Help! A Nobody's Persona Crumbles, Revealing an Esports God

It's so beautiful. It's so beautiful. The pretty little girl can't wait to sing a song. So majestic. So majestic… The detailed description of the game makes the little girl cry out in awe, hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha! Leave a lady-like response... (O^^o) Dear fellow Taoists, see you in the world.

I have read Chapter 50 and overall it is very good. The only thing that makes me feel a little bad is Duan Lingyi's strength level. I feel that it is a bit ooc in the previous life. First of all, he was a world-class mid laner who played for five years in the past life. He led his teammates to the World Championship with one drag and four and was the domestic champion. Based on this, he has absolutely rich experience in the field and his personal strength is absolutely tough. However, while reading, I found that many times I felt that he was just a newcomer. He was just very talented. He was also the captain. The overall battle idea is absolutely clear. Secondly, the team he was in in his previous life was highly commercialized and his teammates were not focused on the game. Therefore, when opponents play against such a team, they will definitely focus on him. He will resist pressure and will definitely not be targeted less, so his pressure resistance must not be weak. When I read it, I still feel the same as before. He was weakened a bit too much. It is understandable that the author wants to reflect the growth of this team, but Lingyi must have played against many strong teams like FG. I think his personal experience is enough for him to deal with Yaoye. At least two people at a 50-50 ratio are no problem. If the problem arises in the teamwork, the logic may be smoother. Of course, the overall situation is good, but this point makes me feel that the perception is poor. However, seeing that it is the first time for the teacher to write an article, I still need to praise it. The plot is smooth and paced without lag, and some commonly used vocabulary in competitions are also correct. It can be seen that the author has done his homework. I have read an article before and the author can't figure out the turn system. The teacher's group portrait is also good. Overall, there are not many problems. I hope that more people can read this article. Thinking about it, I decided not to rate it too high. It was because the protagonist's collapse was too serious. After a long time, I came back to change the rating. I didn't watch much after that. The sense of fragmentation was too severe. The settings of the previous life were completely eaten up. Let me clear it up for everyone.

Very nice e-sports articlewww Xiao Lingyun and the captain really feel like they have bumped into each other's hobbies. Their game coordination and some small details give people a feeling of oh my God, what is this? Is this love at first sight🥺🥺🥺Why are these two so perfect for each other? OMG, they are like soul mates born in heaven. I can't imagine how deeply the two parties will fall into this kind of love and how much they will love each other🥺🥺🥺 Xiao Lingyun's character really pokes my XP. The previous live broadcast was really cold, Zuo Bo, I'll brush it up for you🎁Zi Bo, can you say a few more words of thanks?

How to put it this way, I thought it was okay after watching half of it, but it was a little rough in some places. The change of the protagonist was a bit stiff, and the collision between the protagonists was not very obvious. Most of them were expressed with some adjectives and psychological descriptions rather than through narration and getting along. (It's not that there is no narration here, but the development of the two people is too fast. It feels like the kind of online dating that lasts for an hour and breaks up in three days. It's not bad, but it doesn't seem so three-dimensional and vivid). The image of the protagonist is not very three-dimensional. I think some small things can be described appropriately. For example, the protagonist has no money in the early stage. He walks to an Internet cafe, sweat and complex emotions in his heart leave traces together. He is unyielding, and there is a sense of distance between his brows that cannot be provoked. The roar of a car and a faint meow are heard. He sees an embarrassed stray cat. He seems to be spurned by the world and people just like this poor stray cat. He spends his only two dollars to buy it a piece of ham. It embodies the true nature of the protagonist. He is strong and cold on the outside but retains a softness in his heart. It can also highlight the difficulties in the early stage and provide a contrast to the subsequent treatment. However, I also praise the five yuan Internet fee written by the author, which is very sad. The next ten days or so were recounted in one stroke, giving people an unreal feeling. It is recommended that you write down a short paragraph of memories, next plans, and compare them with the actual development (write less but a little bit is good [sending heartfelt messages]) This should be the author's first book and can be said to be good overall. There are no major flaws. However, you should pay attention to some small flaws. Don't be too hasty. The plot cannot develop too fast. There should be more writing in some places, otherwise it will give people a feeling of unsmoothness. A simple description can outline a story, and the increase in details can make the story more exciting. I hope you will continue to work hard and let subsequent stories depict more beautiful colors. The half-hour long code gives the above suggestions, comments and reading insights. In short: the baby is great, I hope it will be even better [love] [love] [love]

It's really beautiful. Both babies are good babies and well-behaved. The atmosphere in the team is also very warm. There is no intrigue. There is the passion for the game, the regret of the veteran retiring, the funny team interaction, and the little lovers secretly spreading sweets. The characters are vivid and have a strong sense of immersion. I hope you won't be too tired. I hope this book can be read by more people. I hope the writing will remain the same until the end (I don't want it to be unfinished) (｡í _ ì｡). I hope the young lovers can support each other and encourage each other. I hope that in the third dimension, we can also be lucky enough to meet our beloved and live a happy life ('▽') That's right! The description of the article is very detailed. The tactical analysis, skill release, combat description, etc. Are all very good. It is not empty. It has a strong game atmosphere, which is very good. ⌯Oᴗo⌯

Yeah, that's right, it's beautiful The sword is out of its sheath~ The grudges are gone~ Who is laughing at me? I only want this day~ I hold you in my arms. The wind in the Red Dust Inn is like a knife, the rain falls, and fate strikes~ No matter who is the leader in the martial arts, I only bend my waist for you~ The girl guesses how Xiaosheng typed this text, it was sung. I wonder if Xiaosheng's singing can impress the girl. In fact, when I was slapped by a teacher, the first thing that came over me was the scent, and then the slap. The moment the aroma fills your nose, the burning feeling on your face is no longer painful, but refreshing.

To be honest, I think it's quite interesting. I've also read a lot of e-sports articles, all of them with two male protagonists. I feel that the characters in them have distinct personalities, but some of the characters' characteristics are not highlighted and are easily overlooked. However, the e-sports content is very rich and the emotions in the content are very rich. It is worth reading. What I feel is a pity that the rating is relatively low. Most people will ignore this article because of its frequent use. I hope the author will continue to update it. I will also recommend this article to my friends. Cheers to the author (ง ˙o˙)ว, but you should also take a good rest (≧∇≦) [love] [love]

The author's writing style is clear. I personally feel that the author's writing is very real. The characters in the author's writing are very good. I can feel it with my heart without realizing it. I will shed tears because the protagonist is hurt. In my opinion, this is a good article. The plot alone is very attractive. Anyway, it attracted me. So, author, keep up the good work and support you! ! [Shy][shy]

This book is really beautiful! ! ! I just got a little obsessed with e-sports articles recently. I originally saw that the rating of this book was a bit low, so I didn't want to read it, but as soon as I read it, I read it all the way through! ! ! Really nice to look at! ! ! [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss] Well, the characters in it are really charming, so I really love Ling Shen and Cang Lan. Bai Xing is a cold-faced cute, really cute. The confrontation between Chu Yue and Gui Yan is also very interesting. Really, this e-sports article is really good, but I didn't expect that his rating is a bit low, but it is really good-looking. The author's writing style is also good, and then the one about the competition also made me excited. , I went. It's really beautiful. I highly recommend it. [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]

ฅ(⌯͒•̩̩̩́ ˑ̫ •̩̩̩̀⌯͒)ฅ TKyyds We at TK are completely from home. And every pair of cps is very warm They will respect each other and won't expose each other's wounds They will gently hold up each other's broken souls Before we even knew our true identities, we decided to stay together no matter what. Yes, I know it's painful, so I don't want to make you suffer. My hands are full and I'm using everything to buy you. Ahhhhhhhhhhhh kswl I hope that the little bitter gourds in the book will be sure Happily ever after All young lovers should be sweet! ! ! ˃̣̣̥᷄⌓˂̣̣̥᷅ (Will our Baixing extra story continue? Little Baixing must be happy)