As soon as I was born, I opened my crimson eyes and the midwife screamed in shock.
A kaleidoscope of dark light flashed in the eyes of his father Fugaku: "There is hope for Uchiha's revival!"
Five-year-old Itachi carefully touched my cheek: "Sasuke... I am my older brother."
Deep in the soul, a cold and huge force suddenly awakened, winding up like a poisonous snake.
I clenched the baby's little fist and shouted from the sea of consciousness: "Get out!"
That power is transcendent...
Reader comments
It's a bit boring. There's a ridiculous plot about Indra running from Itachi to Sasuke, and then the baby needs to practice chakra. If you practice it in advance, you can defeat Otsutsuki? You can get through it in one sentence, but you have written several chapters. Do readers want to see you practicing as a baby?
It's just so-so, a bit new, but there are few details that are the same as the original work, and there are still many pitfalls. I hope the author will work hard to write it well.
It's a bit boring. There's a ridiculous plot about Indra running from Itachi to Sasuke, and then the baby needs to practice chakra. If you practice it in advance, you can defeat Otsutsuki? You can get through it in one sentence, but you have written several chapters. Do readers want to see you practicing as a baby?
It's just so-so, a bit new, but there are few details that are the same as the original work, and there are still many pitfalls. I hope the author will work hard to write it well.