
After Teasing My Archrival to Death
戏弄死对头之后
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 254k Words
- Genre
- Two Male Leads
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Synopsis
Other names
- Secretly Crushing on a Player? His Rival Is About to Get Teased暗恋海王?那死对头可要被戏弄了Alternate title on Fanqie
114Chapters
506Reads
8.7Score
111Shelves
22Listens
59.9kReads · all time
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Neither of the two protagonists are perfect characters. Shen Zhuo was a Neptune in the early stage. He always fell in love because he lacked love in his heart. Until he met Jiang Lin, his life completely changed. And Jiang Lin's desire to control was too strong, which often made Shen Zhuo feel suffocated. In fact, they both lack a sense of security and pull and test each other emotionally. But fortunately, they both grew up in the end - one learned to take responsibility, and the other learned to let go. Overall, this is a sweet article. It may be a little sour in the middle, but it is definitely not abusive. Two imperfect people are trying to learn how to love, and both are good babies who deserve to be loved 💕💕
It's very beautiful. I was very impressed when I first read the introduction. I didn't expect it to be so well-written (it's a pity that not many people read this book? Is it because it's not finished?) It still feels a bit sadistic in some places (I don't cry very much personally). Anyway, it's very well written (the anchor won't praise people, but this book is really good, you can give it a try ଲ)
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It's so sweet, oh my god, it makes me squirm on the bed. Two words: good-looking and one word: sweet. The author's writing style is super good! Worth seeing! (´◊ω◊`)
It's so good🥰The author, keep up the good work. I finished reading it in one sitting. I hope Shou will find out soon that he likes to attack. ꈍ◡ꈍTwo very good babies. The author, please give it a try (❁´ω`❁). I finished reading it in one sitting hh`(*∩_∩*)′
It took almost three days to read this book, and I was still very sad 😢. The contributions of two people are equal, and their love is mutual. Shen Zhuo is a bright and passionate person who lacks love. Shen Zhuo needs to use a more extreme way to prove that the person needs him. He needs a tree that stays for him. He needs others to unswervingly choose him again and again. So Jiang Lin appeared. He fell in love with Shen Zhuo at first sight. Shen Zhuo was the perfect lover in his mind. He was insecure, possessive and controlling. He needs Shen Zhuo to be in front of him all the time. There is a plot where Jiang Lin imprisons Shen Zhuo. But because he loves her too much, he chooses to let go. Shen Zhuo can put the shackles on himself for Jiang Lin. 🥺 Let's not have this misunderstanding that was solved with great difficulty. Okay 🥺 Wish you a happy ending on October 23, 2025 Linzhuo99, happy wedding!
The early writing style really gives people a kind of unreserved and passionate love that is unique to young people, making people feel full of happiness. Even though there is a purpose behind it, under the very delicate and step-by-step writing style, people can also feel the process of pure love from getting close to falling in love with it. In the later stage, I might be confused because of that kind of thing. At the beginning, I didn't understand why he loved him, and he had to test the bottom line again and again. But in the later period, the author's writing style changed drastically. After experiencing deep love, he was willing to let go. After that paragraph, and then the overall emotional analysis later, I really had that kind of enlightenment. This emotion is so delicate. Both people are very conflicted and both want to love, but one is full of insecurity and the other doesn't believe that he doesn't love. So later on, when both of them expressed their intention to be together, I was completely satisfied. The layers accumulated in the early stages made the characters full-bodied and experienced rich experiences, which laid a solid foundation for the transformation in the later stages without any discomfort. The writing is very clear, and I understand that the best ones I have seen before are the ones that do not express emotions, but I also know the delicate feeling of their emotions hidden in the words. Step by step, very gentle. As for the author, well, the writing is very clear, and each series is analyzed, so that people can read it without having to use their brains. That kind of reading is very gentle. The author writes very carefully. The author's writing style is also very good, and his expression of words is very precise. It can accurately tell the relationship, thoughts, emotions, and various hints and details between two people, and then connect them all in the later stage. Because of the various connections in the early stage and the whole sweetness in the later period, although it was very short-lived, he was very satisfied when he saw that they really got married in the extra chapter and then moved towards the future together. The short description at the end of the text really gives people a sense of motivation and expectation for good things. That kind of splendid feeling as if you have really experienced thousands of rivers and mountains, and finally come together, with a touch of satisfaction and tenderness. This kind of writing style is really lovely.
I fell in love with this book ten times The first time was when I saw Shen Zhuo giving Jiang Lin a doll before the competition. The second time was when Jiang Lin saw pictures of Shen Zhuo, who was in the top ten of his grade at school. The third time was when Jiang Lin was jealous and Yu Nian was misunderstood by Shen Zhuo when talking to him. The fourth time was when I saw Shen Zhuo getting up early to accompany Jiang Lin in class for a bet and quietly painting Jiang Lin's profile. The fifth time was when the two officially kissed for the first time. The sixth time was when Jiang Lin took the initiative to apologize to Shen Zhuo for his behavior and improve it. The seventh time was when Shen Zhuo hugged Jiang Lin immediately after seeing him come home from get off work (although it was to escape) The eighth time was when I saw Jiang Lin setting off the fireworks upside down during the Chinese New Year and Shen Zhuo laughing heartily. The ninth time is to see them finally happily together The tenth time is now, I shed tears for their sufferings.
The characters are so full-bodied. Both of them are insecure and constantly testing, but they are willing to give up what they value most for the other, one is "freedom" and the other is "possession". I am so happy to see them happy.
I think the score of 7:3 for this book is definitely low. It's a really amazing work, and it's also the author's first work. The writing is very good and skillful. It's a perfect score in my opinion. The characters and themes are very novel.