Wear Yourself as a Snake and Work Hard to Become Immortal

It's good-looking, and what you want is this kind of feeling. It's different from the ordinary two-men, with a bit of a male channel's cool writing style, but it also has the emotional spice of a female channel, and also has a career line. Nice

The double strength is not a lie, and it is also a cultivation-based upgrade stream. It is super, super, super good-looking👍👍👍The emotional line is not a bit sad at first glance, and the description of the fight scenes is so irritating that I memorized 50 words after reading it [laughs]

Five stars is not the upper limit of it but the upper limit of the platform. Isn't it a well-deserved five-star article? ! I want to write a long review to praise you! [Laughing][laughing][laughing] The story about cultivating immortals has a faint sense of a male channel, it's neither bloody nor boring. It's been a long time since I've seen such a cool story with two male protagonists in a female channel! The interaction between the main CP is also very warm, growing up like enemies quarreling over each other. [Sending Hearts] [Sending Hearts] The author's writing style has a sense of ancient style. Looking at the whole article, the words in the paragraphs are advanced but not exaggerated, and have good white space art. The plot progresses smoothly and is passionate but not brainless like Long Aotian. All the points are well grasped and in place. [Love][love] At the moment, it feels like a senior brother and his two junior brothers traveling around to level up and fight monsters. It's a heartwarming story, but it doesn't lose its passion for martial arts. It's hard to find such cool writing on female channels even with a lantern. [Sending my heart] From only a dozen chapters to now, I hope the plot written by the author will get better and better, and that Chu Jing and Qi Shi will get better and better [Sending my heart][Sending my heart](ps: The author will write it quickly, I hope I can see the final chapter in the summer vacation of 2026 [crazy][crazy]) As for the emotional line of the main CP, it's like the long-flowing life I've always liked. I have seen your growth, your past, but now we are fighting side by side. If it weren't for Chu Jing, Qi Shi's fate would have been annihilated in the first secret realm. But destiny changed the situation, and the appearance of Chu Jing made Qi Shi return to being a genius boy, and his destiny also changed. Just like after you appeared, I was no longer disappointed, and all bad luck dissipated because of your appearance. My destiny changes because of you, and everything about me exists because of you. This ultimate sense of pull and atmosphere, paired with sincere feelings, makes it hard not to cry. Summary: Sisters who like martial arts and immortal literature can go for it! No loss in investing!

Yes, it is a female channel with a male flavor, non-traditional and weak, Snake (0) has always been strong, and is currently guiding the male protagonist (1) to improve his strength. The fighting scenes are also exciting, and the emotional line is relatively slow, but I like it. Come on, the author [Learned]

Why isn't it popular if it's so well writtenヽ(._°)ノ? It's an orthodox fairy tale about people who transform into animals. I love the character design very much and it's very charming. I ate up the loyal dog who is a little young and young. I didn't forget the main plot and emotional line. It was a natural thing and they connected with each other so I held hands. The plot was also written very well. This writing style made me fall to my knees. The pace is very good, although the world view is unfinished now, but it doesn't feel like you're a Riddler in two steps. It's really not easy to find this book among the swarms of system books. I was almost persuaded by the ratings to give it a try. I went to shock the deliciousness. The plot and emotional lines are well written, and the protagonist's character is very cool. I'm really excited about it (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡

I don't comment much. In summary, there are no weird points. It has a strong male channel flavor (the sentence "Brother Snake fucked me back to male channel [laughing and crying]" and the description of the battle is also very good), and there are some female channels inserted (I don't know how to count it as a female channel, but you will know if you go in and take a look. What am I talking about? That's what I mean anyway. Chu's appearance is also great in the pictures. Very good-looking.), The two channels are very natural, Qi Shi has a lot of tricks (it just feels a bit unsafe, it is not safe in the first place! [Smile]) Chu, just spoil him. The 16-year-old Qi Shi is childish in front of Chu Jing, (in modern times, he is only about the age of a junior high school student). He is very cute, and the bickering between the two is also very interesting. Chu is currently Shi's guardian, right? It is a guidance type. (? Called brothers, friends?) Good-looking, really. The plot is not cliched either. It's a good thing to be motivated! (Qi: I don't care, I want to form a golden elixir! The battle between the foundation and the golden elixir is also a classic male video, Long Aotian [like]) I really like the two of them in the youth competition (just watching the warriors, I remember it is a youth competition, I can't remember the specific name, haha 😃) in order to get the first place (Chu: looked at the prize [like] The plan has changed [punch out] you go and do them and get the first place [punch out] [like]) The protagonist has a brain. There are no emotional scenes yet, but it doesn't affect the viewing experience and feels more natural to me (I also think they are suitable for long-term relationships and long-term love. Don't criticize, it's just a personal opinion, OK) The sad thing is that it is being serialized [crying]

It's wonderful. In terms of writing, I can only say that I finally struck gold. As for why I deducted one star, it's because Zhu Yun gave it to the protagonist after his rebirth. Maybe it's because I am the protagonist controller. Zhu Yun wanted to kill the protagonist but didn't. So why should the protagonist raise it? I don't understand. I'm really disgusted. Other than that, I personally don't think it's poisonous [laughs]

It gives me a faint smell of male porn, and I look forward to the author's continuation.

It's very beautiful, it has the feel of a man's cool novel, and the writing style is also nb. The battles are vividly described, not stiff. There is nothing to read at the moment, as long as the rest of the book doesn't end badly and the feeling remains in the middle, it will be alive. The emotional scenes are not obtrusive and delicious🤤It's so cute that it doesn't feel weak or strong.

It took me a day to read it, and I couldn't stop. To be honest, when I first read the book reviews, I saw some people saying that the plot behind it was boring. I thought about it and hesitated for a while, but in fact, it was not okay at all. Every plot connection is very meaningful, step by step, and the characters of the young couple really hit my xp. In the early stage, the two of them slowly upgraded to fight monsters. The taste of the male channel is very good, and the transition of the emotional lines is also very natural, as if it comes naturally, and the stories of the ancestors are also very touching. The world view gives people a feeling that it can't be more awesome. When the two young lovers grow up, the subsequent plot is also paving the way for the decisive battle. One link after another, I go, the final wedding of the young couple is sweet to me.

The author's writing style is excellent, and the battle scenes are exciting. Although the emotional line between Chu Jing and Xiao Xiao is slow, there is also a little ambiguity from time to time. This kind of mutual trust is sincere, but also slow and unconscious, and occasionally seems to have feelings, but is denied by oneself. It is really good [Adoration]

It must be praised at 9 o'clock or so! Nice! The two-male protagonist novel has a grand structure and the main plot is based on the plot, running through the ancient and "Shan Hai Jing" system. (Reading the novel while studying) focuses on describing the growth path of the two male protagonists, inheriting various immortal sources and going through many experiences along the way. The first one-third of the chapter mainly revolves around the attacker and the shou working side by side to avenge the attacker and grow together. Later, it officially enters the main plot, moving towards the goal of "landing in the fairyland, rebuilding the fairyland, welcoming back the gods, and finally becoming the Immortal Emperor (Shou)". The emotional line is slow: the ambiguity begins to sprout around chapter 80, the formal confession is ushered in in chapter 154, and the real kiss (eating meat) occurs in chapter 162. After confirming their relationship, the two went hand in hand to upgrade and inherit the source of immortality, eliminate cancer, and bring order to chaos. In the later third of the story, Shou is basically the main force carrying the whole game, while Attacker is assisting from the side. The overall situation is still very exciting. There are not many emotional scenes in the whole story, but it is very sweet. Unfortunately, the ending is not enough to watch, and I always feel that it is not finished yet. The famous scene of the return of the gods is not yet available, which is really not enjoyable enough. Hope there will be a side story

The writing is excellent, and the fighting scenes are written very smoothly. It is rare for a Tomato Shuangnan novel to be so plot-heavy, and the wording and sentence construction are not as awkward as those in male comics. (I'm not saying that other Shuangnan stories are not good, but some of them focus more on emotional lines. I'm also not saying that other male stories are not good, but some of them focus on creating a sense of coolness, and the sentences are a bit mid-range.) In Exploring the Altar of the Ancestors, a lot of sentences from Jiuge were used, and it felt super appropriate. My scalp was numb when I read it, and I was very impressed. Our relationship with Little Snake was also very good when we were young. It was not because of sex or simply because of the grace of saving lives. It was through the daily support and dedication of each other that the relationship became deeper and deeper. Hehe, I am looking forward to the following plot.

Looking forward to the follow-up development of the story. The content is very good [Flowing kiss] Oh my God, the little couple is finally happy. You finally had to eat it when you were young [licking the screen] Chu Chuta likes to scan when she scans [Shy] According to this plot, there is still a long way to go for the young couple to develop, but it doesn't matter as long as they are together. Next, they will start to upgrade and fight monsters. Sweet double row daily life [full] The setting of this article is still novel. It is rare to see two male protagonists with this kind of personality. They have met from the beginning. They support each other and no one is closer than them. Chu Chu is strong in battle and has been catching up all the way when he was a child. Although there is still a big gap hahahaha, but I believe you will be able to stand side by side with Chu Chu one day! The innocent puppy just loves to charm the little snake! Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง Chu Chu's sweetheart wants to be a hero when he is a child, and he wants to step on the seven-colored clouds to marry him🤲🏻🥺Chu Chu is still waiting for you to spend your whole life with red makeup🥺👊🏻This pure love is so refreshing! Have fun this year! I will wait until I am young to show off the world to Chu Chu, the day I will wear red makeup for the rest of my life☀️✨! It's so awesome. It's so hard to write this🤞🏻

The characters are quite full-bodied, and the protagonist is not particularly love-minded. It's a cool novel that doesn't make people look aggrieved, but it's not a mindless and cool novel. It's just that Snake's cultivation level doesn't improve much. It mainly writes about Qi Shi's improvement process. It's a good novel. [Please update]

This article is so well written, so inspiring! Although I have read more than fifty chapters so far, I can't help but write a long review🤩 This article truly combines the strengths of hundreds of schools of thought. The writing style combines the rigorous logic and refreshing rhythm of male channels with the delicate emotions of female channels. The two are perfectly integrated. Writing style✍🏻 The author's writing skills are very solid. Not only does the plot advance smoothly, but the description of the scenes is also extremely impactful and makes people's blood boil. What's even more rare is that the full text has a fast pace, with no redundant storylines or procrastinating foreshadowing. Each paragraph of content is closely linked to the main line, making it a smooth and enjoyable read that makes it impossible to stop. Protagonist creation💛 The style of the game is very similar to that of the starting male protagonist, with an upgrading flow and a "my fate is up to me, I can't help it" dynamic. But the Shou in this article is handled very differently - in the past, most of these articles had stronger attacks and had their own Long Ao Tian field. But this article is stronger than the attack, and at the same time it does not cover up the charm of the attack at all. This is the real double-strength article! Love line💕 Gong and Shou are not together yet, but they care about each other. The feeling of ambiguous pull is just right, and the relationship will come naturally. It completely makes up for the regret that I was so upset when I watched male videos in the past, but it turned out that they were just "good brothers"... When I think about this being a real double male protagonist, I feel even sweeter😍 Supporting role💚 The supporting characters who have appeared so far are all outstanding, with complex characters and memorable characters, each with their own unique personalities and stories. In addition, they handled it very well in that they enriched the main plot without overpowering the protagonist, and the narrative weight was just right. Please, please, the author must write a long novel. It is so enjoyable to read! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

Great! This book takes the protagonist's soul as the focal point and connects him to this different world one by one! In the early stage, Xiao Qi's family affairs were resolved, and the two young people met in the cave in the secret place. As the saying goes, once they meet, they will be lifelong. There is no special matchmaking, no dramatic plot, everything follows the heart and emotions, and the two people get together naturally in the middle of the world. Later, it was a response to the title of the book "Mending the Sky". In short, if you like to read cool stories about male porn stars Shuang Nan, you can read this book. Although the combat power upgraded too quickly in the later period, and all the opportunities came to you without any hardships, this is what the children of destiny and destiny should have. This is what the true children of destiny should be. If the development of the map is changed like other novels, it can only be said to be the rise of a strong man. This book can be said to be destiny and destiny! I hope the author can become popular, this book is really great! I hope that the Emperor of Heaven and his divine generals will always get what they want and remain together in life and death! [Crazy][Crazy][Crazy] Come on, author, I hope it becomes popular!

Perfect! The language is super literate, and it's not a pile of gorgeous words. At least I can see from the text our cultural heritage and that the author has read books. The plots are intertwined, and the emotions come naturally. The teacher should be more careful. I suggest you write 10,000 words a day. I will write you an 800-word essay. [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

It is a rare fairy tale written in the style of a male channel, but with the delicate emotional lines of a female channel. The development is very natural, and the plot does not feel abrupt. The writing style is great, and you can see a strong literary background. The combination of some ancient texts is just right. The characters are all well created, but the one that impressed me the most was the twin sisters who were taught by their mother. It was so well written. The only thing I want to deduct points from is the final battle. The ending is a little dull. Maybe there are too many wonderful characters in the middle and later stages. The big boss at the end does not have that complex human charm. It is too white. After taking away the boss, I just feel that it is over. It is a bit unfinished.

After reading it, this is Long Ao Tianwen. The growth of cultivation is basically due to inheritance in the secret realm. Some of the small interactions between the two are quite sweet. Haha, let's love each other. The road to immortality is cut off. The Central Region is the largest fragment of the collapse of the immortal world. Many strong people want to break through the way of heaven and become immortals. I admire them very much. Yes, but after all, if you are not in the same camp as the protagonist, you will definitely not succeed, and the world will collapse because you cannot withstand the power of the Immortal Lord. Then the protagonist will search for the inheritance of the ancient times all the way. Baby, will you become an immortal with everyone in the end? [Thinking] [Working on draft]

I haven't finished reading it yet, but each chapter is very long and I enjoyed reading it very much. I'm very happy, I'm very happy, I'm very happy😋😋There aren't many emotional scenes in the second volume, but the little interactions between the two people are deeply in my heart... In the past, I always gave up when I saw the protagonists getting together. I should have been able to keep watching this one. Xiao Chu and Xiao Xiao have been helping each other become stronger, and they really like this kind of micro-development. . . There is no tediousness of raising children but the feeling of having children grown up (). . So far, I haven't seen anything about Lei. The comments section said that Zhu Yun wanted to kill the protagonist but was arranged to be raised by the protagonist. I don't think the problem is big, because Zhu Yun's part actually doesn't describe much. It mainly serves as a golden finger for the following hours. And I think the individual "Zhu Yun" is already dead, and the subsequent nirvana does not count, so I can accept it. . . No spoilers, anyway everyone should go watch it! ! ! Go strong, go strong, go strong, go strong, go strong, go strong, go strong, go strong, go strong, go strong, go strong, go strong, go strong, go strong, go strong

The author's writing style is very good, the progress is moderate, and the description of the fire dragon is very exciting. It's just too little, he's still a baby (♡˙˙♡), come on. I'm scared to death if the author dares to update 100 chapters. •˶ɞ˶•

Although the narrative is a bit lengthy at the beginning, the language becomes more and more charming the more you read it. I like your plot very much. Readers only need to survive the first few chapters. The back is really beautiful, really beautiful This is my first second-reviewed novel. The author's writing really has that kind of literary spirit, but more importantly, it is a pattern. The author's pattern is so big that I can't even imagine it. Since ancient times, being sincerely friendly and kind to others throughout life is a pattern of dealing with others; taking charge of the great cause of prosperity and rejuvenation of the country and the nation is a pattern of caring about the country. I originally thought that it was shocking enough for a novel to achieve the latter, but now it seems that I am still narrow-minded. The ancients worshiped ghosts and gods and worshiped heaven and earth. The shock that came from their bones was truly beyond words.

It's really beautiful [Like] [Like] [Like] The writing style of Dada is really good. It can be seen that Dada has great literary skills. The descriptions of many big scenes are really shocking and graphic. The story line is also very relevant. The foreshadowing was laid from the beginning. I feel that the emotional development between the two protagonists is very natural and very natural. Every time I write a review, I feel like I'm at a loss for words, but this book is really good to read, and I highly recommend it [Send my heart] [Like]

It's so right! It's so right! ! ! ! ! The orthodox cultivation stream! ! The fighting is so exciting, and the plot is very smooth and non-toxic. The author has a good command of Chinese language, and many of the sentences are very appropriate to the situation. It has an old-fashioned flavor, and some of them are quite funny. The characters are also amazing. I haven't seen such awesome writing in a long time! Come on, author! ! ! ❤️❤️🌹 So exciting! ! ! ! ! Wu!

Who knows! ! Dad, you are simply my god! ! It's really super good-looking, the male protagonist is very strong and doesn't feel aggrieved at all, and it has the feel of a male comic! ! ! The protagonist is very ambitious! ! I like it so much! ! Moreover, the writing style is very good, there are many gorgeous words, and each character is very distinctive! The world view is huge and immersive! ! And the protagonist has many highlight moments, he is so handsome! ! And I thought that revenge would be like other novels, where I would have to wait until the finale to take revenge. This was not the case in this novel. The revenge was quickly avenged. The fighting scenes were also super fun to watch, and when the real face was revealed in front of everyone, it was so exciting to watch! ! The lady is so beautiful, the more I look at it, the more I can't stop! ! It's so addictive, it's really nice to see so much at once! ! ! I really like every plot point. It is simply the perfect novel in my mind! !

I couldn't help but want to comment before I finished reading. It made my blood boil. I have never been wronged. I have enough strength and wisdom to steadily become stronger. I even see that I can even dominate one person now. Moreover, the two of them get along naturally, without misunderstandings or prejudices. It can be said that it is a steady stream and everything will come naturally. Although I prefer romantic dramas, I really think it's a pity that the protagonist doesn't develop friendship or father-son relationship, and it's a master and servant thing. Let's just have no cp. It's so cool. Falling in love affects the speed of drawing the sword [smile] As for the emotional scenes later on, I felt that the writing was not good enough, because the protagonists were too happy to upgrade, making love seem unnecessary. What's more intuitive is that I happened to see Gong become a little enlightened, but I was not satisfied with Shou's performance, which was too coquettish. I shouldn't be shy about close contact with Gong when he was trapped in an illusion. I should just beat him and declare my sovereignty. Maybe it's because Shou has just started to have sex, but I beg you to be the male lead. But Gong has always served Shou, and his wife is strict, which is in line with my preferences for Gong. But as a lover of controlled and shou stories, I really wish it was a main story or a pure friendship. At least now, the plot is so satisfying that it makes me want a relationship. It is the icing on the cake [laughs] It's a pity that I only read the epilogue, and this one is finished early. But I hope you can be more accepting in the future. You can be shy but don't be coquettish, or just don't ask for too many emotional scenes. Woohoo, it's so cool. It reminds me of the pleasure I had in watching male-level videos in the past, but it's different from this. There aren't too many people playing swordsmanship, and it's not boring to watch. I don't know how it will develop in the future. Anyway, I'm here now. I will continue to read it later. If the writing is bad, I will correct it. If it is not bad, I will put five stars here [shy]

Super good-looking, tied, tied. Although there have been no other intimate scenes except the extras so far, it looks very well-written and there are not many surprises. Both parties are of the growth type, and they are stronger in attack than in comparison. So far.

This book is really full of fairy tales, and could even be used as a male channel, but as for the emotional line, it still feels a bit lacking. But with the two heroes, the characterization, and the fighting scenes, the main plot is really nothing to say.

It's quite beautiful. Qi Shi goes from being cowardly to brave, from youthful to mature, from being despised to being valued, from being ignored to being the center of attention. It feels like Snake has the feeling of seeing a child succeed. The two of them walk hand in hand and stay together.