Help! the Stupid Guy Turned into an Esports Guru

It's so beautiful. It's so beautiful. The pretty little girl can't wait to sing a song. So majestic. So majestic… The detailed description of the game makes the little girl cry out in awe, hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha! Leave a lady-like response... (O^^o) Dear fellow Taoists, see you in the world.

I have read Chapter 50 and overall it is very good. The only thing that makes me feel a little bad is Duan Lingyi's strength level. I feel that it is a bit ooc in the previous life. First of all, he was a world-class mid laner who played for five years in the past life. He led his teammates to the World Championship with one drag and four and was the domestic champion. Based on this, he has absolutely rich experience in the field and his personal strength is absolutely tough. However, while reading, I found that many times I felt that he was just a newcomer. He was just very talented. He was also the captain. The overall battle idea is absolutely clear. Secondly, the team he was in in his previous life was highly commercialized and his teammates were not focused on the game. Therefore, when opponents play against such a team, they will definitely focus on him. He will resist pressure and will definitely not be targeted less, so his pressure resistance must not be weak. When I read it, I still feel the same as before. He was weakened a bit too much. It is understandable that the author wants to reflect the growth of this team, but Lingyi must have played against many strong teams like FG. I think his personal experience is enough for him to deal with Yaoye. At least two people at a 50-50 ratio are no problem. If the problem arises in the teamwork, the logic may be smoother. Of course, the overall situation is good, but this point makes me feel that the perception is poor. However, seeing that it is the first time for the teacher to write an article, I still need to praise it. The plot is smooth and paced without lag, and some commonly used vocabulary in competitions are also correct. It can be seen that the author has done his homework. I have read an article before and the author can't figure out the turn system. The teacher's group portrait is also good. Overall, there are not many problems. I hope that more people can read this article. Thinking about it, I decided not to rate it too high. It was because the protagonist's collapse was too serious. After a long time, I came back to change the rating. I didn't watch much after that. The sense of fragmentation was too severe. The settings of the previous life were completely eaten up. Let me clear it up for everyone.

Very nice e-sports articlewww Xiao Lingyun and the captain really feel like they have bumped into each other's hobbies. Their game coordination and some small details give people a feeling of oh my God, what is this? Is this love at first sight🥺🥺🥺Why are these two so perfect for each other? OMG, they are like soul mates born in heaven. I can't imagine how deeply the two parties will fall into this kind of love and how much they will love each other🥺🥺🥺 Xiao Lingyun's character really pokes my XP. The previous live broadcast was really cold, Zuo Bo, I'll brush it up for you🎁Zi Bo, can you say a few more words of thanks?

It's really beautiful. Both babies are good babies and well-behaved. The atmosphere in the team is also very warm. There is no intrigue. There is the passion for the game, the regret of the veteran retiring, the funny team interaction, and the little lovers secretly spreading sweets. The characters are vivid and have a strong sense of immersion. I hope you won't be too tired. I hope this book can be read by more people. I hope the writing will remain the same until the end (I don't want it to be unfinished) (｡í _ ì｡). I hope the young lovers can support each other and encourage each other. I hope that in the third dimension, we can also be lucky enough to meet our beloved and live a happy life ('▽') That's right! The description of the article is very detailed. The tactical analysis, skill release, combat description, etc. Are all very good. It is not empty. It has a strong game atmosphere, which is very good. ⌯Oᴗo⌯

How to put it this way, I thought it was okay after watching half of it, but it was a little rough in some places. The change of the protagonist was a bit stiff, and the collision between the protagonists was not very obvious. Most of them were expressed with some adjectives and psychological descriptions rather than through narration and getting along. (It's not that there is no narration here, but the development of the two people is too fast. It feels like the kind of online dating that lasts for an hour and breaks up in three days. It's not bad, but it doesn't seem so three-dimensional and vivid). The image of the protagonist is not very three-dimensional. I think some small things can be described appropriately. For example, the protagonist has no money in the early stage. He walks to an Internet cafe, sweat and complex emotions in his heart leave traces together. He is unyielding, and there is a sense of distance between his brows that cannot be provoked. The roar of a car and a faint meow are heard. He sees an embarrassed stray cat. He seems to be spurned by the world and people just like this poor stray cat. He spends his only two dollars to buy it a piece of ham. It embodies the true nature of the protagonist. He is strong and cold on the outside but retains a softness in his heart. It can also highlight the difficulties in the early stage and provide a contrast to the subsequent treatment. However, I also praise the five yuan Internet fee written by the author, which is very sad. The next ten days or so were recounted in one stroke, giving people an unreal feeling. It is recommended that you write down a short paragraph of memories, next plans, and compare them with the actual development (write less but a little bit is good [sending heartfelt messages]) This should be the author's first book and can be said to be good overall. There are no major flaws. However, you should pay attention to some small flaws. Don't be too hasty. The plot cannot develop too fast. There should be more writing in some places, otherwise it will give people a feeling of unsmoothness. A simple description can outline a story, and the increase in details can make the story more exciting. I hope you will continue to work hard and let subsequent stories depict more beautiful colors. The half-hour long code gives the above suggestions, comments and reading insights. In short: the baby is great, I hope it will be even better [love] [love] [love]

Yeah, that's right, it's beautiful The sword is out of its sheath~ The grudges are gone~ Who is laughing at me? I only want this day~ I hold you in my arms. The wind in the Red Dust Inn is like a knife, the rain falls, and fate strikes~ No matter who is the leader in the martial arts, I only bend my waist for you~ The girl guesses how Xiaosheng typed this text, it was sung. I wonder if Xiaosheng's singing can impress the girl. In fact, when I was slapped by a teacher, the first thing that came over me was the scent, and then the slap. The moment the aroma fills your nose, the burning feeling on your face is no longer painful, but refreshing.

The author's writing style is clear. I personally feel that the author's writing is very real. The characters in the author's writing are very good. I can feel it with my heart without realizing it. I will shed tears because the protagonist is hurt. In my opinion, this is a good article. The plot alone is very attractive. Anyway, it attracted me. So, author, keep up the good work and support you! ! [Shy][shy]

To be honest, I think it's quite interesting. I've also read a lot of e-sports articles, all of them with two male protagonists. I feel that the characters in them have distinct personalities, but some of the characters' characteristics are not highlighted and are easily overlooked. However, the e-sports content is very rich and the emotions in the content are very rich. It is worth reading. What I feel is a pity that the rating is relatively low. Most people will ignore this article because of its frequent use. I hope the author will continue to update it. I will also recommend this article to my friends. Cheers to the author (ง ˙o˙)ว, but you should also take a good rest (≧∇≦) [love] [love]

This book is really beautiful! ! ! I just got a little obsessed with e-sports articles recently. I originally saw that the rating of this book was a bit low, so I didn't want to read it, but as soon as I read it, I read it all the way through! ! ! Really nice to look at! ! ! [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss] Well, the characters in it are really charming, so I really love Ling Shen and Cang Lan. Bai Xing is a cold-faced cute, really cute. The confrontation between Chu Yue and Gui Yan is also very interesting. Really, this e-sports article is really good, but I didn't expect that his rating is a bit low, but it is really good-looking. The author's writing style is also good, and then the one about the competition also made me excited. , I went. It's really beautiful. I highly recommend it. [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]

ฅ(⌯͒•̩̩̩́ ˑ̫ •̩̩̩̀⌯͒)ฅ TKyyds We at TK are completely from home. And every pair of cps is very warm They will respect each other and won't expose each other's wounds They will gently hold up each other's broken souls Before we even knew our true identities, we decided to stay together no matter what. Yes, I know it's painful, so I don't want to make you suffer. My hands are full and I'm using everything to buy you. Ahhhhhhhhhhhh kswl I hope that the little bitter gourds in the book will be sure Happily ever after All young lovers should be sweet! ! ! ˃̣̣̥᷄⌓˂̣̣̥᷅ (Will our Baixing extra story continue? Little Baixing must be happy)

Madam, Madam, is so good. A new e-sports novel made my blood boil with excitement. [Adoration] [Adoration] [Admiration] Author, please come on, I will always be behind you! ! ! [Anger][Anger][Anger][]~(￣▽￣)~*

I'm not sure what to say, but it's good-looking. The descriptions of the characters are very specific. You can intuitively feel some of Honor's character traits while watching. The overall plot is also very good. All in all, it's good-looking. Maybe I lost my brain after the high school entrance exam and now I don't know what to say😃

It's beautiful, the description of the characters' emotions is very detailed, and you can clearly feel the changes in the protagonist's mood [Blow a kiss] The game part is also very touching, and you will be a little excited when you see the exciting parts [Sending my heart] Big boost to the author! I hope to see TK win the world championship, and I also hope that Duan Zai will continue to shine on the road of e-sports [laughs]

The author's wife's writing is really great, very detailed, and the competition is really passionate and exciting. The protagonist is not a perfect person, and will have shortcomings. The baby must keep writing (the chapter where the protagonist won the competition and gave it to Canglan in the hospital bed, the writing made me drop little pearls)

Yes, it's interesting, but I want to know whether the protagonist will change from a substitute to a starter later on. And which chapter is the chapter where he becomes a starter? I'll start reading from that chapter. I can't understand that one side is a substitute in an e-sports article.

Halfway through, I felt a little frustrated. I said I would not be a substitute, but later I was a substitute. I was threatened by my former agent, and then I became a substitute. It was a bit hasty. This is my own point of view. Overall, it is good. You can read this novel. If you don't care about this, it will be very good.

Very nice [blowing kiss] Dear author, you are sincere, brave and kind. You are very cute and have a good personality. You are such a great person. You are the most worthy and best person in the world. By the way, do you still have any manuscripts in your draft box?

This article makes me feel good about myself. Let's talk about the shortcomings first. In my opinion, the main character's mentality in the early and late stages can also be said to have changed too much. As the protagonist Shou in the early stage is already an excellent e-sports player, I don't think he should be as fragile as he is in the later stage. And in some plot points, it is really difficult to think that he is an excellent e-sports player with quite mature skills. When I was watching the whole thing, I couldn't imagine him as an excellent e-sports player in his previous life. I could only imagine him as a new teenage player. It makes people feel uncomfortable. Other than that, I feel like there aren't any outrageous plot points in the entire article. The e-sports part is well written and gives people a thrilling feeling. The connection between the emotional line and the plot line is also great. Anyway, the whole story feels pretty good. It can be regarded as a very standard sweet novel. If the protagonist's character design was not so outrageous in the early and late stages, I think this article could be given five stars. I originally planned to give it three stars because the character breakdown made me feel a little uncomfortable, but because the author's emotional line and the interaction between the two people were well described, it made me excited to watch it. So I changed it to 4 stars. And the feeling of these emotional lines makes up for the shortcomings of the protagonist's personality. Personally, I feel this book is quite good. If you like sweet e-sports articles, you can read it.

What a nice e-sports article! Although I'm not very good at playing games, the part where the author wrote about the veteran's retirement made me excited. Ahhh, why did he update it so much! Totally not enough!

Sorry ky. I quite like this book, but I would like to ask the author if he has read "Almighty Mid Laner". Some of the content of this article is similar to "Almighty Mid Laner".

I've lived in vain for several years, but now I'm still like a child, using my attacks as life-saving straws [face covering] I'm an adult on the inside, and I don't have the ability to solve problems. Can't you start as a starter now that you're done with the novel? You're forced to choose a substitute and you still have to endure it. The game itself is quite well written, and I can feel that the main character is very capable.

[Love] Most of Haokan Tomato's e-sports articles are not very good. This one is really good-looking. There are some details that other e-sports stores don't like. It's my personal opinion, because most of those I read are fictional literature. What I want to read is the kind of two-strong e-sports. This one is very good. Anyway, I like [] [] [] [] [] Come on, the author (ง •̀_•́)ง It's also possible that most of what I wrote is just fiction. The author's writing is really detailed and very beautiful.

It looks good, Zuo Lan looks like a guiding lover, and Ling Bao is a naughty (I may not be able to find the words to describe it) inner conflict. Anyway, yyds

It's really beautiful. I can feel the happiness and joy every time I see them win a game, whether it's a training match or a regular game. I feel like I've always been with them, winning games and championships together. I have an inexplicable sense of pride₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑

Well, this book is very well written. He gave the protagonist a chance to know himself, and every choice he made was logical. From a lone wolf at the beginning to a true understanding in the end, he integrated the passion for e-sports into himself. Because in the beginning, 1 drag 4 created star players. At first, it was just his love for this arena, and later it turned into a deeper understanding of the e-sports industry. Yeah, it's pretty good-looking, and the writing is good. The story line is okay.

The sense of substitution is very strong, and the emotional line is very well written. The two protagonists each have their own advantages, and they are not adults in their previous lives, so they should be calm in this life. I think people's personalities are inherently changeable, and people's personalities will be different in different situations. Some books are very fragmented, but the transition in this book is not so fragmented, and it is very comfortable to read.

Awesome! The pace is not very fast, but there are plenty of twists and turns. It's very comfortable to watch, they are all good teammates, great hot-blooded teenagers. When I was talking about a short section about resisting the team, I got confused! Hot-blooded. There is no loss in investing, come and see, come and see!

The relationship between the two protagonists is still heart-warming, and there is a sub-CP, but it is not obtrusive in it, and there is no feeling of being overshadowed. It is still ok to watch as a whole, and the e-sports part is also ok. It is not about winning blindly, there is growth in losing and winning, and it can be watched by newcomers to the game. There will be no incomprehension. Overall, it is recommended to watch.

It's really good to watch, the plot progresses very naturally, and the characters have distinct personalities. Even though I don't play games very much, I couldn't stop reading it from chapter to chapter. In addition, I am a fan of Chu Yue, and I wish all young lovers a 99! ! ! You all treat me well! ! !

It took me a few hours to read it, and I feel like the characters have fallen apart a bit, but everyone's characters and CP are still very good. I thought Gui Yan was the kind of gentle person, but it turns out that he is a poisonous guy, and Ling Yun is so cute and cute. But it's still very interesting, and the chapters are not long, so it's suitable for people like me who don't have the heart to follow the trap! I really like Shirahoshi! However, I really didn't expect Bai Xing to retire, but it's good that Bai Xing is happy, and that Lan Ling and Gui Yan Yueying are happy!