HP: You Can Repay Kindness and Fall in Love with Me

I really want to know how many JK Rowlings the author eats in one meal... The writing is so on point, the light humor and the feeling of an adolescent boy... I really want to rush to the author with a pale face and take a few bites of the author and then stick my head into the author's manuscript box to take a look. So beautiful, Ji Xing Di Zhao, who are you... JK Rowling is known as Xiao Ji Xing Di Zhao ()

The setting of the heroine is particularly novel - Quidditch commentator. I have never seen this setting in HP fanfics before, and the author also writes it very professionally (I really doubt that the author has played Quidditch). The heroine is particularly charming, smart and decisive whether she is explaining Quidditch or playing Quidditch. The relationship development with the male guests was also very natural. It didn't feel like industrial saccharine. When I saw that clip, I would naturally say something. In addition to love, the friendship with Pansy is also written very naturally. The little awkwardness between adolescent girls is really sour and delicious. And I think the author is very good at describing scenes? (I'm not sure if this is it), when I wrote about the scene where the Slytherins celebrated in the lounge after Slytherin won the Quidditch House Cup, I was so overwhelmed with joy that I wanted to cheer for them even if I wasn't a Slytherin. . I'm going to write this much for the time being. It's expected to be a long story. I guess I'll forget the previous plot and watch it again in the later stages, so I'll give it a stable score of 9 first, and then I'll review it after it's finished [please update]

Huge Huge Huge Looks Good! It's been a long time since I've seen such a good-looking first-person HP story. I didn't see it from God's perspective. The content felt very everyday and real. There was no OOC, and the sense of immersion was particularly strong. It also reversed everyone's stereotype of this kind of protagonist as "wooden". After all, from the perspective of the heroine, I really can't understand what the boys are doing. Especially the light and casual sense of humor, which is funny but not cliché. Moreover, the plot starts from the third grade. Who knows this age point? It is really grasped just right. It especially poked me. After all, I didn't start falling in love like an adult at the age of eleven or twelve! Moreover, the teacher writes the characters very delicately, and directly and indirectly understands the psychology of the characters from all aspects. Although there are no big actions, the small ambiguities between the male protagonists and the female protagonists are fully reflected, especially the part where Blaise is wow wow wow, especially the part about copying the family rules. The cautious sense of immorality is overflowing, and I really want to fall into a trap. The only fly in the ointment is that it's too! Too little!!!! Not! Enough! Look! ! ! Teacher, write quickly, write quickly, write quickly, I open my mouth to beg for rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice rice Don't miss it if you pass by, the Quidditch plot is superb! ! ! Sijia is so charming, and each character has extremely distinct characteristics, which are truly unique among HP novels. Lucky star, who are you... You are simply the Rowling of HP online literature.

It's amazing, and the most authoritative one is the confrontation between Blaise's pseudo-bone and Harry. Well, actually I like everyone What's special about this book is the setting that Harry has a vicious tongue, which is very rare in HP fan fiction, and the Quidditch writing is also very passionate. After reading it, I was so obsessed with this book that I couldn't find an equally good-looking setting even after searching through Tomato. For those who were persuaded to quit from the beginning of the third grade, please stay and read it. It is really beautiful and the writing is really different! Each chapter has something I really like. Author, please update! ! !

It's rare for you to see an author with such mature writing skills on Tomato. I almost wonder if the author has started a small account. The author has obviously thought about the outline carefully, which makes the whole book read very smoothly and the rhythm is very well controlled (at present, it seems that it is mostly daily oriented, with little involvement in the main plot of the original work. I don't know how it will be written after Voldemort returns). In addition to the logical and self-consistent story and character behavior, the author's handling of the ignorant emotions of boys and girls is also excellent... It is not deliberate, and it naturally reveals the personality differences of the characters, as well as the seemingly non-existent "sense of distance" (and the protagonist has a very strong subjectivity, she is a very individual girl, and probably everyone will like her (especially readers)). * Some digressions: In fact, I really like reading novels that are not deeply connected to the main plot... I think the charm of the original author (this kind of subject) lies in this. She is showing us another side of the magical world. This is not only Rowling's and Harry's magical world, but also our magical world that countless people are looking forward to... I am very grateful to the author for bringing us such an excellent work. From what the author said, it seems that the author went out to play. I hope the author has a good time! Then come back for more... (Devil Whispering)

I have read a lot of heartthrob-type hp fanfics, but the emotional lines in this book are too relaxed. Some heartthrob novels look too Mary Sue and you will get tired of them after reading too much. This book is very good. It has a sense of youthfulness for boys and girls, mainly because the heroine has a lot of personal charm. The author's writing style is also very good. It will not make people think that the writing is a sloppy account or a novice. It is good to read.

Emotional scenes are actually quite to my liking, especially the fake-boned parts. But the character's personality is untenable, and the Snake Yard OOC is actually nothing. But, how should I put it, especially for the female protagonist, the double standards in details will be very embarrassing. It's okay to have shortcomings, but some shortcomings will not make the character attractive but will make the character a bit lousy. Let's say 8.5.

So cool! The dialogue is natural, the person pronouns are correct, the plot flow is not OOC at all, the emotional connection is very strong, the personality of each character is very obvious, the heroine's personality is also very good, although it is not a typical Snake Yard personality (but it is consistent with it), the various scenes can immediately come to mind, especially what makes me sigh is the dialogue inside, which is very natural, as if the characters are really talking! Awesome

It's so beautiful! It's so beautiful! Every couple in it is very cute. I like Draco better. Who knows how childhood sweethearts love each other? And Fred is also full of sexual tension. That is, can you bring George with you (because at present, his relationship line is not very obvious) and the wooden senior... Ah ah, I love you😘 Come on, Senior Mu Mu, you must serve!

I like it so much! The writing is very life-like and the writing style is great. It feels like I have seen the story in the Slytherin cellar that was not included in the original work. And there is no OOC. For example, Draco's original character design was not lovable, but there is no OOC in this book and it is surprisingly cute! I like the interactions between the heroine and others. Although the writing says there are few emotional lines, there are a lot of cute little sweet spots! The author is shaking, I can't wait to drop a million words immediately [Adoration] [Flowing kiss] [Flying kiss] [Flying kiss] [Flying kiss]

A heartthrob with a sense of humor and no embarrassment, the heroine has a very fun personality. I fell in love with her before the other male protagonists. She is so cute hahaha. The first chapter was so funny that I stayed with it. The conversation and psychological activities between the heroine and Cedric in the second chapter were also very funny. Later, there were the advantages of the lion and the snake writing about each other [face-covering] [face-covering] [face-covering] Possible shortcomings: The heroine is a Quidditch commentator, and there is a lot of Quidditch. If you don't like this kind of thing, it may not be suitable for watching. I personally don't like it either, but it's much better than the original novel without any clues, and the author's writing is quite interesting. I highly recommend reading it [Love] It was so funny to confront Harry, Draco being jealous all day long was also fun, everyone was nice, but I have to say, Scarlett had a crush on Xiao Duo! ! ! This is the real deal! ! ! This is the most useful thing! ! ! Can other male protagonists do it? ! ! Please support our Xiaoduo as the main palace [Learned][Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts] I like Cedric too, he is a gentle and emotionally intelligent, handsome and self-aware guy. When faced with feelings, he will take the initiative to show off his emotions (this man really knows how to show his strengths). Who can stand this [Learned] Quidditch friendly match is so close and the handshake is so good [Learned]

This book is so in line with my taste. It starts with a third-grade heroine who is so charming that she doesn't even know she is stupid (I love her so much!!!). The emotional line is very delicate and I fell in love with it inexplicably right away. The heroine's personality is very charming. I also fell in love with Scarlett while reading the article. Every male protagonist is super delicious. I will eat whoever is mentioned in the article. After reading the original novel, I said that the male protagonist is not OOC at all. After two days, I said that my nasolabial folds have deepened a lot (the interaction is really sweet, and there is no obligation not to rub). It is a very normal view of love, and each has its own deliciousness. Upper-year group: Straight-ball player Wood (Chapter 235 must be used with the recommended BGM. Substituting Wood will really make you love Scarlett for a lifetime), considerate Said (gentle senior, completely guiding lovers, warm and caring), Percy (hot Nerd type, currently: What should I do if I fall in love with my good friend Crush? I can't handle it well~), Fred & George (Fred is really fighting and fighting, very free and easy, but he is surprisingly reliable when it comes to Scarlett. George was still a bystander in the early stage, but he was also fascinated). The same age group: Theodore (who always understands what Scarlett wants to express, has a tacit understanding, prefers action to prove it rather than talking about it, and has many mysteries), Blaise (I won't tell you what the gold content of the fake bone is, my brother is a natural husband... Very dignified, but why won't I tell you behind my back, the subconscious behavior of my brother and sister is very poignant), the arrogant Draco (who is flammable and explosive to people who like Scarlett, has an awkward speech but is very honest physically) , the little dragon who can open his screen), the confrontation with Harry on the track (while others have already entered the track and run a long way, poor Harry is still anxious outside the track, with a venomous tongue and a bit of a slander. How can the number one most hated person not be the first? It is also delicious), Ron (what should I do if I fall in love with my brother's rival?) There is also a male protagonist (right?) Who appears in a few chapters and then loses his role (what a tragedy for a male). Each emotional line has its own value. In addition to the emotional line, the friendship and the interaction between the colleges are also very well portrayed in the article, and the supporting characters also have their own characteristics. Highly recommended! This is not the first hp book I have read in 🍅, but it is indeed the first one where I have read all the contents completely without skipping any works. As a result, it is almost boring to read other books after reading this work, because this one is all based on my preferences. Please keep updating it, it's really beautiful! Looking forward to what follows. Prepare to re-read and write a better book review next time.

The writing in big letters is really great, I couldn't stop laughing when I watched it, it's really a happy atmosphere, and Harry and I are the kind of confrontational couple, and the double-tongued characters are really delicious! You and Draco are the kind of childhood sweethearts who love each other, and the little actions and words that are natural and unconscious are really sweet! And with Blaise, we are the closest people to each other, and your surname will always be Zabini. I can tell with one look that you are really delicious, brother Segao! Theodore and Theodore are also very close to each other. "Montgomery" is his selfishness that is difficult to express. Theodore is a male ghost, and then he and Wood are two woods. When a wood meets another who is even more wooden, I didn't expect that this little Wood will be the first. Come on, I have to dress up carefully before meeting the one I love. I can't help but laugh so hard that I'm always secretly trying to get jealous. Then the Gemini line is also very interesting. Fred is really the kind of funny and humorous troublemaker, and sometimes he's like a senior. Wow, the Quidditch part was so cool, Fred, you just continue to radiate your charm (since they are twins, there should be George, look forward to the story of George later) and of course our Ced, a super gentle senior with a stable and private appearance. There is so much jealousy going on down there, and I want to laugh when I think about it. It reminds me of the time when Wood and Seid met, and they started fighting as soon as they looked at each other. (Does this rise to the level of a house fight? Seed is followed by the entire Hufflepuff. Wood, there is no one behind you, but looking back, they are all love rivals, hahaha) Then there are other people whose characters are really plump, and their friendship lines are super warm, and they have a special feeling that is really great. The atmosphere between the colleges is really good. It should be the only book I have read that has such a sense of belonging to the college, and then The female protagonist is a Quidditch commentator. This is really the first time I have seen this character, and the commentary is very touching and passionate. Also, when playing Quidditch, the big description is really exciting. I can't help but feel it! It feels like being there. Finally, I want to say that the big words are really awesome!

I think this book can become the first novel in HP fanfiction. It is rare for an author to write 800,000 words without breaking the style, and the heartthrob will have a bit of Mary Sue, but this book is acceptable. I will recommend this book when I have time. It is really well written, and the first person seems to be very smooth. I am looking forward to the follow-up. After all, the heroine's character should not be like joining Voldemort's camp, but the friends around her may not. I feel that the heroine fakes her death and changes her identity to secretly plan the plot.

A super nice book. The life of Slytherin written by Zhao'er is very daily, with a sense of life🥹 and it can be considered a slight heartthrob, because Scarlett is completely her personal charm, I think I will fall in love with her🥹 and is very protective of friends. She will comfort and see the good side of others, very warm, and completely regard herself as a member of Slytherin, dedicated to the academy. I think the interaction between her and Draco pokes me the most. Draco has such a childish character. He will be very stressed if he plays the same position as Harry in the Quidditch game, but Scarlett will tell him that Draco is the best seeker in her heart. Really, I think everyone will fall in love with Scarlett's 🥹🥹🥹🥹🤧

It's really good to watch. Although the plot is slow, it comes naturally, and the daily writing is very cute. I feel that Scarlett is the favorite of our snake house. The interactions with every character, including Pansy and Hermione, are very vivid, and they are all exciting interactions between boys and girls. I don't want to be too upset about the twin Fred, and Wood's public confession! Then Blaise's wetness is just right, and the happy relationship with Harry is also very good. What I have seen before is the good side of Harry's character. In this book, because the heroine is from the Snake House, we can see Harry's poisonous tongue and tit-for-tat side. It's a pity that Theodore is the closest to the heroine. A male guest, but due to his own reasons, he slowly became alienated from the heroine, but he still paid attention to the heroine silently. I saw a lot of books before that included both the parent and ancestral generations, which I didn't really accept. This one mainly focuses on the descendants, which didn't make me feel embarrassed at all. I just want to blow up this book! !

Scarlett has strong ambition and vitality, and will try her best for every game. She is an excellent growth-oriented heroine! (There are a lot of Quidditch plots in this article. If the author is addicted to football, he will write a few chapters of passionate games. It is very enjoyable to read) The secret of her life experience has not yet been revealed, and she is in a reorganized family, but her mother and brother give her plenty of love, and her good friends all get along well with her (the snake house is friendly, and the friendships with girls like Pansy Daphne are also warm every day). She is sweet-tongued in front of her elders and friends, and will sincerely praise others for their shining points; she is venomous and merciless in front of her rivals, and she is unequivocal in starting a fight. (Like her and hate her are two extremes) I originally preferred a 1v1 love story, but Scarlett is so cute! She is a bit slow towards feelings, and it is still early for her to fall in love, but the reasons why every boy likes her are very reasonable, and the author depicts the ignorant heartbeat in a natural and beautiful way. (I really like her and Harry's vindictive enemy model, and I also like the interaction between her and Wood's two Quidditch heads. Of course, the other boys are also very cute. Scarlett can just enjoy her youth!)

Very nice! I thought I had read all of Tomato's HP, but there are still some good articles! To be honest, even if there is no love element, this article is super well written. When reading fan fiction, one of the biggest issues is how to write about things other than the original work and the movie, and write them out in a reasonable way. For example, this book writes about Quidditch friendships, career planning lectures, and Quidditch finals. . . In this way, that wonderful world becomes fuller! In fact, I have never been very interested in Quidditch-related plots, maybe because this plot has been written countless times in various fandoms, but after reading this book, I really felt that even Slytherin, the charm of the partner team is fascinating. I'm really looking forward to Scarlett showing off her skills as captain. There are all kinds of cps, and I like Blaise the most at the moment. He is surprisingly charming. Maybe because of his brother's status, his character is much more interesting than a simple playboy. The part where the medical wing was jealous was really a hallucination. He knew that his sister would be with someone else and secretly cried in bed hhhhh. And then there's Draco! He is really cute. Who can say no to Xiaolong? He can be said to be the latest to mature in the Snake Garden boy group, but it is at this stage that he still retains a kind of protected innocence, which makes him super cute. His jealous look is also very cute, so we, Scarlett, doted on ❛˓◞˂̵✧Wood's date invitation even more! It's so exciting to send out date invitations when the crowd is buzzing! It's just that their first date didn't go well, and they were very unsatisfied. I wonder if there will be more progress between them before Wood graduates, such as a kiss or something [laughs] It's a pity that Sirius can't be on the table, and the big dogs are also very fragrant~ Besides, Fred is really a charmer, when will the meal be served!

This is absolutely the best HP fanfic I have ever seen... Hehe🤤🤤🤤The character design is simply perfect, and the timeline and logic are very good, and can completely correspond to the original work. Even the author's writing style is very delicate, and many small details are well written. The emotional lines are also enjoyable, many emotional interactions are very delicate and addictive, and the heroine Scarlett is really strong. Compared with some romances on the market that are written to create the perfect male protagonist, this novel is completely centered on the female protagonist. You can see the unique character of the heroine. She will risk everything for her friends, firmly defend her rights, and will not be swayed by other people's subjective opinions. She is really charming. And using Quidditch as the starting point, the protagonist likes the hobby and talent of Quidditch, and it really makes the character outstanding. Every character is alive, with joy and sorrow, moments of quarrel, anger, and grievances. The plot is not embarrassing or abrupt at all, and the adolescent excitement and conflicts between children are vividly written clearly. I really like Harry's character in it. Compared with many people who would write Harry as infatuated or cute, I actually think Harry's venomous tongue in the original book is more interesting. And the twins in it are really touching, and they can transform a single love into many different emotions. Many details and emotions are hidden in the words and actions, which makes people feel that the words have become alive. The protagonist is not an inexplicable heartthrob. In fact, from many incidents, Scarlett's responsibility, kindness and cuteness can be seen. Falling in love with Scarlett is completely human. . . Highly recommended! This is the most beautiful article!

The plot is very smooth, the emotional lines are very delicate, and the characters are also very three-dimensional. Among the many emotional lines, I feel that the most successful one is the confrontation with Harry. Firstly, it is because it is not common to write about confrontation with Harry and a very venomous tongue. Secondly, because the author's writing style makes the transition of the whole plot very natural. Harry's line must be the brightest point of this article. So can you add some scenes with Harry? Goddess [Send Heart] The confrontation between Harry and Scarlett is too sexual. Secondly, the second highlight of this article is that the emotional line is not obtrusive and will not bias the plot for the sake of emotion (in fact, I have read many articles with this problem). Although the main line has not been written much, this kind of long article solves the problem of streamlined writing (that is, retelling the original work and then slightly adapting it) The third highlight is that each emotional line is very clear. It does not say that the two emotional lines are too similar, but that the straight shots should be made and the forbearance should be tolerated (here I would like to praise the goddess's confrontational path, which is really great). The other emotional lines are also very smooth. Every time I see a sweet place, I have to slow down for a few seconds. There are also some places that are very sour (but not many). This sourness makes up for the feeling of being tired from too much sugar. The fourth highlight: I really want to praise the goddess. In fact, very few people write about Quidditch, because writing about Quidditch requires a strong thinking logic. If you don't connect at all, the writing will be very messy. But goddess, your writing is a bit beautiful. It not only writes about Sijia's personal charm (smart and careful) A decisive yet gentle and patient baby), he also wrote about the dedication of everyone on the Slytherin team for Quidditch (especially a plot about Flint), and vividly brought to life the stale Quidditch in other fanfics, and the friendly matches were simply beautiful (the group portrait is burning) Goddess, give me a lot of updates, I will definitely finish this book [blowing kiss] (It's not right to tie it in one day [crying]) Finally, Goddess, I beg you to give Harry more scenes. I really love this line so much [blowing kiss]

To be honest, I personally have always preferred the parent generation, and I always felt that it was difficult to find the type I like in the sub-generation. As a result, I just searched and downloaded it to MP3. When I watched it, wow, it really hit my heart. It was completely developed by Scarlett, and made me fall in love with the Slytherin group. The characters are very vivid, and everyone's story with Scarlett is different. It's really very attractive. Especially the Geminis. When I first watched it, I thought George was not there, but during that game, admit it, George, you were also obsessed with Scarlett. Ron's words were very obvious. In the divination class, Scarlett pinched him, and he said that he seemed to have a ring. What's going to happen? When I actually watched it, it was at night. I covered my mouth desperately, for fear that I would laugh out loud and disturb others. They were all a group of cute babies. Others felt that they were all famous and good-looking. I originally wanted to save some, but forget it, I couldn't help it, it was really good-looking! My wife is really powerful! ૮₍˃̶ꇴ˂̶₎ა Really, it is another day to be amazed by the author's writing style. No matter how you look at the bunch of fairy-like young lovers, there will always be cps that make me laugh. I can't help it, everyone is like this, and Sijia is so cute. It is no exaggeration to say that there is no meal replacement in this work, because this is really the first one I have watched. The author said that it describes Quidditch in so many pages. I also learned about the charm of this sport through the author's writing and Scarlett's perspective. It's really , Scarlett loves Quidditch, she is really suitable for Quidditch, just like what Fred said, on the field, the fastest thing is the brain. Scarlett's charm is fully demonstrated in Quidditch. It is really difficult for me not to be moved by Scarlett [Bird Food Masterpiece]

A very nice HP fanfic. Originally, I rarely read books where the main character is Slytherin, but this one really attracted me! ! ! A brief review, I hope more people will take a look! The first is the plot, which is the most important thing in a novel. What this book does well is that it not only has the main line of the original work, but also has its own original plot, and even the original plot accounts for more. For example, the description of the Quidditch scene and the emotional drama of the heroine's baby are particularly exquisite. It's wonderful, especially the Quidditch part. It's rare to see the author describe it in such detail and analyze the advantages and disadvantages of each person's game. This part is carefully conceived by the author at first glance. It is very interesting. Even in the original work, it is rarely mentioned in such detail. The emotional line part is even more delicious. I will elaborate on it later! Then in terms of character creation, the author is really good at grasping the cuteness of a character. Not to mention the heroine Scarlett, she is a very beautiful, cute, considerate and good baby, and has a touch of cold humor. I think what further demonstrates his skill is being able to brilliantly describe characters that were not much mentioned in the original work, such as Blaise and Theodore, both of whom are very good. I even found some good points in the villain Flint (?), And I don't like Malfoy very much, but the author really wrote Malfoy so cutely! And Harry, I feel that many authors can't grasp this character very well, but Harry in this book is really venomous, hahahaha, it's very realistic! ! There is no need to worry about the writing. After reading novels for so many years, I feel that the author's writing is very sophisticated and fluent. I really like the humorous points that violate expectations. It really made me laugh out loud late at night. Hahaha, I read a lot of light-hearted fandoms. To be honest, it feels like I just slapped together some Internet memes, but this one is really a very natural violation of expectations. On the surface, the heroine's thinking is too divergent, but behind it is the author's humorous soul! Finally, let's talk about the emotional line. Scarlett is indeed very charming. I am Harry and really look forward to the confrontation with the lovers. I feel that they will be arguing and kissing each other in the next second. The author and teacher also said that the confrontation with the lovers was her original intention in writing (it seems to have such an impression), I will keep waiting! ! And I also have an xp that is pseudo-orthopedic, so Blaise and Scarlett are also very determined by me. I feel that I am still in the stage where the girl lets go if she wants to be free. I kind of want to see him go crazy for love in the later period... Draco is still a primary school student in my love, and his ability to continue depends solely on the maternal love of the heroine's baby (?) Although cute, I feel that he needs to grow up hard later to be worthy of the heroine's baby. Nott does not appear much, but everything he does is solid. And Mu Mu-senpai is a blockbuster, and it's also very delicious! ! Said's progress is a bit behind, but I'm optimistic about you, after all, the heroine likes your face hahaha. Oops, there are too many to mention. Everyone comes to see them. Every pair of CPs is delicious. Now I have just finished reading it and I am writing a review. This is also the first long review I have written on Tomato. I am very happy to have such an author who greatly inspires love! ! ! I will keep chasing it and wait for the end! ! Why haven't I posted anything even after writing so many words? Enter the long comment area. Wuwuwuwuwu.

The teacher is great, and the plot is very interesting. Scarlett has her own hobbies and abilities, and is very charming. The emotional lines so far are all very delicious😋. I used to have no feelings for Wood, but after reading the teacher's writing, I really found it very cute, and the one with Harry. The confrontation is also very difficult. The two are born out of pure hatred. Blaise's brother-sister relationship is particularly tense. Coupled with Fred's temptation from time to time, on the contrary, it may be that the heroine is too doting on Draco and is not enlightened. Is there no other stimulation for Draco's emotional line? In fact, I like gentle people like Cedric, but I don't have that much interaction with Scarlett, which is a pity! In the end, the interactions between Scarlett and Pansy, Davlin, Hermione and others who gradually established friendship were also very cute. Come on, teacher, don't be too tired [sending heart] [sending heart]

The writing is good. The plot is good. A heartthrob hp worth watching. The plot is not cookie-cutter and very novel. Very nice. Then there are a few suspected male protagonist backup characters whose attitude towards the female protagonist made me feel the need to torture them emotionally. Such as Theodore. The heroine has a very unique personality. Being a Quidditch commentator is also unique. The narrative perspective is also unique. Very nice. And the friendship with Pansy and Daphne is also very good. The writing is also good, and it doesn't make me feel that the Slytherins get along awkwardly or unnaturally. The whole article is cute, cute and funny, and I feel like everyone is cute. Follow-up: (0515) I catch up on the latest novel after a long time. The plot is not boring at all. I am a person who easily stops reading novels. But this book is completely in line with my taste (I forgot about the plot until I was hoarding it, so it took me a long time to continue reading it). The heroine and Harry follow the original plot and it feels very natural. The heroine is also very well written. The same goes for the emotional line, which comes naturally. George is not on the table yet, this man is still assisting Fred Harry is half on the table. I think this man is not aware of his feelings yet, but he actually cares about the heroine. I get along so well with Blaise, I really like this couple. And Draco is also good. I heard from the author that their relationship may be a little frustrated. I am looking forward to it. After all, Draco is still a child in his mind. Hehehe, it is best to bully and cry. Fred's description here is particularly weird. Forgot to mention Wood, the characters here are all very charming. Wood's direct play is really touching. He is the first person to invite the heroine on a date. Theodore is pretty good too. The friendship between the heroine and the girl in it is also very beautiful. It is not an embarrassing plot. You can really feel the warmth and naturalness of their relationship. It is really delicious without female rivalry (as a straight woman, it is really good not to have a gl. Although I am not angry, I am not cold either. Love is not the only thing that attracts people)

Hey hey hey, it's very pretty and very pretty. It's the first time I've seen this setting where the heroine is the narrator. It's very novel and interesting. Ahhhh, Scarlett is really cute. So far, in order of my favorites, from oldest to youngest, they are: Harry (this Harry is so well written), Blaise (pseudo-bone hehehe), Draco (this little dragon is so cute), and Fred. The author's writing style is also very close to the original work, and the characters are not OOC, which is super delicious [please update] The first-person perspective is also great, and it better reflects Sijia's cuteness. Sijia is really cute, and her little sister is so cute. The plot of Ron admitting the wrong person made me laugh to death. So you are also obsessed with your sister? It doesn't matter. Falling in love with your sister is as easy as breathing. ^ω^

Very cute... I don't usually like to read children's novels because they feel quite easy to be OOC, but this one is really cute for everyone. Scarlett is also a very serious and responsible baby, and you can definitely see her unique charm in her. After pushing it to the homepage, I catch up on the latest updates in one go, it's so delicious 😋 Looking forward to more updates!

Help, it's super good-looking. I was originally attracted by the title of the book. After tasting it carefully, it's a wonderful product. First of all, the daily life at Hogwarts is written very realistically and has a cinematic feel. It is very immersive and not superficial. Each scene does not have the feeling of being a running account because it is about daily life. The transitions are also in place, and every character is vividly portrayed, whether it is the protagonist or the supporting role. The relationship between the students is great, and even if they are in opposing houses, there is no feeling of deep hatred (I hate that some books make the Lion and Snake Houses so incompatible that they feel like they have to be discussed even if they fall in love. In fact, the emotions of this grade come and go quickly, of course gossip is more important~) There is no messy bloody plot, including the first-person perspective, which I also think is great, just like I am really experiencing the Hogwarts career with the heroine. Everyone has an if line. I will love the love rat to death! ! ! ! (Also, when I was playing Huo Yi, I was such a god. I could picture everyone walking through the corridors, practicing on the Quidditch field, and running to class after dinner in the banquet hall with books in their arms.)

It's rare to find this kind of novel that has a lot of jokes but isn't deliberately vulgar! I couldn't help but laugh out loud while watching it. Our Scarlett is a very cute baby with a very distinct personality, and her interactions with everyone are also very interesting! I particularly like the descriptions of group portraits, scenes, and details. They always remind me of specific scenes. What impressed me deeply was the Quidditch match when it rained and the interaction between everyone in the Slytherin lounge. It made my heart melt. It is very well written and very interesting. I will always follow the author!

The teacher really wrote very, very well😋, the writing style is very comfortable to read, and the plot of getting along with everyone feels warm (a bit micro-group portrait?), There is no brainless female competition at all, and not only there is no OOC situation, but the personality charm of everyone is written out. The high score is completely true [shy] By the way, the rice in the orthopedics department is delicious! [Shy][shy]

Woo hoo hoo, I'm going to cry. It's so beautiful. Let me talk about the heroine first. She has a distinct personality and is super charming. I want to wear a book. Sister Scarlett Kills Me is not only not a silly and sweet piece of wood, but it is written appropriately and makes people afraid to be pretentious. There is also a touch of humor in what the sister said. There is no situation where there is no rape. The interaction described by the author has a sense of atmosphere, and it feels like the readers will be moved. The most important thing is that the whole book is different from the poorly told main plot. It adds a lot of Quidditch clips and is completely not boring at all! ! My daily routine is completely enjoyable! The emotional line is also very interesting. It is not the forced foursome of Snake Yard Lion Heart. It completely makes people feel the charm of Snake Yard. Moreover, the sister is protective of her shortcomings. Hmm, just think about it, but I am a little shaken. Moreover, the interaction with men can make people feel more of the charm of the heroine, instead of being a tool-like character. It also makes people feel that love emerges very naturally. Falling in love with Scarlett is as easy as breathing, and the men in the book are not one-sided, but diverse. It really makes me feel integrated into the book. Even though I am currently following more than 5 books, I don't feel blocked at all when I see the first page of the new update. I can catch the episode and think of the author at a glance. Moreover, I think the update is very stable. The author will also say it when he is on a business trip, and I will not be nervous at all. Summary: Worth a look But Don't be proud! ! ! Come on author! I believe you can update 100 chapters! ! Come on hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha! Pussy (>ω<)