The soul of Noyun, a girl from ancient Earth, traveled to the interstellar empire of the future. This is a world where sentries and guides are scarce. She accidentally discovered that she possesses powerful pheromone energy and obtained a wolf-shaped S-class sentinel!
——As the second novel I wrote, it collapsed in the later stages. The typical writing style failed to keep up with the inspiration. I have learned something, but there is more to it than that and I still need to learn. I don't regret opening the article, I regret not ending it decisively when it should have ended.
Reader comments
Although the ending is rushed and lacks a lot of detailed descriptions and psychological descriptions, I still have to give it 5 stars! The only drawback is that it's too short! In so many sentry novels, the guide is either a spoiled wife or Feng Aotian, or is harassed by the sentinel as he should be, and the guide is sold as flesh, 1VS N, this one is different! This is a true science fiction novel. The author writes very well and describes a magnificent interstellar story. The female goose is not Feng Aotian, but a bit like Athena. There is also a wolf dog guarding her, an ambitious scientific and metaphysical snake 🐍, a deeply loving fish 🧜♀️, and a real male fox who is above all interests and scheming 🦊 , the helpless Phoenix, unlike other novels where it is just a matter of competition, there is one here too, but it is more subtle and more about mutual support to deal with the Zerg, and the instructions given by the male fox and Phoenix are concise and clear. It has been described more than once, and I can't extricate myself when I am immersed in the situation. This kind of leadership is very charming. In addition, I felt a bit broken in the later period because of the door. In fact, the female goose's health improved in the later period and she could write more about it. I guess the data was not good, so I just had it cut off. However, it does not affect the importance of this book as a sentry text in my heart at all, because there is no soft and sentimental description, but more of the guardianship of the sentry, the guide directly participating in the battle on the battlefield, and the help of human beings in desperate situations. I hope the author's next book will be better, 👍👍👍
The ending is really unexpected. The writing is very good and the concept is good. I really like the description of the interstellar scenes in the early stage. There is no love part that I have been looking forward to, that is, saving and being caught, saving and being caught. Until the end suddenly, the future is left to the readers to think about, and there is no trace of love left! It's not a romance novel! The process was actually torture! 4⭐️Give me the plot and writing of the early interstellar scenes!
Thank you author, it's really beautiful and the writing is strong [love] [love]
I like the writing style very much, but the plot is a bit incoherent. If I could write more than 1 million words. It feels almost the same
Although the ending is rushed and lacks a lot of detailed descriptions and psychological descriptions, I still have to give it 5 stars! The only drawback is that it's too short! In so many sentry novels, the guide is either a spoiled wife or Feng Aotian, or is harassed by the sentinel as he should be, and the guide is sold as flesh, 1VS N, this one is different! This is a true science fiction novel. The author writes very well and describes a magnificent interstellar story. The female goose is not Feng Aotian, but a bit like Athena. There is also a wolf dog guarding her, an ambitious scientific and metaphysical snake 🐍, a deeply loving fish 🧜♀️, and a real male fox who is above all interests and scheming 🦊 , the helpless Phoenix, unlike other novels where it is just a matter of competition, there is one here too, but it is more subtle and more about mutual support to deal with the Zerg, and the instructions given by the male fox and Phoenix are concise and clear. It has been described more than once, and I can't extricate myself when I am immersed in the situation. This kind of leadership is very charming. In addition, I felt a bit broken in the later period because of the door. In fact, the female goose's health improved in the later period and she could write more about it. I guess the data was not good, so I just had it cut off. However, it does not affect the importance of this book as a sentry text in my heart at all, because there is no soft and sentimental description, but more of the guardianship of the sentry, the guide directly participating in the battle on the battlefield, and the help of human beings in desperate situations. I hope the author's next book will be better, 👍👍👍
The ending is really unexpected. The writing is very good and the concept is good. I really like the description of the interstellar scenes in the early stage. There is no love part that I have been looking forward to, that is, saving and being caught, saving and being caught. Until the end suddenly, the future is left to the readers to think about, and there is no trace of love left! It's not a romance novel! The process was actually torture! 4⭐️Give me the plot and writing of the early interstellar scenes!
Thank you author, it's really beautiful and the writing is strong [love] [love]
I like the writing style very much, but the plot is a bit incoherent. If I could write more than 1 million words. It feels almost the same