Ten Years as the Protagonist, Starting When I Saw 1

It's pretty good, the setting is quite interesting. There is just one problem. There are too many descriptions. There is a description in the middle of every sentence. It affects the perception a bit. I hope it can be improved. And if Xiaotang is not the heroine, there is no need to describe it so much. Just a blind guess, she may also be a Sequencer, or a charmer. Otherwise, why would the protagonist have an inexplicable crush on her? Finally, it looks good, I love reading it, and I will update more.

Support me, maybe I have read too many terrible books recently, even though they are quite good, there are still so many people who find fault and don't understand 😂. The descriptions in the text are quite comfortable. Although I was attracted by the introduction, the confidence in the introduction was not reflected a bit (I didn't describe it before graduation, but I thought it was quite comfortable ๑> <๑), but it's pretty good so far (◍ ´꒳` ◍), time is a little short, so I went back and deleted the chapters and reviewed them again. After all, there are too many books (there are quite few book reviews, after all, the books I like to read are all on the bookshelf and I can't bear to read them [too fatal. Jpg] 🤦). ⭐With few readers, the author can create a shortage of books. If there is a cp later, I support it. Just leave the harem behind. After all, there are too many things to control. Of course, you can go at your own pace. There are many good-looking ones without a heroine.

I quite like the story of this book, but the emotions and trust between the Skyfall Beaks, the complexity of everyone being deceived when Wen confesses, etc. Are a bit stiff. If there are more friendship scenes between them, I can better understand the feeling of being deceived by a trusted friend (not because I want the author to write more). However, I still look forward to the protagonist's later entropy ability (because when I first saw this ability, I thought of turning people directly from 5 to 1, from humans to dead objects). As a result, it ended up being a close combat. Overall, I hope the author will continue to work hard and write better articles (I will come back to change the rating when it is finished)

After reading it for a while, except for the somewhat objectionable description of Su Yutang, it was pretty good. I hope the author can use more descriptive methods in describing women and not blush at all times (although Su Yutang has a purpose, I still hope that this kind of plot can be described from multiple aspects in the future)

The writing in the early stage was okay, but it got a little bit addictive at the beginning of the mission, which was acceptable. Moreover, I felt that the protagonist should learn physics. This ability felt too stretched, and my brother has already reminded me. I think this book is still a bit over the top. Come on, author.

The plot is compact and the events are fast-paced. The protagonist's rationality does not seem to have reached the extreme, which is a good thing. However, it is an emotion between friends and brothers. The protagonist is more like a human being, not a so-called rational madman. The rich man and her daughter are a bit awkward. The author seems to have the idea of ​​writing a female protagonist.

It's best not to have a female protagonist. This part of the Su family is quite uncomfortable.

Quite interesting. The storyline is okay, but the only shortcoming is that the training of the protagonist is obviously a mage class with many changes, and he plays a bit like a warrior. I hope this can be changed. Everything else is pretty good. (˵¯͒¯͒˵)

It's very interesting. The top ten in the sequence are very powerful from the beginning, and they have the right to control who will have the subsequent sequence. So why don't the protagonist or other top ten have some quotas to give to others independently? After all, they can obtain the sequence through cause and effect. In this case, Zhong It should be more sincere. It said that it can be based on cause and effect. There are some contents that I am confused about. The country should still have technology. For example, ifrit in the back, I think the protagonist can't withstand the damage of the gun. Then the same goes for Ifrit. In this case, can't guns or bombs be used there? There are also some negative points in it. There are too many chapters described in the first mission. I think so too. Moreover, I feel that the sequences on the protagonist are not well expressed. I hope that the follow-up can highlight the 'change rate' of the protagonist's control of objects. Overall, this book is really good. I hope the author can update more chapters. I really can't get enough!!!

In fact, the author's writing was really good at the beginning, and I started to follow it after not many chapters. However, starting from the Su family's story line, it became a bit confusing, and I may not be interested in it later on. I would like to give you my best [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]