Re: Are You a Grand Mage or a Gunsmith?

Emm... I have some ideas, but it's hard to imagine how I could write a million words. After all, there are not many powerful enemies in this world view. I killed Sloth very easily at the beginning. In addition, the peak protagonist's combat power setting is very strong. Without pressure, there will be no growth. It feels difficult to write the... Flavor of the original? It might be easier if I write entirely in the direction of cool writing. Writing Priscilla is also quite bold. This character's behavior and language style are difficult to write, especially since there is a big gap between Riqing's writing style and the style of domestic online articles. It is very difficult to control, so I feel that the Priscilla you wrote is inexplicably mixed with the flavor of Dream of Red Mansions.

A very, very good fanfic. The only shortcoming is that there are too few words at the moment. [Note] The author's writing style and plot structure are very good. The current progress is very smooth and not watery. If you read it patiently, you can find that the author's portrayal of the characters is very rich. For me, who only watched the first season of re0, the characters are completely established.

Every time I think of Subaru Natsuki's Sima face when he cleared his saves and returned to the starting point after a certain death, and then finally calmed down and found that everything had been changed, the expression on his face where all the information he had obtained before his death was basically scrapped, I couldn't help but hum. Gua, hurry up and serve it, I can't wait to eat it😃🤤

It's okay. The subject matter is novel and I can see that it was written for the sake of writing a long novel. Although it suppresses the fighting force, it is not too strong. After all, suppressing the fighting force for the sake of suppressing the fighting force is indeed limited and persuades me to quit. I have also read the author's last book, but to be honest, I haven't finished it because the writing is really boring for me. Compared with the previous book, this one really attracted me. I hope the author will continue to maintain a good rhythm.

I have been watching re0 videos recently, so I found a lot of fans to read it. This book is quite good. Chapters 2-3 are updated daily. It is rare that the timeline goes so far forward. However, the original plot is unexpectedly attractive. I look forward to the interaction in 486 after breaking into the main line. The character of the protagonist is very good, a reliable adult, powerful, but surprisingly does not feel overwhelming. No matter what situation he faces, the protagonist has a way to deal with it. He is really reliable in re0 where there are many gods and heroes. In addition, the protagonist has the ability to travel through the world. I am looking forward to helping 486 go home when I look forward to the finale. Chang Yue is so disgusting [crying] The author should be able to write it to the end smoothly (uneasy)

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The narrative rhythm is pretty good according to current fan fiction, but it's a little laggy. It's a qualified story. I think there's still room for improvement, so please update it as soon as possible! ! ! [Punch out][Punch out][Punch out]

The actual rating of this book is 1 star Provincial Liu: The protagonist can tear apart the void and travel through the world, but the ability can only be determined by the indigenous people. There were not many such articles ten years ago [face covering]

The white-haired Ang woke up and looked at the black hole in the distance with a confused expression, as well as the purple-haired girl sitting beside him eating a peach. Ang: "Uh." Huang Quan looked at him: "Are you awake?" Ang: "You are... And I am?" Huang Quan stood up and walked: "Just call me Huang Quan. As for your name, I don't know... But you don't have to be restrained. In your words, I am a witch, a witch who represents nothingness." Ang: "No, I want to ask... Do we know each other?" Huang Quan stopped, looked at the white-haired Lai Yueang with his purple eyes, and then closed his eyes: "So that's it, you were deprived of the color of existence - the reason why you met me now is because you are already on the other side of nothingness." Ang: "???" Huang Quan walked up: "As long as it existed, there will be traces. Go ask those traces, what happened to you?" Ang was confused and then had a headache: "Gluttony... Being eaten..." Huang Quan held him down and shook his head: "Since it is difficult to recall, there is no need to recall." Huang Quan: "So, do you still remember your name?" After a while, Ang was confused: "I don't know, I can't remember anything..." Huang Quan was silent: "That's it. Even your name was taken away. No wonder you came to the other side..." Huang Quan closed his eyes: "I see... Death returns... Then, let's walk again with our own feet." Ang: "Huh??? Death returns??" Huang Quan: "Well, this is the color I found in the traces you left. It may be related to your past, but this power will be ineffective under the shroud of nothingness, that is, it will be meaningless - but it is precisely because it has existed that it has that meaning. Perhaps it is your own power or a gift of love? However, those are all proof of your existence." Ang: "Hey, hey, why does this sound so weird!" Huang Quan: "Nothing strange. Now, I will draw my sword and let your power take effect again. Then, [Nothingness] will accompany you, but don't be nervous, because you will eventually regain the meaning of existence." Huang Quan threw the peach-like fruit to Ang. Ang: "Oh, thank you... Bah, bah, bah, why is it so spicy!!! Water, water!!!" Huang Quan smiled: "That means you can still feel the rights in the world..." In an instant, the space turned into black and white, Huang Quan took a step forward, and then in the blink of an eye, the high chest pie spurted out blood. Ang: "Uh... Ah... It hurts..." Huang Quan had already retracted the knife at this time and stood behind Ang. Looking at Ang: "Remember, don't look back. There is no way out where you came from." This is the new segment of the Gluttony Line branch "Virtual Wireless" Just write it for fun, don't take it seriously

Personally, I don't think it's too bad, it's just a little bit cool but it doesn't hinder viewing. It's just that I'm very curious about when I can enter the main line. According to the current 100 chapters, there will be 200 to 300 chapters by the time I won't enter the main line in 7 years. Of course, this is just my curiosity. I can still give it five stars. There are too many articles now that are all about AI. There are not many like this anymore. The point is that I hope that when I wake up tomorrow, the author can release 100 chapters.

There are very few good Tomato re0 fan works and little traffic. Although this one has some minor flaws, it's not bad. I'd like to support it with five stars.

At present, it seems that it is better than 90% of re0 fan fiction by not following the original path.

Overall it's pretty good, but some details still need to be polished. Just write the description normally and don't commit the literary disease.

It looks good, but the quantity is too small.

It is considered a high-quality re fanfic on Tomato. There is no problem with the narrative, the pace is relatively slow, and everything is fine. There are no big problems. The problem is that it is updated once a day. What are you going to do [laughs]

Why is no one reading such a delicious book😭😭😭

Money maker, update quickly! ! !

He's actually an old author

Hey, look good and take care of yourself

By the way, who are the heroines in this book [Adoration]

A rare good fan

When does volume three start?

There are not many good-looking people Not as good as the last one

It's pretty good, but there's too little written about it.

It seems pretty good so far, you can watch it

It's a different approach from the original work. The current writing is quite good, but there are few people.

Nice! The writing style is generally a bit wordy when explaining, and there are a bit too many adjectives. It's very interesting and very good. The writing is not good but it's a bit wordy in the early stages. After leaving Watergate City, it got much better. Not bad, not bad, very good. A very good re0. There is also the character of Priscilla, which is understandable. After all, she is only 13, and there are still seven years before the main plot.

It looks good. The male protagonist is quite comfortable in life. By the way, is the female protagonist Ram and a princess? Single girl or multiple girls? [What] [Adoration] [Adoration]

The identification is complete, no problem

Shen Nong tasted it and found it edible.