it, it's only a little bit [rolls eyes] but as soon as I read one chapter I knew I had found a treasure [admiration], it's really super! Super! Super beautiful! It's not enough to read [shy] Come on, author! Come on! ヾ(✿ﾟ▽ﾟ)ノ

Good chaff, good chaff, good chaff! ! ! I'm so hungry, begging for food [blowing kiss]

So well written! When will all the hardships come to an end [grievance]

The author is great, I must keep writing 😄

Go and eat, everyone, go and eat! Very fragrant rice!

It's beautiful. I hope Xifu and Yuanjiu get well soon.

Support the eldest lady, come on! Output Modo Modo [blowing kiss]

It's beautiful, Severus's portrayal is very vivid, and the author's writing is very good [laughing]

It's great to watch, the plot flows smoothly, and there's no abrupt feeling

Nice! Two little bitter gourds reported to the group to keep warm≡ω≡ I feel that the author's writing is super good!

Okay, it looks pretty

Super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super super good looking

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