Build the Foundation of Immortality and Cultivate Magical Powers: I Use Intelligence to Become an Immortal

Not to mention other things, this is one of the few protagonists I've watched who doesn't treat others as a way out of their lives just because they're female. I'll give it full stars for this. Cultivation of immortals is all about intrigues and fighting against others without losing your true nature. In this case, if you are merciful and expect the other party to be grateful just because the other party has two extra pieces of flesh, there is simply something wrong with your brain. The writing style of the whole book is pretty good, and it does not deliberately overwhelm the combat power, and the grievances and grudges are clear, but the pace is slow and development-y, so I still recommend it!

The author! You wrote the first three chapters very well! But there is a problem when reading a few chapters later. There is too little dialogue between the characters, which makes the character creation lack a sense of reality! Everything everyone says comes from the protagonist's mouth, not based on the characters themselves! Such a character cannot survive! Secondly, the information goes by so fast. It is possible to string together several daily information and shape the image of the entire family through the communication between the characters, rather than just mentioning it in one go! The important thing about intelligence is that it is not too much. It is best to connect several important pieces of information together to form a certain cause and effect. This will make the story read more coherently and make people want to read it more! Come on

Seriously speaking, based on the first ten chapters alone, this book deserves five stars and deserves it. There is no plot that is too shocking. It is five stars mild, three points dull, and two points interesting. First, I have to say that the subject of time travel can be modified back and forth using a large number of vocabulary from modern and ancient times. There is a lot of room for description, and the author is very experienced in this aspect, which I admit is an advantage. Secondly, the description of the techniques for cultivating immortals is very detailed, which shows that it was written with care. Especially, it can be seen that the protagonist has very poor talent and does not succeed as soon as he practices like other books. Even if he has a plug-in, his own shortcomings lead to his failure. Thirdly, the author understands the countryside very well, but brings out some unrealistic and beautiful fairy tale scenes. The countryside in the book is very rich, with teachers, pens, ink, paper and other learning facilities. There are no landlords. Every household has its own fields and lives in harmony. There is food to eat every day, clean water to drink, livestock, hunting in the mountains, oil lamps, and ancestral halls. These are rare things in real ancient times. But you don't have to worry about this, because it's very enjoyable to read and there won't be too much psychological burden. After all, good things are harder to write about than bad things. At present, I only see that the protagonist knows how to accumulate over time, knows how to settle, and is relatively simple. Other aspects of his character have not yet been revealed. If the deviation is too large, the score will be changed later.

It's more beautiful than most of the fairy tales I've read, and the descriptions are very vivid. I think the rating should be at least 8.5 [Thinking]

Generally speaking, casual cultivation is still hard. Li Qingfeng and Wang Tiezhu can provide the spiritual energy of heaven and earth when they break through the sect. Regardless of whether the grade is good or not, at least the cultivation level is perfect and they can break through immediately. Li Qinghe can only slowly collect the energy by himself to refine the spiritual energy of heaven and earth. But overall, Li Qinghe's potential in the later period should be greater than theirs. The grade of spiritual energy of lunar attribute is definitely higher than that of five elements.

The narrated opening is unpretentious but attractive. The atmosphere of simple village life blows in, and there is a sense of trance that makes people feel like they are in a peach blossom garden. The author's writing is very good, and it is one of the few touching openings. The description of the environment is very good, and the adjectives are used just right. It is a great novel. The male protagonist in the beginning has a relatively correct outlook on things. It just depends on how it develops later.

From the front, this book is okay, but the rest of it is relatively warm. I am a perceptual person, and I can't figure it out. You are using the Li family's exercises. If you are not using etiquette exercises, I support your sensitivity, but you are using the Li family's exercises. This is somewhat unauthentic, and he has exposed himself. This world is the world of cultivation

It's very interesting. The protagonist's spiritual roots and opportunities are so good, why can't he be as good as his brother in cultivation?

Great book! The golden finger is also a good thing! Good review!

It sounds like that's about it. This is not writing a novel, this is writing an essay.

It's not bad. It's better than the average Xiu Xianwen.

Now the Qingshan line and the Qinglin line have grandchildren, the protagonist Qinghe, probably not so soon, Qingfeng has now established the foundation and is the master of the family, then he has to find a wife for himself, find a suitable marriage, and make an ally for the Li family

It's a good family cultivating immortality novel. It has a few minor flaws, but it doesn't prevent it from being generally well written. It seems like the Golden Finger didn't appear after the protagonist built a foundation? What's going on?

So far, it's clear that it's a group portrait, but shouldn't the main protagonist be Qinghe? Why does Qingfeng feel like a pig's foot?

Not bad, but the protagonist has been under pressure for too long.

In fact, it is most appropriate to go to the sect at this time. If you don't have a golden finger in your family, it is really a waste to practice at home. The vast world is the best place for your talents and golden fingers.

It's pretty good. It's rare that I can see so much.

The plot has ups and downs, the rhythm is stable, the fighting power is not broken, the plot is very good, the pictures are touching, the family portraits are well performed, everyone has their own story and blood, come on

The first few chapters may be a bit boring, but after the wild boar hunting, it is very interesting. There are many people and the rating should be quite high. The author will try his best to write more chapters.

The plot is novel, the subject matter is good, and the writing is great. Keep up the good work, author!

I almost thought the protagonist was Li Qingfeng. . . [What][What][What][smile] Give 5 stars to support the author

It is rare to see Zifu Jindan Dao.

After reading about thirty chapters, I personally feel that the pig's trotter is not him, but his third brother.

Fortunately, not as bad as the comment section said

I like the subject matter and the overall content is not messy. I hope there will be no more farming stories in the future.

The writing is fluent and well-organized, but the author may be a little timid and is so frightened that he trembles at every turn [covers face][covers face][covers face]

Looks good, come on! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! It would be better if it were updated as soon as possible

So far, I can read it. There are no big or minor problems. I don't think there are many small ones. Anyway, I haven't encountered any stomach-churning ones. I believe the author will write better and better [I understand] [Please update]

Good, good, good

Um, where are the pig's feet? Where are the pig's feet?