HP Magic Isn't That Great

The plot of the author arranging the heroine to write a novel is so wonderful. In the novel, Penny is now unable to give a happy ending to the hero and heroine in her novel. But in reality, she and her "Albie" are having a collision of ideas through letters. Penny gives her heroine a beautiful setting of "smart, beautiful, generous and transparent" , like Lily, but in the eyes of us readers, Petunia is also such a girl. What choices will she make when she is in this relationship? We readers are looking forward to the ending of Petunia and Regulus, just like the readers in the book are looking forward to the ending of Amelia and Alby.

I see that the writing is quite good now, neither Mary Sue is invincible nor annoying and weak. It has its own characteristics and is consistent with the actual situation. I think Potter, Snape and his team are simply not stronger than Voldemort and Dumbledore. Despite their age, these two are still confirmed geniuses among geniuses. There is a gap of at least 30 years, how can he be better than others? In fact, if he is better than Snape, he is already a genius under normal circumstances. And the part about Lily is also very well written, just write less and not discredit Lily, but from Petunia's point of view it is difficult to get along with Lily particularly closely (in fact, parents are very important here, and it is written here that parents are partial but not too excessive), so I just live my own life and write less about Lily, it is very good. Another good point is that someone finally pointed out that Potter was not just bullying Snape, but actually suppressing his love rival, just like Lieutenant Colonel Spider-Man bullying Spider-Man. The main reason is because they are love rivals. From the time Potter saved Snape when Lupine turned into a werewolf, we can see that Potter was a spoiled child. He suppressed his love rivals and punished anyone he didn't like, but he really didn't want to die. He was the kind of person who would become good if he died well. Sirius was the hardest to persuade. But when I was in the lower grade, I felt that Potter wouldn't be able to obey just a few words of advice. The original text was only changed in the upper grade, and it still has the effect of Lily. The writing here is also very good. It seems to have changed in the front, but the true character is revealed in the back, and the temper is still the same. I don't know why I remembered some videos I watched about Western men or some researchers said that when they were young, they behaved wildly, but when they got older, hey, they immediately turned into gentlemen when they turned sixteen or eighteen. Why? Because once you reach legal age and still act recklessly, you will be caught. Also, the CP is Regulus. I've never seen Penny and his CP, so it's hard. Regulus's final resistance to Voldemort felt not because of a change in pure-blood concepts but a collapse of faith. It was difficult for him to like Muggle wizards. It would be easier to write about Sirius or Snape, whose pure-blood concepts are not that deep.

Come on, Dad, don't be fooled. It's the first time I've seen such a good Relvin.

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Very interesting, looking forward to the next episode

Is the male protagonist definitely Regulus Black? He only appeared twice in total, once when Petunia bumped into him, and once when Petunia mentioned him.

Apart from the few words, there are no shortcomings, and the writing style is also very good. I support it ੭ ᐕ)੭