Blood Moon Cross of Battle

I haven't seen the fight, so I won't comment on that aspect. Let's focus on the part about remarriage In my eyes, the part about getting married is at least passable, and I can see the protagonist's psychological struggle in accepting his identity, and his determination to protect his companions in the end. The daily part is really well written. The disadvantage is that I don't know if it's due to physical reasons, but the female fell off too quickly. When I first saw Shido's face, I would blush and my heart would beat. In addition, after kissing Shido, the protagonist's sense of presence plummeted, and he didn't compete with Shido much. In the Rinni chapter, I added Qianye's if line, which is really well written! And since then, Qianye's presence has also increased, and his characters have become much more fleshed out.

It's okay, but there are too few scenes with the protagonist, which makes people think it's from Shirou's perspective, but the daily scenes are heartwarming, please give it a try, author

The writing is good, it's quite rare to write about a date and a marriage, come on [blow a kiss]

Cao Mengde said nothing and just kept watching. [Laughing awkwardly]

Not bad, come on, keep writing.

Good-looking, lots of cheers for changing marriage articles

So pretty, so pretty

It's pretty good, come on author, I love you😘