Lazy Hengheng's 3Rd Book

Darba can understand the attack on Huodu, but what is the explanation for the attack on Mayu? There is something wrong with being a person and doing things🤨

[Blowing kiss] Li Mochou + Xiao Longnu, two female protagonists, not bad [cool]

The realm of martial arts is similar to the original work, and the vagueness is really appropriate (I'm always afraid of the level setting of online novels in martial arts novels, because they don't match up, so in the end I can only run in the direction of someone who is not human (cultivating immortals). However, I don't know what happened now, everyone likes to talk about nature, nurture, etc.), And the interaction between the protagonist and Xiao Longnu is not as disgusting as Brother Zhu, and is more comfortable. The system only provides daily necessities, which is also very suitable. Yang Guo lost the master-disciple relationship, and the early and middle stages were much smoother. Granny Sun did not die. The characters in the book are all developing in a good direction, which is quite good. In the teaching section, unlimited fighting... Emmm... Did not exceed expectations (maybe I have read too many novels), and there is not much foreshadowing in the front. There is too much pen and ink, but the effect is average. After all, readers who have read online articles for many years should know that stuff. There is another hidden danger... There are actually more good people in Jin Yong's books. I feel that the protagonists follow the same plot line as Yang Guo and Guo Jing, and the opportunity to open this little mouth will be less in the middle. The rest is fine, just stop cursing and write about some universal values.

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I thought it was good, except for the irregular fighting part which was a little jumpy and I could read it from beginning to end. [Praise]

Although the writing process is a bit unclear, which should be the basic skills of writing, the plot, shaping, and characterization are all quite good. The perfect ending shows that the author has put great care into perfecting the regrets in The Condor from a third-person perspective. This is good

This is the best Shendiao fanfic I have ever read [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

What can I say, the writing skills still need to be improved. I'm not very cold, but I support it with five stars.

Very well written, keep up the good work, author

Give it, give it, hahaha

I'll go home later and bring my bus pass.

Al walked all over the place and compared it to this book.

I haven't read such a beautiful novel in a long time, and I hope that the following chapters will be more exciting.

Not bad, there are a lot of jokes in the front and they look quite interesting.

This kind of novel with comfortable writing style and smooth plot is the first time I saw it on Tomato. It's so good and I love reading it.

The content is substantial and contains the author's insights, helping you to read with confidence. The author is very persuasive

A rare thing about Tomato is that it's not a comprehensive piece of writing. He is not a puppet of the system. The protagonist has his own ideas. Overall, he is very comfortable to watch.

Love to watch and interesting, at least for now

This text has a strong sense of imagery. Darba's attack is ferocious and violent, Lin Yun's dodge is calm and exquisite, and the armed confrontation is full of tension.

Lin Yun slaps him hard in the face, the plot is satisfying and the conflict is direct.

Not bad, you can take a look

The writing style is natural and good.

It's thrilling to watch and exciting to watch.

Okay, it's okay to look at it

It's still very relaxing and enjoyable, but the quantity is a bit small.

The description of the ancient tomb is delicate, and the atmosphere is quiet and mysterious.

After watching it, the male protagonist is a happy little funny boy.

I've read dozens of chapters, and it's okay. The pace is pretty fast, and it's no problem to be a bread-and-butter.

The rhythm is just heart-wrenching. This book will be a huge loss if you don't follow it!

It's so enjoyable to watch and so well written.