Black Bullet: I Picked up a Cute Loli at the Beginning

In fact, it should be three stars, but the subject matter is good, what can I say about the protagonist... If I give you a chance, you will not be able to use it, and you will not even think about how to use it. In the early stage, it was difficult to say that there was a famous sword, which was stronger (and only had one hand).

The setting is well established, and some missing plot points are clearly written. Unlike anime, many things are introduced or deleted at once. It would be great if the world view can be expanded later, come on.

It's okay, at least the label is clearly written, it's so nice.

The original work was completely overturned, and it's amazing to be able to write a finale.

This can be considered a fanfic about the black bullet, I look forward to it.

It's okay. I can barely watch it. I hope that the male protagonist will be able to stand up in the later stages. Is there any other system like this? It doesn't even have a points mall. I've thought of everything in the points mall for you. Gastrula serum: allows the gastroenterovirus to increase and decrease the erosion degree at will according to the will of the injected person. Invasion When the eclipse reaches 50%, it can turn into a gastrula corresponding to its own factors. At the same time, it can maintain human consciousness and can switch freely between humans and gastrula. There is a probability that animal characteristics corresponding to its own factors will appear, but the animal characteristics can be displayed or hidden at will according to the wishes of the injected person. Let Rin have a pair of furry ears and a furry tail. This is so cute. It can also hide the animal characteristics according to its mood. In order to prevent unnecessary misunderstandings, it can also turn into a wolf. But this system is the same as the NPC that dispatches tasks. The way to score points is not just the old routine, kill gastrea animals and complete system tasks. If it doesn't work, you can also learn from the "I Level Up Alone" system, which also has daily tasks.

First of all, let me talk about the conclusion. The book is very good. The author's writing has improved very quickly. There are three or four chapters in the early stage, which may be transitional sections, but the later parts are very interesting. As long as each character appears in the original work, the author will illustrate it, which is super good. So far, it is true that there is no knife. Although the author said that the combat power is overwhelming, it is true that all those who should be saved have been saved. Nowadays, I really can't trust the ratings of Tomato. I read an original version before and it got a score of 9.3, But in the end I only had to write dialogues... The overall score of this book in the early stage can be given to 8 points, and when it gets better in the later stage, it can be given to 9 points. Considering that there are only two fanfics about Pitch Black Bullets on Tomatoes (the other one is even smaller and I haven't read it), this book is a must-see for book lovers who want to read related genres.

The start of the flight and time travel is super interesting, and the white-haired cat girl foreshadows a surprise

It's a very good book. The content is written in detail. I have also read the original book or anime carefully. The characters are very distinct, which makes up for a lot of regrets. The whole text is thoughtful and the language description is also good. I just didn't see who the heroine was [what]

A very interesting book that interprets the story from different perspectives!

I respect the original work very much. I basically followed the original work and added my own ideas. It looks good.

Let's read together [laughter] It's a very good fanfic

The writing is actually not very good, but it looks very comfortable.

The single female protagonist has delicate emotions, and her interaction with Loli is very heartwarming.

Lin Yu's rhythm of completing stage tasks and getting rewards is very comfortable. Without procrastination, he can't stop chasing updates!

Super beautiful, wonderful, worth reading

The growth flow of Lin Yu slowly getting stronger is super real, unlike other cool stories that cheat too hard, what you can see is this process!

The rhythm of Lin Yu's slow development is perfect for reading carefully. Unlike fast food stories, the more you read, the more interesting it becomes!

It's a rare dark bullet theme. Overall, there's nothing wrong with it. The plot is smooth and the loli is very cute. Well, very cute.

Give a five-star support! If you write fast and feel happy, there won't be much to write about; if you write slow, if you write unhappy, not many people will read it. . .

Single female protagonist + multiple lolita, the system tasks gradually become stronger, good-looking

I quite like the concept and ideas of this book. From the beginning of the story to the character description of the male protagonist, it is very good. There are some interactions and some warm plots in it. Please write this novel down.

Keep up the good work, brother who writes black bombs

Come on, brother who wrote Black Bullet

Beautiful, love watching. It was a long time ago that I watched Black Bullet, and it reminded me of the feeling of watching it in the past.

The plot and writing are very good, this book must be five stars!

Adoption in the crisis of the original intestine world, the system tasks are interlocking, it's beautiful

The rhythm of the story is very well controlled and there is a certain amount of relaxation.

The world view is very complete, full of details, and you can feel the great care

Survival in the apocalypse, healing and raising a baby, Feilong Aotian becomes more and more exciting the more you watch it!