My Little Pony: the Second Senior Sister Just Wants to Learn Magic for Fun

The writing is excellent, the plot is compact, the protagonist is calm and sometimes a little bit naughty, gentle and polite to others, and is a reliable adult (not the kind that time travels through the brain and looks like a silly Baitian, which is cool). The key is his own desire for knowledge and the flexible use of knowledge. Sapiosexual ecstasy is my favorite character. I have had enough of silly Baitian and a protagonist whose strength appears out of nowhere (relying on the system, a gift from nature, or something else). It is still this kind of strength that he has learned on his own. It is cool to watch. And the other heroine is the only positive review. Although I also like m6 and several princesses, and their interaction with the protagonist, I think it's good (either cb or cp), but I can do it myself, but if I really write np, I will die (referring to other articles, the author's writing style is very comfortable for me, even if he really writes about the harem, I can still read it, he is a very flexible bottom line 😋)

Let's talk about the advantages first: the writing is smooth, the plot is clear, and the plot is very funny. Those who like Iron Break will have a lot more laughs. The protagonist is very well portrayed. The time traveler's arrogance and superiority that he didn't realize he had, and his insight into thinking he could control the script and control the plot were written out and recognized and corrected. This is very rare. Secondly, the character of the protagonist is one that I personally like very much. He is very human, very rational, and a stranger who has calculated and measured almost all relationships and things. This is a strong contrast with ponies in Equestria, whose nature is friendship and love. It is very subtle. This kind of vague estrangement and distance between relatives and friends will make the protagonist out of reach, which will generate more emotions and connections. I have to say this is very delicious, a collision of rationality and sensibility. Then there are the shortcomings: the author was a little too fond of the iron collapse in the later shared dream plot. The plot is really like Pinoconi, and there are many elements of Omphalos. Not only does this make me a bit embarrassed to watch it after playing Iron Breaker, but it also feels a bit out of touch with Little Malia's worldview and a bit empty. But since the protagonist is not a pony in the first place, bringing things that do not belong to the current world view may be part of the character design... Generally speaking, after the update so far, all the previous plots are very good, and the subsequent common dream plots can be watched according to your own taste. Above, you can refute and question my views. This is normal. Each individual has his or her own Hamlet, but please do not attack me. This is just my personal opinion and recommendation.

So perfect 😍 There is no character collapse in this book, nor is it deliberately discrediting the protagonist group or OOC. The author's ideas are also very good, the plot is on-line, and the characters are on-line. The author has clear thinking and ideas, and will not have the situation of digging a hole in the front and not filling it in the back (currently). There will be no situation where the latter cannot face the front. The writing style is also okay, not the kind of AI flow writing. The protagonist created by the author is also very good. He has correct outlook on life and an online IQ. He is very cute when he is unconventional and irregular at times. He is not that old-fashioned. I hope the author can keep updating until the end and the article will not collapse. More chapters added every day🤗 It's really beautiful! The author's understanding of the original work is very profound and unique, and the author's imagination is also very large. There are animation settings and some comic settings, and sometimes a little bit of Bengtie is interspersed (but not too much. People who have never played Bengtie can still read it without much impact) Not OOC at all! ! ! Restore it to only one sentence, and you can know who said it was M6. The portrayal of the protagonist is super good. Just like the title of the book, the protagonist just wants to learn magic for fun. She is a very rational person, but has a moral bottom line. I fell in love with the protagonist halfway through the book. Perfect. I just feel that since the senior sister entered the human world, there have been relatively few emotional lines... Basically, the protagonist is discovering the truth. I want to see the emotional lines of the author😭 Also, the updates are really slow... Every one or two days during holidays, and every three or four days during normal times. I'm going crazy [lying on the ground] [dark crawling] [distorted] [slowly crawling on the ground] [dark crawling] [dark crawling] [dark crawling] [dark crawling] * Editor 2: Originally it was five stars Except for a few h-words and rn-words, which appear two or three times in total, which I personally can't accept, everything else is very nice. In fact, I still hope that the author will change it a lot. After all, it is a female video article. Also, I heard from others that there were a lot of iron-collapse elements in the dream scene. I didn't object to it because I'd never played it, but you can also see a lot of iron-collapse elements from other small places, em... I hope there are less of them.

Other novels are confused from the beginning to the middle game and have no goal. They only follow the original plot. In the process, they are cured by m6 and then become a princess and start to take on responsibilities. The life story of the protagonist is a mystery, or the status is noble. There are a lot of these fan novels. But! This one is different. The protagonist has a clear goal. She is not a selfless saint, nor is she a "broken girl". She is emotionally stable, generous in all aspects, and has no inexplicable twists. The author writes very well. I have seen that the author has written about his destiny. I am still looking forward to how the author will write the protagonist to find a new way to successfully embark on his destiny. Other fan fictions are the only truth of Rainbow Cannon, and others cannot compare. I hope the author can write something different. (At least it should be on par with the Rainbow Cannon, and as good as the flying light. It's a pity to have a single CP. I recommend the Celestia [Shy] teacher-student team ~ Super feeling)

Highly recommended I usually don't read new books. Less than 300,000 words is really not enough to read or evaluate the whole book. We are naturally closer to beautiful elements, and Xiao Mawen's evaluation will be increased accordingly. But this book is different. It has a humorous and moving storyline, exquisite and vivid character portrayals, and the author's writing is better than a certain level. I believe that even other original stories can get high praise from me (we also found that the author has accumulated writing skills from previous works) One of the advantages of this article is the creation of a completely innovative plot, which has a unique feeling of not just participating in the plot but truly integrating into the world's life. Xiaoma's novels, or most cute fanfics, mostly describe the story of the established plot, mixed with the unique development of the protagonist's events, including: It is written just to change the situation in one's heart, and those who skip the plot foreshadowing and go straight to twisting the ending will be killed. Fishing in the water / Highly involved. Only the perspective changes, the ending does not change much or there is only a reversal at the node. A passer-by who follows the plot and wanders / single-handedly reverses the entire situation through future knowledge, and faces the world with the arrogance of a transcendent, will be rewarded. Most of the established stories have obvious changes due to the existence of the protagonist. Because the protagonist's every move naturally and reasonably changes the future, original plots will gradually increase in the middle period. Those who enjoy the world through this will be rewarded. Those who integrate the characters into this world without relying on the established plot, have their own likes and dislikes, develop their own bonds, overcome their own difficulties, and carve out the future with their own hands will be rewarded. We may write part of the established plot in the future, but our little protagonist has already flapped her wings before she was born, and what awaits her is a future that our readers cannot imagine. That's exactly what I wanted to see. The driving force behind fan fiction is the desire to see new plots. The author truly loves this world. I was deeply moved and gave him high praise. Everyone is praising you because you do have this level of love, strength, rationality, imagination, delicacy, and time. The hexagon warrior deserves a reward Time means having time to code and energy to code. Delicacy refers to the grasp of emotions. The so-called "Hello~" plot cannot lack this Brainstorming refers to the grasp of the plot. The so-called "can it still be like this?" Plot cannot lack this. Reason is the control of one's emotions. Stories cannot be written like this, "This is wrong." Abnormal and unlikely plots will be eliminated in advance The foundation is the cornerstone of the novel. The so-called "there is a picture and a lot of feeling!" The plot cannot lack this. The last thing is love, which resonates with everyone and says, "I just like reading this." The story written by the author must first be liked by the author. Right~

The protagonist is really very rational. In fact, when I saw that Twilight Sparkle and Spike burned the bookshelf that the protagonist had worked hard to collect and organize, I thought it would be a stereotypical two people quarreling. After some other setbacks, they realized friendship and reconciled. But when the protagonist said that sentence, I have lost my bookshelf, and I don't want to lose you again, I really felt the author's level of thinking (friends are more important than my bookshelf, and I can't vent my anger on my friends because of what has happened. It's really a great idea, and I feel enlightened when I read it). After reading this book, and looking at other comparisons, I discovered the original plot in this book. Very much. It is not completely based on the original plot, and the writing is very natural. She seems to be really living in this world, and based on the original plot, she can also open up the world view. This is really amazing. I really recommend it. The writing is good, the plot is good, and the background setting is also very good. The important thing is the world view and logic in this article. I don't feel there is anything inappropriate. It is really an excellent article. It's really delicious😋. Actually, sometimes I think my requirements are not too harsh. I just want a book with a good plot, good characters, good logic, and a natural setting that is casual and cute. But this book actually meets my requirements perfectly! First of all, the protagonist's three views are boundless. He can reflect on himself, face his own mistakes, and handle problems correctly. This plot is also very delicious. It perfectly integrates the original plot and the original plot without any unnatural feeling. It gives me the feeling that it is a very real story and I feel very immersive. I like both the character design and the character image. She is a blue intellectual pony. Although I don't like learning, I like creatures who like to learn. She is smart and loves to learn. She handles interpersonal relationships perfectly, has a slight sense of alienation, inner emptiness, and stable emotions. After realizing that she has always been separated from other ponies, she will learn to truly trust her friends, and the way she handles problems is really amazing. The logic is also very smooth. Although there are some iron-collapse settings, it looks natural to me, just like My Little Pony itself has iron-collapse. The whole thing is natural. Needless to say, the writing style of the teacher is simply amazing. And you can read this article as a casual daily article, or you can read it as an article about saving the world. And I personally feel that there is no OOC in this article. Every character is as natural as they should be. It is really delicious😋

Perfect, Xiao Ma's new star. I hope it will be as good an article as Senyu Yeyu Huixin Duodao in the future. Also, has the author read Death Sin? I personally hope to see some family elements, otherwise I always feel that the later stages of the daily writing are weak. Anyway, I hope Feiguang will get better and better!

Not bad, I finally found a Pony novel that is not so AI, and the author should not go too fast. The pace in the early stage is very good, and the transformation of the protagonist can be taken slowly in the middle stage. There is no need to be too anxious, but I am curious about whether the senior sister will go to the human world and the parallel world.

It's so beautiful, it has the feeling of a long stream, the emotional expression is just right, and it's updated daily. The theme is novel and interesting, and there are sparkling funny words, such as Amatras and the like. I look forward to the story of Equestria (ઇ•ω‹)

The plot flows very smoothly, so it doesn't seem abrupt. The interaction is very warm and natural. Although I am still friends with the senior sister now, I am already very shy [shy]. Moreover, the portrayal of the protagonist is very good. It feels very attractive. It is probably the charm of the personality. It not only attracts people in the book The pony is also attracting us ˙ᗜ˙ (I really want to know who is 1, please... I will do anything [crying] I stumbled towards you ♿♿ I stumbled towards you ♿♿ I stumbled towards you ♿♿ I stumbled I stumbled towards you ♿♿ I stumbled towards you ♿♿ I stumbled towards you ♿♿ I stumbled towards you ♿♿ I stumbled towards you ♿♿ I stumbled towards you ♿♿ I stumbled towards you ♿♿ I stumbled towards you ♿♿ I I stumbled towards you ♿♿ I stumbled towards you ♿♿ I stumbled towards you ♿♿ I stumbled towards you ♿♿ I stumbled towards you ♿♿ I stumbled towards you ♿♿ I stumbled towards you ♿♿) The update is a bit slow

I don't know how to express all the feelings in my heart. The feeling of Feiguang resonates so much with me. I am also very rational and long to be loved. Under my calmness, I am helpless and crazy. I really like the character Fei Guang, it's very three-dimensional. As the saying goes, if it is too strong, it will break easily. Feiguang's heart is too hard and will break if the impact is too strong. Yuhui's departure shattered Feiguang's high wall. But what happens after it's broken? Do we always have to look forward? I am still in the same place, and she has gradually grown. Fei Guang will one day become a greater magician than Star Swirl, and she will realize what friendship is - not control, but letting go. Of course, one cannot evaluate a work solely by looking at the portrayal of one character. The plot of this book is very reasonable and logical; it also has foreshadowing and leaves suspense. I like the style of writing very much. It is serious when it should be serious, but it does not lose the unique fun of online writing. The slight sense of madness fits the content of the article very well and fits Fei Guang's character design. Although I don't play with rice, it doesn't actually affect the look and feel. It's not necessary to understand the memes, just be happy. No one can deny that this work is excellent and successful. A good story is never afraid of criticism, because more people like it. Sorry for not writing a review sooner. Maybe my words and this evaluation are not important, but I did it voluntarily because it is worth it.

Very smooth writing style (☆▽☆), no embarrassing plot (this is really important, because I am the kind of person who easily embarrasses others (ToT)). At present, the overall style is peaceful, and the characters are wonderful (compared to other novels of the same type, the writing is much better). Also, the author is Daduoduo ੭ ˙ᗜ˙ )੭

I don't know much about the dual heroines of My Little Pony, but the author's writing must be the best My Little Pony novel I've read in recent times. It looks addictive and the characters are vividly portrayed, which is really rare. The many jokes interspersed in the article and the lines of characters in the game do not appear to be obtrusive. 🍅Well done to you! This novel should be at the top of my recommendation list👍 Author, I will always follow you to beg for food (♡>𖥦<)/♥

This is my first time writing a long review, sorry for the bad writing. A very good protagonist, with his own thoughts and plans, and a very qualified adult. It's not the inexplicable confusion or the inexplicable noble status, almost everything is earned by oneself. Feiguang is looking for a future for himself and for his senior sister. Of course, the method is wrong, but this is the shortcoming of the character and the shining point of this book. Feiguang and his senior sister redeem each other, understand each other, and tolerate each other. Looking at the entire two-female protagonist, they are also a very good couple. Fei Guang is rational but not indifferent, emotional but never carried away by emotions, has clear goals and works hard for them, sapiosexuals are really stunned in front of the screen [Blow kiss] This is the first novel that has daily updates and allows me to follow it every day. I wish the author Wen Siquanyong will achieve a thousand updates a day as soon as possible [Blow kiss]

The writing style is very good. Among the Pony novels I have read, it ranks at least in the top three. It also has a calm feeling that I like very much. Secondly, the characters written by the author are also very interesting. They are unique and different from most Pony novels, but there is no collapse of the plot. The story is also very interesting and makes people want to read. I highly recommend it. I recommend reading this book. The only problem for me is that the ponies are all good ponies. It is very interesting to see each pony individually. But if you tie them up to read the cp, I am sorry that I cannot accept it. This is not a book directed at the author, but I am like this for every fanfic with a cp in the protagonist. Maybe it is because I, a vampire, cannot shine in the sunshine called love.

I want to say a lot, but after much thought, I can sum it up to one point: the author really paints the utopian world of Equestria very vividly, and you can really immerse yourself in the pure and sincere feelings of the ponies while reading it. For me, such pure and sincere friendship and family affection really touched the craziest fantasy in my heart - to be loved. Feeling surrounded by people (pony) who truly love me makes me feel like "this is fantasy time!" I really need this kind of heartwarming plot. In addition, the book also shows the protagonist's growth in how he treats his friends. To avoid spoilers, I won't go into details. In short, this book really allowed me to temporarily put aside the complicated interpersonal relationships in reality and appreciate this beauty that may be a little "childish". It perfectly fits my fantasy of happiness and warmth. After catching up on the latest chapter, I feel like my happy fantasy has come to an abrupt end, like a sweet dream has been awakened. I hope the author can hurry up so that we can continue the sweet dream ()

The plot is very warm, and it is worthy of being a childhood memory. I watched these relaxing anime when I was a kid. To be honest, when I recall it now, it feels really good. When I read this novel now, I always have a very relaxing feeling. The plot is very good. The author is very clear in both writing and plot ideas. At the same time, all aspects of the novel are very clear. The emotions and personalities of each character are clearly described. To be honest, I have to apologize to myself and the author. When I first read this novel, I felt a little naive. Then as I read on, I realized that I was wrong. This is not naive, this is memory, this is beautiful~

The first My Little Pony fanfic that I kept reading. The plot, characters and character settings are relatively perfect. I like many settings in the play. At the same time, this novel aroused my interest in reading and made me full of love for him. Especially the relationship between Fei Guang and the senior sister, the emotional disputes, and the psychological description. All I can say is how sweet it is. Personally, I like Fei Guang's birth character setting and the description of Fei Guang's personal character. Mainly like letting Flying Light from the My Little Pony world enter the main plot as soon as possible and Sunset Shimmer from the pony human world discovering the secret of Flying Light as soon as possible.

It's very interesting. My Little Pony is the most logical one I've ever seen. But how will Aurora Yingying and Kexi Guanghui end up in the end? Do you want to remain this hostile? But can they be together? In this case, the contrast is so big, I am so looking forward to it. Kexi Guanghui, who is cold at heart and is white and black, fights with Ji Guanghui in daily life, but at critical moments, Ji Guanghui can be suppressed by Ji Guanghui. When Jiu Guanghui is affected by emotions and cannot think, Ke Xi Guanghui can calmly help her point out the problem and be her only remaining sanity. Just think about it and look forward to it! Just like senior sister and second senior sister

The two heroines are so beautiful. I have collected them. The author keeps writing. Occasionally I run out of inspiration, so it's okay to postpone the update, but don't interrupt it [crying]

It's good, sweet, and beautiful. It's a derivative of the original work, it's reasonable, and the author can even find the specific episode and plot time. 😋👍👍👍👍👍. It's so well written that I feel like it can even be exposed in the human world and the big world later. 😋, Open your heart, and keep the little secrets of the two of you.

It's very interesting. I finally have a setting that I like. The three of them get along very well. I hope it won't stop updating! Don't stop updating! Don't stop updating! Say important things three times, and be sure not to interrupt!

It's so good, it's the best pony fanfic I've ever seen. The words of praise are overwhelming, so I won't go into details. Let's talk about a place that I think is not good (). It's about Feiguang's transformation. Just before and after Kexi Guanghui's appearance, Fei Guang gave me a big change. The pace of the plot has also changed a lot, and I don't know if it's good or bad. Even if Fei Guang used the Nightmare Helmet as a blindfold before, I felt that the writing style was still very relaxed. I regarded Fei Guang as a very young and lively pony (although she may not be that lively in my heart). But after that, the description of Fei Guang decreased and more words were put on ponies such as Kexi Guanghui and Aurora Yingying. My feeling about Fei Guang suddenly changed into the image of a big sister who is well-planned, as if everything is within the plan. The rapidity of this change made me a little surprised, and I was also a little confused about the development of the subsequent plot...

Generally speaking, I would not recommend fan fiction, after all, the protagonists will always follow the plot of the original work (for me, it is better to read the original work directly than to relive the same plot as the original work) But in this book, the protagonist did not follow the original book. She did not follow m6 all the time and look at m6's friendship. Instead, she skipped most of the plot of m6 (it was probably the middle of the book at this time) and added a lot of reasonable original plots. The personality changes of the famous characters who appeared in it were not abrupt (such as the senior sister) The main character is not perfect, she is selfish and arrogant. This character is not reflected in the bright side, but in a conflict, where the protagonist's dark side is mercilessly revealed to readers through the mouths of other ponies. (I won't spoil it) But still, we can't hate this arrogant protagonist, just like the pony who scolded her. Because our protagonist is so dazzling and outstanding, her sincerity will not go unnoticed, but she must also take responsibility for what she does. Even though some of the important plots still follow the original work, due to the intervention of the protagonist, the time of the incident and the subsequent impact are different. Therefore, I hope everyone can enjoy this very high-quality pony fanfic. The only drawback is that the updates are so slow... It pisses me off.

I can only say that this book is really good. Later in the book, the protagonist will be darkened, and then he will be given a sparkling rainbow cannon! Then I just fucked someone sober, but these times may be a bit long, but overall it's good. It depends on how the author writes it later, the plot of the protagonist's darkening, and then making friends, but they are all villains [face covering] Later, I follow Sunset Shimmer and fall in love. I don't know whether it will be in Equestria or the human world. It depends on how the author writes it. If you want to read this book, you can read it. After all, it can be said to be a very good Equestrian fanfic, but the updates are a bit slow.

I have to say, the writing is very good, very good, so good that I was a little surprised. I am too lazy to praise this book too much, because after reading it, I am only thinking about the next plot. Let's talk about the conclusion first. At present, it seems that Lao Feiguang must eat a big wave. This kind of psychology is a bit too abstract and outrageous not only for ponies, but also for humans. A guy who longs for love but is afraid, who loves and believes in the love of others but never believes in his own love, and who coexists with arrogance and low self-esteem. What happened to Feiguang in his previous life as a human being? What kind of trauma we suffered, we have no way of knowing. In addition, the relationship between Feiguang and Yuhui cannot be compensated and alleviated just through this so-called ordinary daily life. Afterglow is the fundamental reason why Feiguang becomes the twisted appearance he is now, and it is also the only thing that can touch Feiguang's heart. Let's put aside the facts and look at the essence. At least in Feiguang's opinion, despite being together for such a long time, he has established good relationships with most of the ponies in Equestria and treats each other quite well. . But this kind of kindness is more like kindness to the original characters who have already been with each other. The same is true for Yuhui. It was precisely because of the other person's unexpected and hurtful behavior that Feiguang was so fascinated by him. In other words, without this experience, Yuhui's status in Feiguang's heart would probably be limited to Twilight Sparkle or Luna or the eldest princess. It's not because of the long experience, but precisely because they knew what kind of pony the other party was from the beginning, so this place responded with love. The opposite teaching material is a nightmare. It is precisely because he knows that the other party is not only irrelevant to him, but even a threat, so Feiguang still wants to let the other party die early. Many posts seem to intentionally or unintentionally convey the feeling that "Feiguang is omnipotent". Even after becoming a god, I think the perception is quite poor - the geniuses in the Genius Club are also Zandar's pawns, and Zandar himself was almost stolen by the Bodhisattva he created. Geniuses are destined to face a major Waterloo because of their arrogance, and now it seems that Feiguang has not faced her Waterloo. Prison Nightmare is undoubtedly a guy who has almost deceived the outside audience. Others only think that this guy is a simple hater, but I don't think this guy is definitely hiding something big. This gambler definitely has the ability to impress Fei Guang and even forget her for the rest of his life. Fei Guang did not personally acknowledge the existence of the other party at the beginning, but he would think about the other party's threat later, and acted a little unprepared for the other party's arrival. Feiguang is not an omnipotent warrior. Her fight with the nightmare born from her memory has just begun. This fight will be far beyond her imagination, and may even push this seemingly omnipotent pony to a desperate situation - because the opponent is herself, and she is a more fearless self. Don't worry about the sounds of the outside world. The self that has not been pressed into a regular shape by the huge machines of the outside world is the self that Fei Guang once wanted to be but could never be. The relationship between Yuhui and Feiguang will definitely not sprout at this time. What is being conveyed now is ambiguous emotions. After all, they are all in the mirror. If Yuhui wants to truly become Feiguang's other half, she must realize or even understand what she meant to Feiguang at that time, understand what kind of pony or person the other person is, understand the other person's heart, the other person's obstacles, the other person's thoughts - This is undoubtedly unacceptable to Fei Guang, but if you want to be happy, you must break this thick wall of heart. Words cannot bear such a heavy mission, nor can they bear such heavy emotions, so we can only fight with real swords and guns.

I was attracted to this book by its cover. I remember the last time I saw it, the cover seemed to be that of an AI. Then seeing how big the change was, I felt a little interested and clicked in. I can only say that I regret not reading it earlier. The overall story is very smooth, and the characters are not OOC. Of course, there is also a mess of Mi family memes. Stew, I already know the truth of the world, and I still hope that the author can fill in the holes he dug, and I also hope that there will be more joy. I am here to double attack [please taste it carefully]. I still like Bentie and My Little Pony. This kind of hybrid text feels relatively new to me. I don't know if there are other books like this.

It's very good. When I first listened to it, I felt it was a bit blurry, but the more I listened to it, the more I felt that this book was really good. I still felt a bit stained at the beginning, but as I read later, it got better. The heroine's character and other aspects are very good, and the description is clear, but there are too few chapters. I hope the author will continue to update, come on!

Alas, this issue is amazing. The flow of the content and the writing are not awkward. It is as sweet as it should be and as cruel as it should be. The most important thing is that the character creation of Feiguang is not abrupt at all, and he did not do any shocking and embarrassing things. This is also a common problem of many protagonists in the article. Moreover, the emotional line between Feiguang and the senior sister is not given at the speed of light, but gradually and step by step. Oh, it is very annoying.

It's a very good Pony novel. The emotional line between Fei Guang and Senior Sister is very exciting and reasonable. The overly rational Second Senior Sister thinks she has everything but misses the Senior Sister's emotions, which intensifies the conflict. Now it depends on the author's next step. After all, Senior Sister and the two magic pills already know that human Fei Guang is dead, and Pony's Second Senior Sister is going to eat the rainbow. I want to see the Senior Sister holding the Second Senior Sister's body and crying bitterly, and the Second Senior Sister explaining her feelings to the Senior Sister!