Hogwarts: the Little Lion in the Hawk's Skin

The single heroine Hermione's emotional line is well written, neither abrupt nor embarrassing. It's not like other writings that are pretentious, savage, or a bit emotionally invasive, but the emotional line only begins to develop from the 20th to 30th chapter. [Cover face] And in terms of combat power, the first grade can almost beat the third grade in the first few months of school. The combat power is just right for the current Tomato, neither too strong nor too weak. [Laughing evilly][like] In summary, the author wrote very well. This is the second most beautiful HP article I have read so far. For the sake of my reward, author, can you give me 10 sticks a day? [Smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] [smile] Second brush [crying][crying]😭😭

It's good to read, I recommend it. I hope the author can solve the problem of Hermione having to free the elves when she becomes the heroine. The winner is the king and the loser is the bandit. Stop liberating the elves. Respect is okay, but liberation is not.

To be honest, among the many HP fanfics I have read, this is an outstanding one. The process of the protagonist's participation in the main plot is designed very smoothly and does not give me any sense of abruptness. It is like it is natural and should be like this. Moreover, the emotional line of this book has also been greatly improved compared to the previous book. The relationship between Hermione and the protagonist does not have the feeling of separation as in other novels. I really like the transition and development of the emotional line in this novel. It took a long time, and I experienced several interruptions in the middle. I have completed this journey with a lot of stumbling. Congratulations to John and Hermione on finding the life they wanted. I also wish the author better and better writing and five-star praise.

It's a pity that there is only one female protagonist Luna appeared before Hermione and had more scenes (Hermione only officially started playing after more than thirty chapters). If I hadn't known about the single heroine Hermione in advance, I would have thought it would be a single heroine Luna or a double heroine. The hero saved the beauty once before. It's a pity that it's not a dual heroine of Luna and Hermione.

It can be seen that the author's writing has become better after the accumulation of the previous book. The protagonist still has the style of Kevin from the previous book. The pace is comfortable and Hermione's emotional development is also very good. The author has changed the cover, but the blue cloak is still there

I asked why there was a familiar flavor in the writing. It turned out to be you (whose wizard duels with a crowbar)? It's also your book. I love it. Come on, author, and write more warm and daily life! ! ! My little gifts will keep coming! ! !

It's very comfortable to watch, the pace is a little slow, and the emotional aspect is well written, but I want Luna too😭

I finally got to the end of it. I have read both of the author's books. I personally think this book is much better than the previous one, but why is the rating lower? The setting of the heroine being a senior is really novel, and the emotional line is very natural, especially the part where they are confused together, and you can fully see the greenness of first love. Although the emotional line of the supporting character is not detailed, the flaws are not concealed. In short, everyone has a bright future. This is what I want to say to the author. I look forward to the next work. I believe it will get better and better.

It's very interesting. I accidentally clicked on the author's homepage and discovered that Crowbar is also yours. That book is also on my bookshelf. They are both very interesting. However, when the title of this book is Hermione and Luna, it's a bit uncomfortable to add a sister at the end ( Such as Sister Hermione, Sister Luna), even though I wear it, I am not used to it. My personal idea is to remove this sister. The other plots are very smooth and comfortable to watch, so it is still a five-star ୧꒰•̀ᴗ•́꒱୨

It's okay, it's okay. When will the protagonist's combat power be mentioned? I want to see the battle be fun.

Overall, it's pretty good. The protagonist's personality is very good and very likable. At least there are no problems with his character. The character portrayal is still very good. However, there are still some shortcomings. The protagonist doesn't know how people may die in the future. Next, I am very sorry. If this article is to make up for the regrets and to make the protagonist stronger, it will make everyone feel relaxed, happy and comfortable, and the small interaction between the heroine and the heroine will be sweet. It will make you feel that in the future, tragedy may still happen. The original article will People who die will still feel like they will die. I hope the author can strengthen our protagonist's attack methods and rely on the original text to write. But you still have to add more of your own ideas, otherwise some people will always complain. Oh, this is not much different from the original text. Balabala, last but not least, I personally still like this book very much. I feel warm after reading the corpse and I still hope that the author can keep writing and it is not impossible to get high scores in the future. Keep at it, the author got 8.0 Points, there is still hope [Like]

Maybe the update will be discontinued if the profit does not move, and the update will be discontinued suddenly when seeing a wonderful place without explaining the reason...

It looked good. The junior took advantage of the situation and fell in love with Senior Granger, but the dialogue between the characters was a bit wrong. It was too colloquial. It felt like this group of people lived in China, but it was still a characteristic.

Let's put the five stars here first.

I saw a netizen named "Love Hermione Granger" and realized you were the author of "Who Wizards Duel with Crowbars". I've finished reading that book. It's very interesting. I haven't read this book for a few hours, but when I saw this comment, I put your five stars here first.

It looks good, not bad, and the writing is the best among the many new books. The male protagonist has a likable image, and he doesn't belittle the original character to show off his superiority. Keep up the good work, author. It would be nice if there were more chapters. There should be more content at the beginning of the new book to make it easier to attract people. It will be gone after just a few glances. People don't like to rate it.

The single heroine Hermione is recommended, sweet article. I have almost read all the articles about Hermione with the single heroine on Tomato. The writing is very good. The author keeps up the good work. Hahahaha, write more about Hermione interacting with the protagonist. I also hope that the next book will also be about Hermione [eating melon]. My personal opinion of this book is about 9 points @ Come on, come on

Is the heroine supposed to be Hermione? Don't watch Hermione being kicked away and replaced with a new heroine. Hacker, answer me [thinking]

It's not bad, it's just that there is another soul inside the male protagonist, and he also has independent consciousness [laughs awkwardly], so he takes the first step [eating melon]

Author update soon The author's soul is back...[Laughing evilly] 𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌 The soul returns... Driving the long whip and setting up the six bridles... 𓀌𓀎𓀠𓀤𓀫 The soul is back... Crossing the mountain and singing... The soul is back... The soul is back... 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠 The soul returns... Sings high and triumphant... We share the same robe and enjoy the glory... 𓀋𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫 When the soul comes back... When the soul comes back, the flaw will be revealed, and the ridicule will be like a tide; At the second watch, the expression of anger faded slightly, and the spectators began to turn their ears; At the third watch, a slight reputation sprouts, and an alliance is formed in the future; At the fifth watch, righteous men and women gather together and argue; At the tenth watch, the great Confucian scholars and the nobles are revitalized, and the sound of praise fills the thoroughfare; At the twenty-first watch, the name of the green slip will remain fragrant for thousands of years. Sigh! Nine times out of a hundred, the disadvantage lies in the delay; only by waving the keys like rain can the crowd's beaks be stopped. May your ink be like a long river, so that the starry night will have no regrets, and readers will forget

This book is much better written than the previous one.

It's pretty good, and the writing is delicate. In many Harry Potter fans, some or even a lot of the ink will be spent on Harry, but this book does not put the cart before the horse and basically talks about Hogwarts from the perspective of the protagonist. The descriptions of Harry and other characters are also very good, and it can be seen that a lot of effort has been put into some details.

It's a great work. The whole story is very smooth. Now I'm engaged. It should be the ending. I don't know how to praise it. It's a great work. It's not that many bells and whistles. It's just stupid. The main character is taller than an ordinary person. You can say he's great. He has no ambitions and he doesn't have as much thirst for knowledge as in other HP novels. You can say he's not great. He is indeed a genius in HP novels. Personally, I think it's a very good HP novel. You can read it patiently!

It looks good, the plot is smooth and not laggy, and the content is very substantial and interesting. The image of each person is very complete. Is it because the score is a little low just now? I believe it can be improved. Come on, author.

It's a very good HP fanfic. I didn't finish the first one because it was a mixture of fun and cool writing, and it was a bit unreasonable. I didn't like it and I didn't like it very much. However, I like this work very much. The author is also making progress. I hope the author will get better and faster [Love] [Love]

It's very interesting, the emotional line is very natural, and the author seems to have really been in love [laughs evilly]. It was natural to dismantle Luo He.

Very good😊, just a little lacking [laughing]

I'll go. I haven't watched it for so long that I've forgotten the plot.

It looks good. Let's do another 1000 chapters.

So short, so short, too short, how could it be so short? ! ! ! [Stare]