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The evaluation is that the advantages are obvious, the writing is good, and it is above average. The disadvantage is that the author writes about love at such a fast pace that it makes people uncomfortable. There are also some descriptions that are just innocent moans and are purely embarrassing. Some plots are too specific and cannot be scrutinized at all. Generally speaking, from the starting point, it is estimated to be at a lower level, and people will call it a literary youth. But it's pretty good in Tomato, and it's considered the best among the dwarfs. Just count it as the food in the tomato. Support me, Tomato novels are free after all, and it's not easy for the author.

Definitely worth recommending! If you like single female protagonists, you can definitely check this one out! The plot advances just right, the writing is delicate, the proportion of daily life and combat is moderate, and the description of emotions and actions is mature and sophisticated! The plot is mature but not cliche! Full of sincerity! Full of creativity! Well worth a look! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

The plot is quite to my liking. I want the male and female protagonists to develop a little faster and make the male protagonist a little stronger. I just don't want to be suppressed, otherwise I don't think it's very comfortable to watch. Anyway, it's pretty good-looking. Five stars for the author.

At present, it seems that it is a sweet article about the superpower combat system. The superpower aspect has not yet been fully developed. At present, it seems that the strength of the male protagonist cannot keep up with the version. I don't know if there will be any enhancements in the future. The writing style of depicting daily life is good, and the level of description of some details can also be seen. Some topics have been written about, but they are basically only superficial. However, considering the direction of this book, it is best not to go into too much depth. Overall rating (4.5/5).

I think it's pretty good,,,,,

There are no shortcomings, at least in my opinion. The other thing is that it's too little. Please give me more.

Did the author use Fengyue? The AI ​​I adjusted in the card will output text like this [face covering]. But the idea and theme are very good. I can polish it after the AI ​​outputs it. [Like]

Good looking,,, Explanation: Daily life is far more than fighting. The calm and natural way makes me feel very comfortable. The writing is top-notch. It reminds me of several old friends, such as the book "Head Down the Demon King", or the book "The Holy Girl Will Not Fall in Love with the Demon Emperor". In short, they are of the same type. Key points: There are many emotional lines written and they progress quickly. Some people may find it abrupt. The protagonist falls off the horse quickly, and the heroine is a little bit love-minded. Overall evaluation: Excellent food

I have to say, there are a lot of little poisons. If it were popular, Duan Ping would probably spray a lot of them. The details are no longer important. This love is so exciting and exciting!

There are a lot of used AIs, and there are too many adjectives used, such as "a hint of, not easy to detect". I have seen a lot of this [face covering]

After a month of interruption, I finally thought of a review. The writing was quite good. In fact, the combination of superpowers and daily life is pretty good. It's just that the two of us stopped updating before we even exchanged messages. I remember that it was okay to urge the update.

The article polished by AI is okay. Chapter 22: "The corners of Suzu Sato's mouth curved slightly. It was a carefully practiced, perfect social mask." It's so tasteful. AI especially likes to use this strange way of description.

The plot was a little impatient at the beginning, and the reveal of the identity felt a little urgent. The subsequent plot has been exciting so far, with hints about the awakening of more superpowers halfway through, foreshadowing the rest of the story. Apart from a slight flaw at the beginning (I tend to be harsh on good stories), the love line is quite good-looking and has a Japanese-style feel to it. The superpowers of the male and female protagonists are not particularly specific. They may be arranged by the author. I hope they will be presented clearly and completely or gradually in the future. The character creation is acceptable. The heroine's heartbeat is not a problem, but the degree of heartbeat is too high at the beginning. There are some shortcomings in the shaping of the male protagonist. For example, his character gives people the impression of a calm and composed gentleman at first, but in the conversation when he met his mother-in-law for the first time, he easily revealed secrets to the person he met for the first time. Even if it has no impact on the story in general, it will be a bit negative in the shaping of the character. It is also possible that the author's portrayal of the male protagonist is not what I thought. The description skills are good, and the visual sense is sufficient. Author, please don't stop updating 🙂

The plot advances quickly and develops rapidly. . . Classics, all old routines and intensive appearances, but the writing style is okay, it depends on personal taste (the taste of destiny is too strong, it feels that the male and female protagonists are forcibly speeding up to get together, instead of complying with the emerging feelings, like the will of heaven or the control of the system)

Overall, it's okay. There are no major problems. It's worth a look.

The theme and setting are pretty good, and it's quite interesting to watch. The only flaw is that there is too little foreshadowing of the relationship between the male and female protagonists. In addition, the system keeps hinting that it looks like the male protagonist has been hypnotized by the system, and he has become obsessed with the female protagonist inexplicably.

Yes, the progress is a bit fast, but I like fast progress

Very beautiful, good luck to the author

Greatness needs no words

Very good, it reads like a mix of Chinese and Japanese

It's so sweet, progress is coming so fast, life in a dream

The pace is fast, and I personally feel it's pretty good

To be honest, the writing is really good, there are no surprises, the writing style is also good, the plot logic is online, and the emotional line is also quite good (why do I sound like a troll) Can the author not use eunuchs? The writing is really comfortable and to my liking [Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

The setting at the beginning and the progression of the plot are both very good. Personally, I think the shortcoming is that the identity is revealed too quickly. You can know the identity but not so quickly. I prefer to advance slowly through the main plot of the coffee shop, like Tokyo Ghoul.

The writing is quite good, but the strength of the male protagonist could be improved [thoughts]

This book is pretty good so far, but the title seems a bit awkward to me personally, I don't know why...

[Like] [Like] [Like] Xiao Tianwen is quite to my liking [laughing]

. . . Awesome (pure compliment, no malice)

This book is very beautiful. It's really good to watch. I highly recommend watching it.

It looks good, no need to say more