Go Crazy! You Call This Journey to the West?

Come on, author! Generally speaking, the writing is very good and well-founded, but the protagonist is a heavenly soldier who seems to be an ordinary person so far. I hope that when I write another article in the future, I can improve the protagonist's strength. For example, after the cultivation level is improved in the future, he can use his own strength to get rid of low-level pollution. After all, the protagonist has ascended to heaven through cultivation. After descending to earth, he will not think that ordinary monks are a threat in the temple. @

The corners of the mouth are raised everywhere [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] This sentence runs through the whole book [eating melon] [eating melon] [eating melon] The corners of his mouth curved into an extremely cold arc.

The writing is smooth, the plot has ups and downs, and the rhythm is good. Why isn't anyone watching? I also specifically studied the comments, which basically said how could the protagonist be less powerful than the villain! Also, how can our immortal gods be less powerful than the external gods! What they originally wrote was rules. That's how it's set up. . In my opinion, this kind of behavior is undoubtedly the same as going to a sushi restaurant and saying that your fish is all raw, I don't eat raw fish, and it's a bad review. Really high maintenance. The author should just write what they like. I really hope the author will continue to update, but I feel sorry for the author wasting his time here.

This should be a small world polluted by evil spirits outside the territory. I made up the Western Heaven and Heavenly Court based on my own memory. Otherwise, I really can't accept the Jade Emperor and Tathagata being so pushy. They have everything and they won't collude with evil spirits. The Book of Life and Death was given by the real underworld to help this small world get rid of demons. Otherwise, it would be impossible for the Book of Life and Death to transcend the magical treasures of Lingshan and Heaven. Well written, keep it up.

Tied The protagonist is well portrayed, has a strong spirit, and has an above-average IQ.

It's really good. I'm the author, please hurry up and update. I've moved everything for you. Now my fans are urging me to update. You have to update quickly. How can you explain to my fans if you don't tell me (joking) [shy]

The protagonist's character is ruthless enough, and except for some small flaws in the description and plot, such as the land being inferior to the common people and being threatened by a rich man to lose his leg, this kind of strange little problem makes no logical sense, most of it is good and it can be considered a good work. It is full of flavor and is considered to be the best in Journey to the West Tongwen. I just don't know why the rating is so low [what]

@ I hope the author doesn't give Cthulhu's alien gods too much humanity [cry]. I want to see the kind of inhuman, indescribable horror. If it's too humanized, it won't be an alien god, but a human being wearing the skin of an alien god.

Listened to it all night! It feels very good, very different from other Journey to the West fan fiction! It integrates Cthulhu and Journey to the West, and also adds rules-based games. I hope the author will add more!

Awesome, why are the ratings so low?

I read dozens of chapters in one go! Is this the author's first time writing a novel? I feel like the more I write, the better! The farther back you go, the better it looks! The plot is also well constructed! I read some comments saying that the protagonist Li Fan's immortal identity was not reflected. I feel that the setting of this kind of weird flow is basically that only the weird can fight against the weird, similar to that kind of rules flow. The characteristic of rule-based novels is cause and effect. As long as you violate the rules, no matter how awesome you are, you will die! So I feel like what I wrote is logical!

From a novel angle, it explores the secrets that seem to be heaven or a reflection of reality, and the content is fascinating.

Very unique and worth seeing

So far it's pretty good and unique! I hope it can be featured!

The protagonist's IQ is online! The killing is decisive, I hope the author can maintain it

It's good to watch, the protagonist's IQ is online, and the subject matter is novel. I hope the updates won't be discontinued.

The best and weirdest Journey to the West I've ever seen

I think it might be better if the author can write urban modern writing. After all, what you import are all rules, order, chaos, and other themes, with some restraints. These rules-based books are more acceptable to urban modern writers.

Very good-looking, no heroine, no family ties, no national destiny, the main character's IQ is online, why is the rating so low?

Good, good, five-star rating

You can see it, but it's a little bit sparse

Okay, to my liking

The subject matter is quite good and worth reading.

It goes well with Tsing Yi music

I will not offend others unless they offend me. If someone offends me, I will offend them. When a novice falls into darkness, he must become the darkest person, use darkness to conquer darkness, and start the road to dawn.

I stayed up late to read this book during the holiday. The content is very good. It can be seen that the author has literary skills👍

Beautiful, different from other types

It opens up your imagination. The more you read, the more interesting it becomes. The characters in it are very vivid and beautiful!

The subject matter is novel and the plot is interesting. Please encourage the author.

Okay, worth a look