Fairyland************

The subject matter is good, but the male protagonist's role is a bit lacking, and there is too much history.

How to say it? In fact, it's okay. The theme of this book is well chosen. Don't be too slow when talking about history. I dragged out more than 50 pictures of the Song Dynasty. Readers have long since disappeared [laughing] The world of cultivating immortals is a bit too boring just to cultivate the daily life of immortals. It's actually quite good to learn some history [Thoughts]

It looks good, I personally think, There are also: the author, please keep updating at least 3 times a day, and the main character (Li Yi) has an immortal identity. After all, he is: Taoist ancestor, female mother, and Houtu's son. The other thing is: by Chapter 53, we will accept the talented girl Li Qingzhao as immortal envoys. I personally think that we can accept a few more as immortal envoys. For example: Qin Shihuang's son (Ying Yinman), Li Shimin's son, etc., Zhengfan appeared: Qin Dynasty~Ming Dynasty, you can accept a few as immortal envoys or apprentices. For example: Gaofan Guan: Tianxing Nine Songs, painting bad people in the rivers and lakes, Yan Yun Sixteen Songs, you can also accept a few as immortal envoys or apprentices. The other thing is, before, during, after, and in the period, don't bring out alien races from all over the world, monsters, etc., Invasion (the world of Zhengshi Fanguan and bad guys like Tian Xing Jiu Ge and Hua Jiang Hu), etc. If you want to figure it out, you should wait until the past dynasties have come out of the middle stage of cultivating immortals before doing it, I personally think.

Author update soon The author's soul returns... 𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌 The soul returns... Driving the long whip and setting up the six bridles... 𓀌𓀎𓀠𓀤𓀫 The soul is back... Crossing the mountain and singing... The soul is back... The soul is back... 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠 The soul returns... Sings high and triumphant... We share the same robe and enjoy the glory... 𓀋𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫 The soul is back... The soul is back... 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌𓀀𓀁𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌

The writing is good, and it has created a new approach in Tianmu Liu.

Being a coward is too much drama, right?

What we are looking at is cultivating immortals, not his mother's history

The novel is very creative, but it is difficult to handle the mixture of history and mythology. If handled well, it is a bright spot, but if not handled well, it becomes a poisonous point.

Is it because it involves Zhe Tian and I don't have the authority to remove it?

Why was it suddenly taken off the shelves?

Why has this book been removed from the shelves? [What]

666, I was still watching it in the afternoon, but it was taken off the shelves in the evening [laughing and crying]

The book is good, but when I opened the bookshelf today, it showed that it was removed from the shelf.

Why is this very good book gone?

Why was it suddenly taken off the shelves?

What's going on? There are so many people who wrote the "Zhe Tian Trilogy", how come it's been taken down now?

Why was it removed from the shelves? Will the author move to other platforms?

What's going on, where are the books?

It's good-looking, try not to write narratives, have more dialogues, solve difficult problems for the ancestors, and avoid detours.

Thousands of people, thousands of faces, I think the alternative new theme is quite interesting, please give it a try, author

It looks okay so far

Super super super pretty

It's okay, why has it been taken off the shelves? ?

Why was it suddenly taken off the shelves?

Why can't you see what's going on?

Why was it suddenly taken off the shelves?

Congratulations on making a living again. I haven't seen them go shopping in modern society [smile]

Isn't it taken off the shelves? Why can't I see it and it says it's been removed?

What happened? Why did he die suddenly? [What]

If Qin Shihuang comes, how many will he have? Willingness and merit