All My Clones Are Upset

In fact, I still have high hopes for this book. I read everything written by the author in one sitting. I think there are good points and bad points. The good thing is that the author's writing style is very good and the novel concept is also very good and strange. It makes the novel very interesting to read. However, I think there are a lot of shortcomings. Why is the setting of the theme so deliberate? Things that can obviously be solved with a few words of comfort are repeated over and over with tools. The sense of calculation in writing a novel is very high. The novel itself should add some humorous elements. This seems very reasonable and will be more interesting. Another thing that I don't understand is why the clone is malicious to the owner? Will the master still be afraid? Can't the protagonist directly disband its clone on his own initiative? The other reason is why an enemy can always feel the existence of the protagonist's clone. This is very unreasonable, and a fifth-level one cannot be directly discovered by a seventh-level dean. From the author's class breakdown, I know that the author wants to write this novel longer, but the early pace is obviously too fast. And it's a bit too much to cross levels and fight against enemies. Okay, maybe it's a bit too much to say, but I still hope the author can understand my feelings - I like this novel better and better, and the author's sense of accomplishment is getting greater and greater. In short, this novel has strong plasticity, and I look forward to the author's subsequent performance (*^ω^*)

[What] The idea is very good, but should you pay more attention to rhetoric when using AI? In the three chapters of Ah Zhi and Qin Feng's relationship, there are three subtle calculations in the eyes and the description of the blood vulture. Normal novels will not have this kind of plot.

Comments after reading Chapter 377: Great idea! But the story is greater than the setting, and the writing skills need to be improved. The plot processing is not detailed and smooth enough, but the descriptions of each character are very full. In the plot, the protagonist's behavior in the early stage is like forcing a good girl into prostitution [laughing] (although the protagonist has a terrible start and there is nothing he can do about it), PUA himself and his clone, causing the clone to be emotionally entangled with the supporting character (does this count as self-inflicted? But this is his clone, which is also half of himself [thinking]), which caused a series of problems. Playing with other people's feelings will ultimately hurt your own Bai Yueguang and harm others and yourself. The subsequent change in the protagonist's attitude and psychology is well portrayed. Let's talk about the main plot setting: (the reason is possible but not sufficient) the protagonist lets his clone become someone else's Bai Yueguang🎣, so as to obtain resources (although both parties are willing to do so (the clones:?), And the relationship is sincere (?)), But it is ultimately based on deception. It can be seen at a glance that it is unreliable and unstable, and something will happen sooner or later. From a practical point of view, The resource acquisition efficiency is not necessarily high (the early stage development is indeed fast, but the minefield is also large). It is better for the protagonist to find some good big places and take several clones to separate or join together (like in the academy plot), each of which can collect more resources to support the protagonist. The Bai Yueguang plot can be used as a side plot to obtain key resources as extra income. The protagonist cares about his clone, but uses his clone to go fishing [awkward laugh]; the clone believes in being tolerant and warm to the protagonist, and will also care and respond to the supporting character [exploration]; the supporting character cares about Bai Yueguang's clone and goes crazy after the separation [eating melon]. This relationship needs to be cut and confused. The author needs to have strong writing skills, and needs to grasp the relationship in the book and the reader's psychological acceptance, otherwise it will be easy to write [in progress] Finally, the setting of this book is interesting. Those who like pure love without tolerance for pimples should not read it. Those who can accept it should read it [OK]

In fact, the whole article mainly describes the manipulation and description of the protagonist's clone, and I saw the foreshadowing of the purchase of the first clone. The emotional confrontation is very good, but overall there are still some flaws, such as why no one went to search the cellar. The supporting characters are normal, and the protagonist is very smart. Of course, it is not easy to become stronger. There are many thoughts on the lightning-proof male protagonist who has suffered early injuries and endured them. If you want to watch the clone drama, please move here.

It's a good-looking book, but there are not many people there. I'm afraid that this book will suddenly die on my bookshelf. [Sending my heart to you]

……………… Weird, but okay

The subject matter is quite novel, but the protagonist has too many roles. The protagonist can be appropriately reduced and become a behind-the-scenes person.

Real and meticulous, leaving a deep impression on people It feels like the clones are too similar. The personalities of the second clone and the first clone are too similar.

I lost it, oooooooooo~ I cried when I saw it, why? Wuwuwuwuwu[cry][cry][cry][cry]

Unexpectedly interesting, I wrote my own content, please go to the author [laughter]

I haven't read it for a week. How come it's the same book? Wasn't it a sadistic book before? I still like the previous sadistic article

Highly recommended, well written

The interaction between the protagonist and the doppelgänger reminded me of what a certain villain said: I can forgive your betrayal, but I cannot tolerate your incompetence.

It's novel, but the protagonist is weak and a bit frustrated.

The name of this book can be changed. The clone has super powers at the beginning. I became strong by playing the White Lotus [laughter]

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking Can't stand it anymore

I hope it can be described more clearly,😅😅

It's okay, but I haven't seen any of them based on the subject matter.

It's very beautiful. I don't know why there are so few people there. It's very beautiful and the subject matter is novel.

New theme, nice to watch This is Qizui Wen [adoration][adoration][adoration]

Okay, there are some flaws. There is something wrong, the author can correct it

I am not educated, so I can only say that the writing is really awesome.

It's okay, I've collected it

I feel it's okay. The author has written his own story and doesn't want to introduce the realm in too much detail.

This book is the most beautiful one I have read so far. The author's writing is really great [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss] There is a bit of a contradiction, that is, in the part where Ah Zhi sacrifices herself to communicate with the protagonist, I remember that the protagonist's power is not that the clone will disband itself if it cannot withstand the damage, but there is also a protagonist that will disband itself. It has been described here, but in the chapter of the transaction with the Forgotten River Traveler, the protagonist was forced to lose his intelligence without using the active dissolution ability, and watched the sacrifice in a verbal dispute. It was too contradictory. Here the protagonist was forcibly reduced to intelligence to pave the way for the subsequent plot.

The writing is really awesome, if you can do it, it will be popular. I haven't watched it for a day. Why do I feel like the plot has changed? It's like I haven't watched it before.

It was so good that I finished reading it in one sitting [laughing]

Beautiful, can't sleep at night

Very innovative and worthy of praise

Ah, I have to start reading again as soon as the author makes major changes.