[Interstellar] I'm Just an Honest Little Heavenly Master

Overall, it's good. The first chapter gave me a unique feeling that is different from other interstellar novels. However, the last few chapters have a bit too much narration, too many settings, and they are written with a lot of ink, which makes it bloated and annoying after reading it for a long time. I wrote too much unnecessary stuff. So far, I will continue to watch it and it is acceptable. The plot is still being laid out, I don't know what to do next, the heroine's purpose is not clear, I hope I can get through it quickly [Like]

It took me so long to find out that the rating was 6.9, Only 6.9? It shouldn't be, is it because it's not exciting enough? But Xiao Shuang is so happy hhhh. The interstellar heroine is no longer a heartthrob. She is very powerful from the beginning, invincible in the world, and becomes stronger little by little. It is very logical, has a grand world view, a very novel plot, and a lot of foreshadowing. I love details hehe (｡•ᴗ-)_. Moreover, Mr. Duoduo is so good, handsome and smart; Bai Bai is so naive and cute; Li Hua, Li Hua, was very smart at first, but later became a bit bad and rushed to jio; Sister Xu is the eldest lady, but she loves Yuzi very much, Chinese civilization Hahahahaha; needless to say, Young Master Kevin is a super rich second generation, but has normal outlook on life, and is a super sponsor hehehe; the junior is a foodie, dreaming of eating all over the galaxy; and of course our Yu Zi La, who occasionally draws symbols to superimpose treatments, is the best logistics engineer. The best team of Seven Flowers on a Vine, the best group portrait, it's not over yet, come on, come on, promise me not to give up [I'm about to cry]

It looks good, the plot is good, and the setting has its own ideas. It is different from other stereotyped interstellar novels. I hope it will be updated soon. The characters are also very unique. The shaping of female characters and the setting of the status of women in interstellar are also in line with my appetite. I will not write women directly as men. It is simply a male channel with another name. It will not be interstellar and some people look down on girls. It is completely the equality between men and women in my mind.

It's pretty good, I don't know why the rating is so low. Maybe it's because it's not exciting enough, or the hooks aren't enough? But I really love reading this kind of group portrait article. This is a true group portrait, and everyone has their own characteristics. It's really beautiful, why is it rated so low?

The protagonist relies on spells to make money, and is not very concerned about improving her strength. She basically improves with the environment. She needs someone to put pressure on her, and occasionally she fails. I ideally go to Capital Star, where I value friendship. Fortunately, the friends I meet are all reliable, a little lustful, sharp-tongued, full of clever ideas, and occasionally clumsy. Worth a look. My background is not good, but the writing style of the whole article is warm. Not that kind of tearjerker. A blind guess, the author has a delicate heart, rich emotions, and is quite optimistic. He is young and has not been contaminated by the cruelty of society. I hope to maintain his original intention, come on!

The writing is very good. I understand the author's design and the foreshadowing of the futile death. But when this time comes, I still can't accept it (I'm crying like crazy now, so I hate knives.) The author said that the protagonist group will not die in the future, but so what? He already passed away at the age of 18 at the beginning of his life. Maybe I am too emotional. Li Hua lost Bai Bai who always supported him. Bai Bai's parents lost their children forever. Seven Flowers on a Vine lost their friends who trusted each other in life and death forever. The dead have no regrets, but the living will be strong and will continue to carry out the last wishes of the dead. But they will all regret not being able to accompany them on the way forward. Intellectually, I understand that Bai Bai made a choice without regrets and died to protect his friends. But emotionally, although Bai Bai is not my favorite character, I still can't accept it. I can't change this established fact. I think I need to calm down for a while, but maybe I will forget this book and never open it again. Then this may be the last time I open this novel, so I wish everyone who reads this book and this book review happiness, maybe we will see you in other comment areas one day in the future [Love]

It hurts so much that I only read the first few dozen chapters. It is too difficult to insist on seeing her grow up to be invincible on her own. It feels like Xiao Cui's growth has been a long rainy season. She can only be forced to accept one after another without any preview. The waves hit and then continue to move forward alone, telling herself that this is It is the only way to grow up. A stranger has no sustenance and sense of belonging, and will not have the pursuit of youthful spirit with all his strength. Even in his previous life, he did not have the sense of security brought by a stable family. Even on a campus full of "peers", it feels like living alone.

It's good to watch. Tomato Star Wars is fine. The pace is indeed a bit slow in the early stages. There aren't many highlights before high school. The world view is relatively rich in Star Wars. There are still a few bugs occasionally. The high-level league competition is very interesting. It can be said that you drive low and go high. The narrative flow is logical and smooth. The group portraits are very full. Yuzi is a very cute little treasure (but I personally feel that wearing twin ponytails after college is a bit...) I feel that other special galaxy maps can also be used. I was so happy to read a chapter of 4,000 words. This book is actually equivalent to one chapter and two chapters of others. Personally, I think the appreciation period of online articles begins when the article is written to 1 million words. Teacher, it would be better if you keep working hard [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

I think the writing is okay. Some of the nitpicks in the paragraph comments are simply inexplicable. Maybe it's because I didn't write about the real competition, so it's not very popular. The writing style depends on your personal preference. I really like this kind of writing style that is full of happiness and cuteness. The shortcoming is that there are not enough paragraphs and punctuation. If you read it on the mobile phone, it is really a lump of text.

It's good to read. If I want to read a book that starts with going to the battlefield and killing everyone, I might not recommend this book because the story line is quite long. It starts from the heroine's growth experience from childhood to adulthood and starts with the growth period. However, it will focus on describing the bond with the people around you. It does not mean that there will be no negative characters, but it will make the world view structure more complete! If you are looking at it for the purpose of occultism, divination and the like do not account for a large proportion in the previous article. I have not seen that it is difficult to evaluate the following article, because I read it for this point. Although this aspect did not attract me very well, the character creation and the interaction between each person were very well grasped. I think this is the most outstanding part of this book! !

This rating is too low, I am completely sorry for this novel! The first few dozen pictures are a little dull, but the later ones look better and better! Our Yuzi is so dull, exciting, and passionate about changing the world. It is a super beautiful group portrait. Seven flowers on a vine is the best team. The world is not saved by the heroine alone, but by everyone, relying on millions of people, the world will become better and better. Yuzi, just grow up well and win the first place! The writing is good and the plot is good. The rhythm of the subsequent plot is very reasonable. The group portrait looks better.

So pretty! I look better after college! Although the plot twists and character changes after Gao Lian did promote the transformation of the heroine, I still feel a bit regretful and rushed. Da Lian is still very interesting so far. This article has no flaws and does not contain r-vocabulary, so you can watch it with confidence! ! This is the first serialized article with the latest chapter that I have seen since I came to Yangshizi to read it. Please give me a lot of encouragement and please update more💪💪

I have been a bookworm for thousands of hours, and I have never seen any tricks. This book has dominated me for two days, and my reading speed is still not good enough for me. This book has a strong sense of immersion. It's not mindless and passionate, nor is it cheating. This is the key point! It is rare and very rare for interstellar literature to have content that is not exaggerated, has solid writing, and is logically rigorous. The feelings are real, everyone has a distinct style, and the deep friendships in their youth are really precious. The author is very humorous, I started laughing while reading. The next step is also the key point! The heroine has childhood sweethearts, sweethearts, good and bad friends, and CP, but the CP relationship is not like the rapid rise in some novels, which is inexplicable, and it should be taken for granted. The relationship is formed bit by bit in life, and each has its own growth and life trajectory. It is not separated and unrelated, nor does it appear early and everything is together. She and he had overlapping development trajectories on their growth paths, and then they were gradually attracted to each other. It is not the kind of person who is impossible to hit and is accidentally parachuted by the author. Yuzi and he are strong men and meet at the top. This is an inevitable encounter. Just rush! Finally, I want to say, Author, don't make me slap you (grab you by the collar). Please~ Please code quickly. I will kneel down for you. You can do three kowtows. It's not too demanding. I'll give you 2 chapters a day. I like Duoduo very much. Our Duoduo master is the best, whether it is the character or the pronunciation of the name. Duoduo, Yuzi, Huazi, Baibai, Sister Xu, junior, and Kevin, they all went from rookie to independent. I feel that their friendship from immaturity to maturity is the most rare. Even if they go to the Hailan school team, they will never have such a friendship again. My eyes need to pee, author I love you [crying]

It felt a bit fragmented in the beginning, but after more than fifty chapters, the author said that after sorting out the problem information, it felt a lot better. The plot is very good. It plays normally from the early stage to the middle level. It feels ups and downs (praise). I was moved to tears when I saw my brother's three streets. The group portrait is really super delicious! ! !

It's super good-looking, the plot is brisk and silky, and the world view is also perfect. From some knowledge, it can be seen that the author (muraka) has also checked the information, and there will be no drama (only for my half-knowledge). Muraka is really a treasure author The writing style is also very good. If I'm not mistaken, this should be the first time for the author to write a long novel. I can clearly see the improvement in the writing style. Based on, draw, and show, the author has written an outline, which makes me feel at ease. A good cook can cook well😋 I have read more than half of it (146 chapters). Although it is not clearly written, the gender of the high-ranking leaders set in most of the flash character plots is female, and there is no soft literature. It is really comfortable to read (›´ω`‹) There is almost no emotional line at present, and the author does not use many strokes to describe the male protagonist. There is no female protagonist, but the male protagonist is Long Aotian. I like group portraits, but I don't like emotional lines. It affects the plot too much. You can really read this book. I recommend it! ! ! ! [Top post][top post][top post]

Nice interstellar military academy novel! The world view is very complete and the descriptions are beautiful [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart] Regarding living expenses, there is actually not much of a problem. First of all, the hostess and the adoptive family have a mutually beneficial relationship. The adoptive family will provide financial support, including tuition, living expenses and miscellaneous expenses. Everyone is pointing out that the living expenses are very small compared with the cost of milk powder, but I think: First, the living expenses definitely come from the heroine's normal living expenses, because Dongfang's mother's husband is also a military academy student. Second, baby milk powder is very expensive, because Oriental mothers must have used similar brands in the past, so they naturally want the best for their children, and the children's grandparents may not care about it on the surface, but they may express it privately. Third, in this adoption relationship, the heroine sometimes makes money herself, which also shows that she does not want to owe the adoptive family too much, because the money is not much, and it is really not enough. She can also pay back the money later and break off the relationship. Fourth, living expenses are only part of it. Why haven't you paid attention to tuition fees and the like? It's not mentioned in the article, but Oriental Mom will definitely take the heroine shopping sometimes! This cost. Finally, there is another point in the adoption agreement that states that she will not be responsible for the support relationship in the future. How could the heroine ask for so much money from the adoptive family? If she asked for so much money, everyone would feel guilty, and they would also be responsible for certain support and other relationships in the future. So the money is reasonable! And don't abandon the article because of this matter, because I haven't seen such a book on Tomato for a long time. Please support the author. There are really not many articles about interstellar mecha group portraits, I have basically read all the others.

Anyone who has not read this book will feel heartbroken for them. It has all the funny, tear-jerking, and passionate elements I want, and it is also different from traditional interstellar novels. Go read it.

Very interesting setting, slow pace and light feeling. The worldview explained above is quite clear and interesting! But if you don't want to be spoiled, it's best not to read and leave comments if the author has something to say. . . Lots and lots of spoilers (💔 The settings are very rich and some of the Zerg settings are fun, but the mecha combat is so short that it feels like it's not the focus of this book. It's more about the plot.

People have joys and sorrows, and the moon waxes and wanes. Bai Bai's death was too sudden. In contrast, Sister Xu's decline in level was painful but seemed acceptable. But Sister Xu accepted it too easily. Her world was not just the military school life I saw. I can't seem to judge her by my own standards, and I can't judge Bai Bai either. He did what he felt he wanted to do.

I accidentally recommended a book today and found out that the rating of this book is a bit low. The early writing of this book is indeed not very good, but whether it is Cui Yu's personal image, the competition system of the military academy league, and the main line of the story, the author's unique ingenuity is there. In the entire current narrative, the female protagonist Cui Yu has always been at the center. She does not deify the male protagonist, but uses the male protagonist to charm the female protagonist again. The overall story has a relaxed pace, and the heroine has her own personal style and distinctive character traits. If the author can write a brilliant story about the continuous outbreak of insects in the text, I believe this book will definitely get a 9 points. Although the group selection is still a traditional two-female-n-male partnership, the shaping of the Nangong star system is very novel and highly watchable. Although this book still has some shortcomings, it is overall an excellent type of interstellar literature. I hope that the author can write better and better in the future.

It's very interesting [Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss] The author's background is very detailed, and it is also a good group portrait article. The heroine is a logistician and can also act as a conductor. The hero has not had much contact with the heroine yet.

Good-looking, good-looking, strong woman, growing up I looked through the ratings and found a 1-point score because I felt that the author's writing of the heroine was too powerful and unrealistic, and could not break the firewall of the interstellar school. The others were generally four or five points, but I really don't understand why the score is so low. Is it because there are too few people? ! ! There is also a two-point one, but why is the score so low? It was rigged.

It's so beautiful, but it's too short. I feel sorry for Cui Yu who was forced to lose the family he finally had. But there is one thing about this book that is not suitable for listening, but for serious reading. Sometimes I don't know what I just listened to, and I go back to read it again.

It's very nice, very nice, but I think some details can be added, that is, some details about interstellar learning, mecha weapons and interstellar unique items, plant humanities, and although the protagonist's mental power is the judge's pen, I don't seem to see him developing his own mental power. I think this should be put on the agenda. I really want to see this mental power drawing talisman. However, I feel that the author of this article is not actually biased towards daily articles. However, if this article actually goes back to the present, it should have some profound meaning, and I have not seen it. It's just that this article doesn't feel like a daily article to me, but it is an everyday article, but it is daily and does not give more rich details. The article goes very quickly and doesn't explain much in detail, which makes it uncomfortable. It's good-looking, but it could obviously be better. Then what is the author's positioning for this article? This article is good-looking, but there are many places where his detailed description is not enough. Because the author said in the introduction that this article is a slow-paced group portrait article, I have been reading it for so long. First of all, I feel that the author's characters are not distinct enough. That is, the only two characters in this article that I remember so far are the protagonist and the other one who is a wealthy little mouse. I can't remember the other two. Then the author said that this is a slow-paced article, so I think a slow-paced article must have many details about getting along with people. That is, the protagonist is adopted. Shouldn't there be detailed descriptions of the protagonist getting along with his family in the future? Why did you just take it all away? And for an earthling who has traveled from other planets, everything in the interstellar world should make the protagonist curious, so there are very few descriptions of interstellar things, items, plants, planets, mechas, etc. What I say about the lack of description is that the author did not describe these things in sufficient detail. And after the protagonist enters the military academy, his way of making money should not be just by doing military academy tasks. For example, the protagonist can conceal his identity and start a fortune-telling business, and then draw talismans. Wouldn't the Judge Pen come in handy if it can actually draw pictures? Then the Judge's Pen can actually come in handy. Can we use the Judge's Pen to draw talismans? It's not about the white pen, but the black pen owner destroys it?

I only read the first part, the warm friendship, the threesome also parted ways, it was written very carefully, growing up felt like a wet rainy season, and the sudden loss of contact. I felt that the heroine was at a loss, but there was nothing she could do. As a foreigner, she felt alienated from this world. This was not her world. She had no sense of belonging and just wanted to live an ordinary life. Even if she had the mental power of S, she did not want to face it, she just wanted to live her new life well.

It's a very good, very logical and refreshing story. The heroine has a very clear growth line, from thoughts to actions. The price of the heroine's growth is the death of one of her teammates. The author is really cruel. In addition, the emotional line is not very clear and the plot is a bit slow. Overall, the shortcomings do not overshadow the good points. I can give it a 9.4. I don't know why the author only has a 7.4 Now. Is it because it is not finished?

Suddenly I realized that this book only had a score of 6.6. Maybe it was modified by Yuzi for good luck.

It is really beautiful, the writing is good, the plot is great, and the characters are vivid. It is really a good book that is rarely seen in Tomato. However, I really can't accept that Bai Bai died like that. I was so uncomfortable that I couldn't sleep at 3 or 4 o'clock.

It's good to read. If you like interstellar literature, don't miss it. So far, there is no love line. I don't know if it means no cp. The writing style is not like that of Tomato, but it feels more like JJ. Maybe the low rating is because the platform has a relatively small audience? Personally, I can't get into the game chapters. They feel rather boring and hard to get into. The characters that have appeared so far are quite likable. Why Why is this a serialization? How many words does the author estimate for the full text? It feels like the plot is still in its early stages. Come on, come on, don't stop updating.

Opening low and moving high, she is a bit slow in the early stage, but all her competitions in the competition are very well written and very humorous. Don't know why the rating is not high. I am very afraid that the author will give up. Alas, you can jump directly to the high school league, and then the Shi family, the spiritual realm, etc. The rhythm is very good and beautiful! Author, you must continue to work hard. I will always like Yuzi!