Naruto: Starting with the Fish-Fish Fruit, Model: Azure Dragon

It's okay. There are no major criticisms, but there are some minor issues. Overall, it looks okay. The writing is a bit green, but it's okay. The general direction is okay. Some of the less popular knowledge is not in place. It doesn't affect the look and feel. It's still highly recommended. Come on, author. There are a lot of problems. Super shadow is a folk saying, but there is no official statement. Yagura is the three-tailed Jinchuuriki after Rin, not before Rin. This is one of the big problems. Many timelines are wrong, and these are the timelines of the main line. The most serious period of the blood mist was when Obito blackened and controlled Yagura, and then Terumi Mei was overthrown and prospered. To be precise, the advancement of the Kirigakure timeline was completely wrong, and it seemed a bit unreasonable.

It looked okay. I finished reading it in one sitting. I hope to update it soon. I think the protagonist can show off his strength a little more, but it still feels too hidden now. If you are at the peak of the shadow level, you don't need to be too afraid of Danzo Orochimaru and the like. There is a high probability that the village will not fight you directly after knowing it. After all, a strong shadow level person can cause a lot of damage. If you win over, he can be regarded as a pillar of the village. As for the protagonist who is an outsider, I I feel that the protagonist is now bound to Konoha, and that he may marry Yuhi Kurenai in the future. Sarutobi Hiruzen should not think that the protagonist rebels without any reason. In addition, the protagonist actually cares about his companions in the village now. The two parties should be able to form a cooperative relationship. The village accepts the protagonist, and the protagonist gives face, occasionally helps the village with tasks, or comes out to help when there is danger.

I haven't watched One Piece, but I am a fan of Naruto. I feel that the author has suppressed the protagonist a bit. After chapter 109, he can say "I don't eat beef anymore". It is the peak of the shadow level. It is not a problem for a person to walk alone in the ninja world. And I always feel that it is not only the peak of the shadow level, but also a dragon after all, which is a bit weak. There is also the game with Sarutobi, which is a bit exaggerated. Although no one knows that the protagonist has movie-level strength, if something happens to the people in the orphanage or Noonoyu, with the protagonist's growth rate, what kind of trouble can they do. In the animation, even if they were targeting White Fang, they were only targeting others, not the people around them. After all, a shadow without any scruples can still be hostile to you, haha. The author should start writing more enjoyable articles, otherwise the ratings will only get lower and lower, and more and more people will leave. After all, Tomato is mostly filled with enjoyable articles. I still really like this book, it's quite innovative. I'm really looking forward to the scene where the protagonist completely transforms into a blue dragon and shocks the ninja world😊

The writing is very good, whether it is about fighting or describing the actions and dialogues of the protagonist. What I like the most is the protagonist's sentence: Wherever the heart goes, so goes the body! The thoughts are clear and there are no obstacles! That means, do whatever you want! This sentence is very classic. I like it very much, so it's five stars.

The author writes very well, but I hope he can give Danzo a hard blow later. Here, I would like to support the author with a five-star review.

Not bad, the level of a professional writer. The logic is clear and refreshing. The most important thing is to write about the pretentious feeling of my favorite Blue Dragon Fruit 👍👍👍

It's very interesting and interesting. It has its own flavor unlike other Naruto novels. The protagonist is vivid and the supporting characters are also online. It's an excellent novel. I've been following it for more than half a year and am waiting for updates every day. It's very interesting. Good luck to the author.

Well, well, well, well, well, well, it's very interesting. It seems to be an original story. I haven't seen anything like it elsewhere. You can create your own story in Naruto instead of following the plot.

The writing is very good, the storyline is very coherent, the protagonist is not brainless, and the author updates quickly. If he keeps updating, and is in good condition without writing randomly, I feel that if he continues, it will reach a score of 9.0 To 9.4.

It feels okay, why is the score so low? After all, it is fan fiction, and there must be various things derived from it. It is a little different from the original work, and it is also for the sake of continuing to write better, and there is nothing to complain about.