After His Death, Master Wen and His Apprentice, the Cultivator of Immortality, Discovered That the World Was a Book Called Long Aotian, and He Was Reborn.
I want to see content similar to "You don't have a master's wife, yes, you only have a master's uncle". The master has only one disciple, who is in seclusion all year round. The protagonist of the novel, Long Aotian, came to apply for this sect. His childhood sweetheart died protecting him during the trial. After the trial, I rested and picked it up in the back mountain.
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The opening chapter is very good. I hope it can describe the growth of the female protagonist as well as the growth of the male protagonist. The male protagonist saves the female protagonist in the mud, and the female protagonist also saves the male protagonist in her own way. It would be great to have a two-way redemption story in the end.
Yes, the male protagonist's combat power can be appropriately improved. Improve the hero's combat power. Damn it, I don't understand. As for the male protagonist's inner demon, shouldn't it be able to motivate him to increase his fighting power and avenge his senior brother, senior sister, and master? I can understand the obsession with pursuing combat power, and the hesitation and fear. I don't understand, how can you say that he is also a protagonist, or a former genius, and that's it? It's really frustrating to watch. The third storytelling. Okay, okay, if you want to improve the boys' fighting ability, it would be good to directly punish them on behalf of Heaven.
It looks so good, why is the rating so low? [Huge face] This is definitely a good work, the writing is delicate, the emotions are rich, the male and female protagonists grow up with each other, and the overall relationship is not too toxic (in my opinion), in short, it is worth reading [Like][Like][Like]
Good work, no one, no system, gives me the feeling of watching anime, very comfortable
It looks really good so far, the quality is quite high, I hope it won't stop updating. I didn't encounter any poisonous spots, which was quite interesting. At the end of the last book, it was said that I would write a BE book, but you know what you would do if you were a BE reader [learned] Supplement: This book is a bit bland and the pace feels slow.
Not bad, but the male protagonist is a bit tacky
I feel that it should be the sword in the end. The male protagonist is in a perfect mood at the critical moment, breaks the mirror continuously, defeats the powerful enemy and hands the token to the female protagonist, and then reunites with the spirit body of his master, brother and sister.
You can skip the beginning and jump to the heroine's apprenticeship. Chapters 70 to 74 are very sad
Okay,,,, it feels very immersive
A rare master-disciple single heroine
100% Xiao Chen is the big boss (Tianpin Golden Spiritual Root), and the head master will be offline [laughing]
It conforms to the thinking logic of ordinary people, vividly depicts a person's escape when encountering disaster, and his method of coping with an indifferent attitude, making the protagonist lifelike.
Everyday style, the portrayal of master and apprentice is very vivid
It's a very interesting book. The main character is somewhat funny. I feel like the author wants to write about a two-way redemption between the male and female protagonists. The more I write, the more broken it becomes. The logic makes no sense at all. I have to prepare for the breakthrough to become a god. I am still polishing the Tianpin Golden Elixir. Moreover, it was written before that Tianpin is harmful and has been abolished long ago.
Come on, come on, I hope it won't collapse in the future. The male and female protagonists make me feel comfortable watching it. I hope there won't be industrial saccharine in the future (the feeling that once the male and female protagonists are together, they will be very tired)
There is no reason for the score to be so low. The writing, plot, and characterization are all very good. Why is the score so low?
The opening of the chapter portrays the male protagonist very well, and it is a small climax when it comes to the inner demon festival. The image is delicate [Chigua] [Chigua] Don't miss it
Not bad, not bad. From what I have read so far, it is already better than most books^ω^ The author, can you please improve the strength of the male protagonist? It doesn't need to be improved too much, but the cultivation of the golden elixir is still a bit lacking.
It's a rush to the end, a little rush but not much. It has more than 100 chapters. The first 100 chapters are pretty good and the middle is average. The last few dozen chapters are basically about how to make dumplings. A lot of foreshadowing is done for the ending. It feels a bit unfinished. Overall, it's good.
Unlimited potential, great book
A very nice novel.
You can like this genre if you take your time, unlike some books that are quick to read. .
How good it is, how good it is, how good it is, how good it is
Excellent short love novels
Forget it, let me give you a good review. Although I haven't read much, the layout is better than before.
Nice! The male and female protagonists are well portrayed and the plot is also good [OK][OK] It's really beautiful! ! ! I don't know why the score is so low [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart]
You must read it carefully, it is very well written and it is a masterpiece in my heart In Chapter 126, the male protagonist admits his identity as the female protagonist, and there should be some sweetness later.
The beginning is very good, and the overall emotional progression is not abrupt, very natural, and worth reading.
It's very well written, a rare good article, very comfortable to read, and the writing style is good. It's not a bunch of long-winded and childish commentary. Thank you for the author! It looks really good so far, very good-looking, keep up the good work!
There are a lot of holes that have not been filled in, and there are also a lot of illogical places; The emotional main line is not bad, and overall it is worth watching.