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Personally, I feel that the heroine is very good in all aspects in the beginning, but when it comes to the plot point of killing the dragon, I feel that the heroine is a bit strange. She clearly knows that she has been deducted 150 points for killing the dragon. She also knows that the 150 points are deducted and not all earned by herself. The points were earned by other students, but she knew that after the protagonist group deducted 200 points, they not only told them how to get back the 200 points, but also gave the protagonist group things that originally belonged to Ravenclaw. First of all, as a student of Ravenclaw, she first knowingly When you can score, you don't make up for your lost points first, but choose to help the protagonist group. This feels very strange and quite disgusting, but overall it is okay, but for people who don't like the protagonist group, this book may not be very popular. I like it, but I personally think the author's writing is pretty good. I hope the author will not deviate from the heroine's personality when writing the heroine, and don't blindly want to help the protagonist group. The heroine must be the main focus, so I will give it five stars and hope the author can continue to work hard.

It's not without reason that Flame accepted the protagonist. She is even more indifferent than Fuli Lillian, as indifferent as a bystander, and has less human side than a certain elf.

The author writes well, and the plot is very exciting. It integrates the three world views in the setting very well. The stories about Fulilian and the monster hunting world interspersed in the middle are very attractive. It makes me look forward to the stories that happen in the other two worlds. I hope to see these stories [Sending Hearts] enmm, I would like to make some suggestions. Some of the words used by the author can be slightly changed. After all, it is a female channel, and most of the readers are female. The application of "boys" and "boys and girls" can be more rigorous, because many people now use these words improperly because of poison. You may lose some readers because of this. Strictly It's always better to be more cautious [Chigua] And that doesn't mean you can't use "boy" to refer to men. Considering the protagonist's previous Japanese background, you can actually use "boy" to refer to young men when talking to others. However, if it is a completely Chinese narration (that is, the author's language), it is better to use "boys" and "boys and girls" [Chigua] ⭕Save traffic: It is recommended to refer to other people in adolescence as "boys and girls" and "teenagers" to retain more readers

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It's a good-looking, rare subject, but it feels weird. Killing a dragon and getting injured so seriously didn't give my sister any role. She didn't even express her anger and worry about her sister, or control her sister so she can't do it next time? I know I want to write more scenes close to the protagonist, but in this world, the person closest to the heroine is still her sister, right? After all, they are the people who know each other best in this world. I hope to describe more about the family's concern for the heroine, or what Ravenclaw has left for his daughter to do when she returns.

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If it's not Gemen, why has it been removed from the shelves?

Why did the book arrive? It says it has been removed from the shelves.

The character of the protagonist fits her setting very well. I think the author handled it very well. The protagonist has been transformed into a flesh-and-blood person. You can clearly feel the character and thinking mode of the protagonist. Needless to say, just look at my ratings

It's very beautiful, the narrative is clear and the writing is smooth.

There are no problems so far, the pace is quite fast, but the latest chapter feels difficult to handle, let's see how the author handles it.

A very good one among HP fanfics👍🏻 The heroine is invincible throughout the whole process and will not be wronged👍🏻 There are sufficient explanations for the settings of Monster Hunter and Fulian. The most important thing is to grasp the "degree" and not let these two settings "take the spotlight". 👍🏻 On the basis of "restoration", he added his own ingenuity and changed the fate of the "original world". It's a good attempt, but it still depends on how Isaac operates later, so I won't comment for now.

Why does it show that it has been removed from the shelves? !

Hope this book is back on the shelves.

I haven't watched it for a few days, why am I so private [crying]

It looks good, and it combines all kinds of IPs that I like. I hope I can write it longer and don't stop updating it. I've read several excellent female channel HP articles and I've stopped updating them [face covering]

Author, the plot behind you is really weird, you know?

The author's name was released after his reincarnation

Has the author ever thought about writing about the plot of watching the movies Frillian World and Monster Hunter World?

Okay, why does it have to be five words?

It's a pity that it's rare for a novel to feature both Monster Hunter and Harry Potter to be removed from the shelves.

Haokang Aikang Duolai

Hey, why are you dead [crying] [crying]

Alas, we are related by relatives, not a magician who is outside the world. Okay, pretty good-looking

Fine. There's nothing wrong with the protagonist's character

A passer-by in a different world, yet involved in it. Good

The storm is coming, na na

Good luck to the author!

It's really good

Super pretty! Come on!