Star Dome************

One thing to say, the pace is really fast, so how many words can be written on the main plot (although I really want to hurry up on the plot of Robert). And whether the avatar can be made revealing (controllable). Quite like it

It's okay, but the plot has been changed.

The pace is fast and the writing is pretty good, but I feel like it will collapse in the later stages of the battle. So far, I'm okay with it. Judging from the latest chapter, the plot should have changed a lot. Now I am very curious about how the plot will progress in the future. If it is changed like this, I have to continue reading [thinking] Is it God or shit? Success or failure depends on this bro

Not bad, but the speed is a bit too fast

The writing is very good, and I like it very much. [Like] There is no jabbering plot that wastes time.

Very good, keep it up, it's obviously a fanfic but it has a beauty that's not tainted by the original work. If you remove the name, you can't even tell which fanfic it is.

I like it very much, nice

Platinum Star! What the heck!

Looks good, Dada looks good

It's a pity that others can't see the protagonist's double

Although there are flaws. But overall. Still very good.

There are changes, but it's not just that the original plot is super cool, please update it soon. Author of 100 Chapters a Day [laughing]