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The author's writing style is very good, and the descriptions in the first two chapters are very vivid. However, this might not be appropriate in a novel, as it feels a bit deliberate and overly forceful. More importantly, the novel pays more attention to the interaction of characters and the coherence of the plot. If you zoom in on too many details, sometimes it will be easy to blur the scenes inside. Readers who are immersed in reading may feel this way. There is a hazy feeling. After reading for a long time, you will feel a little tired, because the characters and the story have faded. The coherence of the story is very important. Sometimes too much description will hinder this, and the narrative rhythm will be a bit stagnant. I feel that lyrical articles are more suitable for writing this way. I have also read a work with a similar style of writing, "Genshin Ambition". The descriptions are very detailed, but too many things are irrelevant. I am not saying that it is not good to write like this, but if you want to write a full-length novel, I feel that it is not very suitable.

The author has written four Fate books and still writes Tokiomi as Shichen [face covering]

Why. Why so many:…

You must live! ! ! Why... Why... So many... Ellipses...?

This is the Itachi with the highest IQ! (The bugs are so damned!!!)

The writing is superb. I didn't know it, so I thought he graduated from a famous university. Just write down some unnecessary ones briefly. When segmenting, you can segment it into shorter segments.

On how attractive the art of naming is to readers

I quite like reading novels where anime characters are transferred from another anime, but after reading the latest chapter, I feel like Itachi doesn't have much of a role. At the moment, I feel like the main character is still Shirou.

Good thing, that's why there are a lot of ellipses when speaking. Have you ever considered writing a novel about Tsukihime? (Although Tsukihime actually has nothing to write about, byd mushroom has not yet released 2). Also, in this book, I sometimes see sentences that seem familiar, and sentences that have been used before will be used later.

It looks great. The author's writing is very good and the characters are not OOC.

Very good looking, highly recommended! ! ! But Artoria isn't blond, why is she described as having silver hair?

It's a very good book with a pleasant plot and delicate writing, but... I... Would like to call you... The water character king [smile], and there are still a few Tokiomi who haven't changed, so cheers [sending my heart]

Keep it. Updates are really fast. But... Isn't it a bit much?