After Backstabbing My Teammates, I Turned into an Abyss Girl

Looks good! No system, great writing on combat! Daily life does take up most of the space, and this part is also very well written! Both parties support and rely on each other. This is the essence of the novel "One Body, Two Souls". The author really writes this very well. Both souls play a vital role, which is better than many novels about "One Body, Two Souls". In terms of emotional lines: two words: so delicious! It's really well written and has the flavor of mutual redemption. The only bad thing is that in the early stage, when the male protagonist's soul just gained control of the female protagonist's body, all his clothes were gone because he had just finished a fight, and he was seen by two or three people. After a little patience, he got over it. The subsequent plot is absolutely beautiful! In Chapter 118, the male protagonist's soul temporarily turned into a female shape due to the cat clan's secret technique, and then he changed to Lily Wen.

Hahahaha, my own book is guaranteed to receive good reviews [laughing evilly]

I didn't have anything to say, so I just found a random paragraph in the clipboard. Author update soon The author's soul returns... 𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌 The soul returns... Driving the long whip and setting up the six bridles... 𓀌𓀎𓀠𓀤𓀫 The soul is back... Crossing the mountain and singing... The soul is back... The soul is back... 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠 The soul returns... Sings high and triumphant... We share the same robe and enjoy the glory... 𓀋𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫 The soul is back... The soul is back... 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌𓀀𓀁𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌

For those who were attracted by the title of the book, the first 150 chapters can be regarded as a romance, and the separation afterward is a normal love. However, when the author decided to write about a normal love, he wrote in the introduction that it was not Lily who was deceived. The number of readers has dropped from 10,000 to 20,000 to the current level. The writing is very good and the only drawback is that it did not remind Lily from the beginning. Five-star recommendation.

The plot is quite good, and the novel reflects family, friendship, and love. The characters are rich in creations, such as the arrogant girl from the abyss, Ye Xi who protects her brother, Xiao Lizi who values love and justice... I feel that the growth process of the protagonist is not written (how to grow from weak to strong, and to grow from loss). If the protagonist starts from the first level, this process may be better written. I feel that the rhythm of the plot is a bit fast. In fact, they recognize the time and can push it back. The relationship line feels okay. After all, it's normal for a person to stay in that place for five years and then share a body with another person.

It's interesting. I write 20,000 words a day. Will I update like this tomorrow? [Sinister smile]

It's good to read, and the back part is really sweet. You don't have to worry about the update now, but there are so few people [crying] [crying] [crying] I don't have many such good-looking books in my bookshelf [crying] I beg the author not to stop updating the book [crying] I think I need the author to promise not to cut the book ☝😡It's so beautiful that I can't cut it [smiles]

It's very comfortable to watch, and the memes and other game elements are inserted appropriately, not too much, not too little. Gu Gu Gu Gu, it's so shameless. It's a pity that I can't see it.

This book is very good, full of potential and good news. Also, I want to elbow the film. I regard the abyss as driftwood, block the bridge, and give secret signals to trick rats and mice into coming out to fight.

Despite the low rating, it's super pretty

Just like Peilo, I hope the same tragedy will not happen, and I hope the protagonist can protect what he wants to protect.

I finally found a good book called "One Body, Two Souls" [Adoration]

It looks good, come on author [laughs]

If he writes so well, he must be following the abyss (torturing the author)

Well, I thought it was Lily when I saw the title of the book, but when I saw the word "he" was used later, Lily was tricked into coming in and killed [crying]

It's not easy to find the two souls of the original body again. Come on, author, don't stop updating.

A very interesting article, it is a funny article. The author doesn't care about gifts, as long as you write a book review for it, √ rough wrist, stop reading novels and making porridge, go to code

Why is this book okay but there is no traffic [Thinking]

Woo woo Peilo [crying] The author must write this book better. I cried too many times when I saw the abyss [face covering]

Aston rushed home to watch it.

Okay, give me some encouragement

Very interesting, I especially like to see that kind of thing Although I still want to evaluate it objectively. It is a very daily novel. The emotional line is very straightforward, and the progress is very fast. I feel a little uncomfortable. The rest is fine. I hope the author can grasp the scale later.

Five-star support [like]

Very pretty, I like it 😍

The couple of landlord and tenant are quite sweet.

The early stage looks pretty good. The author's description is quite clear.

It's pretty good to watch, and there's nothing toxic about it. I don't know why no one is watching it. There's a lot of interaction between the male and female protagonists, the plot is pretty interesting, and the writing is also good.

Both the writing and the plot are very good [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

Unique flavor, delicious! !

It's okay, it's a sweet story, but there are some logical flaws in the early stages. It's quite interesting.