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The novel is very concise and clear. The protagonist travels to a master who failed to overcome the tribulation and lost all his cultivation. After being surrounded by a group of yandere apprentices and old lovers, he begins to teach and train [laughter] oh yes, it's out [cool] No, I mean you came out of the dark room, what the hell are you guys thinking [face covering] In fact, they are the same person before and after time travel, they are both a "man" [laughter] Although there are more and more flaws, I will live with this setting for the rest of my life. [Cool] Hey hey hey, why haven't you reached the next "climax" yet?

It is an extremely rare harem story because the others have been blocked. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

It took me three nights to read the entire book, but it didn't end? With so many chapters, the characters are very full, not that they are special, they look quite comfortable, but there are too few normal people. Ji feels that after reflection, he has become more normal. The only bad point is that the author often inserts a sentence in the article that the protagonist's soul was a man. It feels unnecessary. I read Lily just to read Tie Tie, and read BG's own novels. If it is to make up the word count, pretend I didn't say it. Very good novel Still good

If you like to read 10 yandere vs the master who pretends to be calm, you must read this book [Shy]

This book is really the best book I have read in several years. The author's character creation is very successful. Especially our heroine, she is so beautiful and kind. Her every smile and every breath attracted me deeply. After she was injured, I felt unparalleled pain. Let's talk about our male protagonist again. He is handsome, charming and graceful. The love between the male and female protagonists is so touching. When they confided in each other, I not only burst into tears, but when they were separated by the villain, I hated myself for not being able to travel through the book to save them. The whole book is rich in content and is a good book worth reading!!!

As a reader who read this book as the initial starting point, the subject matter and writing style are good, but the biggest point of this book is that the protagonist and Bai Yueguang (Qin) have never been able to get along. Bai Yueguang's character is too paranoid, and it is heavier than the cp character in the books I have read (referring to similar characters) Yandere is too paranoid), but after more than 200 chapters, Bai Yueguang is suppressed by others because of her personality. I hope she can "optimize" her body and let the protagonist accept it again. Some people just take it lightly when they see that it is still an emotional game. I hope the author will pay more attention to it [Blow kiss] I typed the wrong name of Bai Yueguang (Ji) before I got it right [face covering] [face covering]

Very good, the plot is very compact, and the female substitute for the male has many disciples is also good👌🏻

I've already recommended it to my friends, I can't let myself get frustrated by myself [laughing evilly] [Like] I think Ji's feelings for Lao Yue are actually somewhat sincere, but his character is a little too twisted. As for the eldest disciple and the second disciple, I even feel that they are just purely possessive, which may be due to Lao Yue's physique. Although the eldest disciple can be regarded as a relatively loyal and obedient one, I think it is more to satisfy his possessive desire. As for Lao Yue's master, it's true that he is a scheming, deep-minded, bt, smart, capable of manipulating people's hearts, tricks, deep pua master, and a senior dog trainer. One of my favorite characters, I can't wait to see Lao Yue's reaction after she falls off the horse. (I'm really sick It's good to watch. Good luck. Normal relationships are healthy, but abnormal love is really sweet.

It's really exciting [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss], show me how excited you are

This book is really the best book I have read in several years. The author's character creation is very successful. Especially our heroine, she is so beautiful and kind. Her every smile and every breath attracted me deeply. After she was injured, I felt unparalleled pain. Let's talk about our male protagonist again. He is handsome, charming and graceful. The love between the male and female protagonists is so touching. When they confided in each other, I not only burst into tears, but when they were separated by the villain, I hated myself for not being able to travel through the book to save them. The whole book is rich in content and is a good book worth reading!!!

The plot is quite novel and the character creation is good, but when will the box be opened at the beginning😭How can the characters of Su Jiuer and Lan Caidi be rounded out? It can't be Yaojun's fault🤓It is also said that the Southern Xinjiang chapter is the chapter of the sword master, but the latest plot only mentions it a few words, it seems that the Southern Xinjiang chapter is a bit long😋Come on, the author, don't let the sword star and the incompetent husband😭😭😭😭

The routines are clear and the laughs are dense. The protagonist is likeable, and all the apprentices are yandere Shura. There is tension in the scene. Everyone has different characteristics. The characterization is delicate and clear, and the logic is not awkward. Personally, I think it is a book for late-night decompression and entertainment (serious decompression [laughing])

It's pretty good. After reading dozens of chapters, the heroine's pull is very interesting. For now, I highly recommend it if you like this genre. The writing style is also good enough, and the occasional minor mistakes do not affect the reading. It's a pity that I had to change a lot of things. We are almost at chapter 100. The heroine is really weak (bu). The biggest flaw is that she has been changed too much. There are no other bad points. I think the atmosphere is pretty good, but if you haven't read any abuse stories, you might feel uncomfortable.

This book is very good to read and very sad [crying] [crying] [crying] I feel that Lao Yue is so miserable; but why is my IQ often not online [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] To be honest, every character in this book is very unique [sending my heart] After more than 600 chapters, there are more than 10 apprentices (referring to the main ones) senior sister Yan Ruyan, second senior sister Su Jiuer... Everyone has a paranoid color (except Han Tong, Bi She is actually a guarantee [laughing]) I like Su Jiu'er better, hehe [sending my heart] She is a very straightforward person, but she is also the one who hurt Lao Yue more deeply. It is a bit uncomfortable to see the plot of Lao Yue being wronged later [crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] Yan Ruyan's misunderstanding has been solved, but she has not yet (now it's toot) The one who made me have the biggest emotional fluctuations is also my favorite character in this book - Luo Qingchan I cried after seeing her death [crying] [crying] But in the later chapters she "lived" again, which made her a little happier. But when I saw the first chapters, she didn't know whether she was Luo Qingchan or Luo Caiyun, which was quite sad. [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] I hope she is still her, she is still the same Luo Qingchan, at least she has her Luo Qingchan's emotions, thoughts, and memories [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] Although Luo Qing Chan's love for Lao Yue is not pure... But I think she taught Lao Yue a lesson before she died (although Lao Yue remembers food and not fights [smile] [smile]) In short, Luo Qingchan was very successfully portrayed by the teacher. Other characters also [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] The misunderstanding section reminded me of "poor people must be hateful; hateful people must have hateful sufferings" [crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying]

The overall look and feel is okay, but the settings and characters seem to have some abnormal brains and insufficient IQ. When I looked at the written level, I heard it was quite advanced and quite strong. There is still a great power in the Tribulation Stage. No matter how weak his cultivation is, his physical strength should be there. It's like a piece of steel bar. No matter how rotten it is, it's still a steel bar, but it's not rotten to the core. If you can cut through the steel bar with an ordinary knife, you can feel the state of the other party. It doesn't feel like a fairy tale, it feels a bit like a romance novel, which is weird. I wonder if anyone has ever encountered a yandere? The blackness value reaches 80 and the love value reaches 80 or 90, and the result is that the behavior is similar to that of a young child. To be precise, when the blackening value is converted into a yandere value, it looks pleasing to the eye. I don't feel like it is a blackening value, but it is a yandere value. So when it comes to the blackening value in general, it actually feels weird when it is converted into a yandere value. There is also the protagonist's performance, which is not the same as the original character. No one doubts that it may be a world repair bug. How to say it? Overall it's okay, but the strong ones don't look like the strong ones, and the weak ones don't look like the weak ones. It feels weird. This is just for reference. Don't not read it because of your comments. Only personal opinion

Not bad ((*^∀^))👍🏻No thunder and stable, it's a difficult drama about a sickly man who is 1.8 Meters tall and survives among all the sick people.

Gods vs. Man is mainly about watching the tension between gods and men. This work is already Tomato's Mujica. All the members are very close to gods but far away from people [laughing][laughing]

To be honest, this book is one that I have read. It is one of the better ones among the many heroines. I just read it when I was bored at first. Then I suddenly discovered this book, so I read it out of curiosity, and found that the author wrote it very well, and the various plot scenes are also very vivid. I feel that the image of each character is very three-dimensional.

How to say it? Master and apprentice are pulling together to the limit, I am very happy! Especially the fourth disciple, as clean as a blank sheet of paper! Disciple and brother are all based on this master's aunt. This is too wonderful. It is simply a fighter in Xikang.

The characterization and description of Shura Fields in this book are very exciting, and the plot design is so tight and tight that I wanted to continue reading it. So much so that I couldn't sleep until after four o'clock in the morning last night... It is indeed a novel worth following! ! This is my first time watching this subject, and I think it's quite good.

It's a good read, I love reading it, it's full of forced love + the system's pull, the characters are interesting and not draggy, every point of conflict is written on my favorite point, the length is not long and there is no watering down at all, reading it in one go is super decompressing, I'm really lucky to have found this kind of good article when I was short of books. I'm so lucky to have found such a good article when I was short of books. I highly recommend it.

The crematorium and Shura field are well depicted, and the emotional lines are more vivid. However, I personally feel that the heroine is a bit aggrieved and a little sadistic.

I need more torture, I want to see rivers of blood, the protagonist is majestic in front but soft and soft behind, it's so delicious

This book is still okay. It can be said that there is no holy lady. Everyone is acting for their own goals and interests. Some of the protagonist's disciples are for the protagonist and some are to survive on the protagonist. And the protagonist cultivates these disciples to reach a higher realm through the so-called "red earth". Although the protagonist is always frustrated, it is all for a higher benefit. It is a good book and worth reading.

The routines are clear, the laughs are dense, the protagonist is likeable, and the yandere Shura scene of all the disciples is tense. Everyone has different characteristics, the characterization is delicate and clear, and the logic is not awkward. Personally, I think it is a book for late-night decompression and entertainment (serious decompression).

The overall structure of this novel is complete, the main line of the story is clear, the plot advances at a moderate pace, and there are both foreshadowing and turning points, which can capture the readers' interest in reading. The character creation is relatively three-dimensional, the protagonist has a distinct image, the supporting characters have their own characteristics, and the emotional line and plot line are naturally combined. The narrative logic is smooth and the world view setting is reasonable. Although there are slight improvements in details or rhythm, the overall degree of completion is high and it is a work worth reading.

I really like it. It is a rare good book. I just hope that the author can have more interactions with Prison Ji. Also, there are too few roles for the apprentices like Lao 7 and 8. I hope the author can be more balanced with a bowl of water, or write about Prison Ji turning into a yandere. In fact, multiple people can do it. There is no need to only interact with one person every night every month and then ignore the others.

It's super beautiful and updated very frequently. I hope it won't be locked up in a dark room forever. (In prayer)

It's so exciting!!! It's so refreshing!!! What a great wine! I really like this book. I feel so happy just by reading it! It's like running 50 kilometers in the desert without drinking a drop of water, wearing a cotton-padded jacket and being exposed to the sun, and then suddenly drinking ice water, stimulating the cerebral cortex, short-circuiting the nerves, and making the whole body twitch. It's so exciting! This is what I want to see in the plot. Teeth!!!! It feels so good! So beautiful

The plot is quite novel, and in terms of characters, the protagonist has a strong ability to withstand stress. The protagonist does not live like the protagonist. I am afraid it will be restarted if it is someone else. In short, the plot can be brighter and not put too much pressure on the protagonist.