Transformation Starts with Running with the Ball

Give you a 5-star review [Stare][Stare][Stare][Stare][Stare]

I just love watching this kind of curiosity and pure love

She's so beautiful, especially the father-in-law and mother-in-law. If you have a correct outlook on life, don't be too correct [face covering]

Author I like you

Author, I give you five stars, but I have a question: Is the novel world this complicated now? A new author can publish such a beautiful book. You are the third one I have met! ! ! ! [Cover face]

I don't even have so much embellishment in my writing [cover face][cover face][cover face][cover face]

The author writes very well. The inner psychological description of the protagonist is vivid and sincere. The male protagonist finally finds a suitable path to live with the female protagonist. It is no longer forced love, but warmth and tolerance. The female protagonist is not a canary, but a knowledgeable and upright wife. It looks like she is getting married, but she is actually a woman. This is a love story between a man and a woman due to an unexpected encounter. It shows the inner entanglements and conflicts of the heroine. Finally, the whole article is completed in a scene. The writing is very good and very romantic.

The writing is beautiful, but there are too many descriptions, and it feels like I'm reading an essay. But overall it's pretty good. It doesn't feel like a newcomer. Could it be that the author is the reincarnation of a certain big shot? [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

The author is awesome! !

There are too many descriptions of the environment. Appropriate ones can better reflect the essence of the novel.

The author's writing is good, I dropped little pearls when I read it [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

I like this kind of sweet article, but there are too many embellishments, which affects the perception.

The second time I was kidnapped, I felt a bit rebellious.

Good is very beautiful. The author's writing style is very good. It is simply a fairy tale!

It's very pretty, but it's just a little too little, not enough to look at [laughing]

The author's writing style is very good, there is nothing poisonous about it! I really enjoyed reading it, but there are too few chapters.

Well enough. Very nice

Aba Aba Aba

Beautiful, highly recommended

Can you use less modifiers [anger]?

It's pretty good, come on

I finished the plot in one go and it wasn't enough to watch, and then the updates continued after it was finished.

If no one gives you sunshine, give it to yourself

When did the hero know he was pregnant?

There are some parts that make me feel weird. Although I have only read a few chapters so far, the parts about the male protagonist always make me feel like AI.

The author's literary talent is very good, just like reading prose. Hydrological limits

I haven't seen you in a long time. I've been around Tomato too much and I've become ignorant. I really like the writing [cry][cry][cry]

Well, it's a very novel book, but it's a bit too heavy on details.

The content is lively, interesting, and funny. Although there are setbacks at the beginning, it is really exciting at the end [laughing]

Overall it's okay, but there are a lot of flaws, but the author is a novice after all, so it's very good to write like this.