Ming Ke: My Career as a Passerby Collapsed

It's a bit tiring to read, it's too wordy, and there are too many people writing novels, and it's tiring to complain, it's like a repeater

After reading the first few chapters, I felt "I'm so sleepy" and "I'm really convinced" every few paragraphs, which made me feel a little uncomfortable.

The writing is not bad, but I hope there will be less complaints, which personally affects the viewing experience.

The plot is good, but when the author writes about the protagonist's inner activities and speech, there are almost always words like "I'm so exhausted" and "I'm convinced". It makes me feel tired after watching it, and I feel like I'm going to be out of breath because of the protagonist [cover face] [cover face] [cover face]. It's not recommended for office workers to watch during their lunch break, because they're afraid they'll be too tired and won't have the energy to go to work in the afternoon [face cover]

The plot is four stars, the writing is three stars, and the overall rating should be only four stars. The final score should be around seven to eight o'clock. The following is a personal reading experience. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️No need to reply if you disagree Advantages: 1. The plot line has ups and downs, including climax and daily life. 2. The writing of the case is really attractive. If it is an original case, it would be really good. (Hello, Teacher Jingliu! Please update more cases. With your objective and calm attitude and unusual perspective, you have pioneered rice flower reasoning!) Possible pitfalls: 1. There are too many inexplicable *s, almost in every chapter, which greatly affects the viewing experience. 2. The overall writing is a bit messy, and there is some behavior of eating books. Is there a few chapters in the middle where Conan appears or is it a typo? (This is just one of them, just for example) 3. The protagonist has a strange character. It's obviously "a super strong social animal who reincarnated into a student and tried to pretend to be a passerby but was repeatedly tested." The social animal should have been a big selling point, but it was only on the surface. He kept shouting "It's so annoying". It was really too much. Overall, it's good. The author has been updating steadily, and I hope to see more excellent works!

The real sense of decadence ejaculated was too vivid, and the teacher's professional terminology was still too advanced.

Not bad, but there is a bug in Kudo Shinichi's wearing of glasses. Conan wears them, but Shinichi doesn't.

How come Conan, who was wearing glasses in the early stages of the Headless Murder Case, turned into Kudo Shinichi at the end?

Hello UP, I am the pirate you bought. I have been looking for a long time and still can't find anything to praise. Can you apply for a refund?

This article is well written. Just happened to see Shinichi missing. There are a few points that I would like others watching to note. 1. The heroine has a mantra that makes her want to lie down all day long. 2. The plots in the previous and next chapters of this article may not be coherent. 3. There are private settings in the settings. Despite these bugs, this article still looks good [face covering]. Are you really hungry? After the heroine knew that this was the world of Detective Conan, he wanted to stay away from the main plot. As low-key as you usually want to be. Life forces me to write mystery novels. The results are very good. Then a threatening letter was written down. After Shinichi becomes Conan. The young detective team forcibly entered the heroine's house for the first time. In the end, the heroine couldn't bear it anymore and threw Conan out. Later, the neighbor Dr. Ali became a familiar neighbor. For Xiaolan's sake, the heroine won't reject Shinichi and Conan too much. Then it was very, very uncomfortable to watch. It felt like the heroine had lost her wits and performed all kinds of flaws in front of the protagonist. Then it can be said that it is a desperate attempt to drive the protagonist away. These are written in great detail. You can look at it and it looks pretty good, but it's just very uncomfortable.

At the beginning, there were many words that appeared frequently, such as "so tired", "so annoying", etc., And it felt a bit delayed. After meeting Kudo, I felt that he was described a bit too heavily. Later, many frequent words gradually became less frequent. I skimmed the novel written by the protagonist (because I couldn't understand it), but I can tell that the protagonist's talent is very high. When I encountered a case later, I didn't feel too heavy when getting along with Kudo. How should I put it? Looking at the psychology of the protagonist, I really feel "tired" and "bored", because I feel that she is too afraid of Kudo and always describes it, which makes me feel bored. Now I feel like I want to read it, but I don't want to. After all, the protagonist's talent is so high that it will definitely attract wineries. I want to know what will happen if the protagonist meets Gin. I don't want to read it because the plot with Kudo is a bit heavy and a bit uncomfortable. I know that I may want to create contradictions in the plot, so that it is easier to write, otherwise it will be a watery story, but this Kudo is really annoying, and the protagonist has nothing to say directly, and just wants to hide. (Maybe I read too many cool articles?) The above are all personal opinions.

It's the first time I've seen a novel with this theme. 6666'S complaints are as much as mine.

Let's deal with the sense of boundaries between characters.

This one is okay, but the catchphrase at the beginning is a bit annoying, but it gets much better later on, and the plot is also very good, great! But I hope the author won't write about our heroine's baby being afraid of this and that every day, which makes me feel a bit depressed ˃̶͈ ꇴ ˂̶͈

The writing is okay, especially the later plot, but it would be better if there were less complaints.

The reason for the five stars is that I don't like to write bad reviews. But the timeline disorder is true. It was originally Conan and he became Shinichi. How could such a low-level mistake be made? The timeline is not clear. Maybe I am not clear about what happens next. In fact, I don't want to give stars. Whether it's the new ones or the old ones, there are huge problems. Some parts are illogical and even made me feel like I haven't looked at several of them.

Very novel, although the front is indeed a bit long-winded and tiring to watch, but who makes this plot interesting? I look forward to more updates. I will also expand my development in the future and meet more people.

It's really beautiful. The author must keep writing! [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

The plot is quite attractive, the complaints could be a little less [love] [love] [love] Does Hattori know that Nara discovered Conan's identity? When did Conan tell her?

Although the author's work is not the most perfect, it must be the most sincere five-star review! Also, can you ask if the heroine has an official counterpart? I really want to know. The protagonist only interacts with Conan the most. Although the confrontation is very interesting, I still want to ask, I am very curious. Will the official counterpart of the protagonist be Conan? [Sending Hearts] I really want to ask the heroine if she has cp? No, right? Why does it look like there is something in common with Conan?

I like this book better

It's so beautiful. The author is great.

The author will update quickly [send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart]

Looks good, I like watching this type of stuff I want to press the author on the table and type hard

It's very good, especially Kudo Shinichi's straight shot at the back that made me unable to help myself. But there were some problems up front. Fortunately, I didn't cancel.

It's very beautiful, I hope the author can continue to update it [Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

I just like this kind of thing, I don't know why, it looks good👀

If you look back patiently, it looks pretty good.

Very well written five star review. Come on

Watch it as a unit drama, or Kudo, the parallel world has not become smaller. It is a story about a pair of happy enemies. Of course, it is the kind where best friends are not lovers [laughter]