Douluo**********

The author, Nijia, is really good-looking. Why doesn't anyone read it? I really like what Lin Yan said to Li Mo, "Trash only deserves to rot in the mud" (Chapter 13). It is not only what he said to Li Mo, but also to himself. From the struggle of a useless martial spirit to the desperate comeback after being broken, it uses the shell of a "white mouse" to secretly explore the boundaries of the evolution of martial spirits, as well as the betrayal and exploitation of human nature. (By the way, when can Yu Xiaogang be killed?) I think dark counterattack + setting innovation are the main body of the novel, so it's very suitable to follow. (Whispering, the joy of catching up is like watching an "experimental subject" thrown into a Douluo, gritting his teeth and training himself into the sharpest knife) The author Ni is so diligent. Come on, it's super beautiful. [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like ][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][ Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like] [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like] Give me a thumbs up to express your praise, please accept [mark to hold]

This book, which was released on July 25, deserves to be called a potential new book. I wonder if the author can continue to maintain it later? But the more than 70,000 words I am reading now. Worth a five star review. When we were in school, we would hear this sentence. It is said that in the eyes of 1,000 readers, there are 1,000 Hamlets. I think this sentence is equally applicable to fan fiction authors. 1000 Fanfic authors have 1000 stories. Everyone has their own understanding of the original fanfic you want to write. The author of this book has a unique understanding. The logic of the entire writing framework is very worthy of scrutiny. This book also abandons many old routines. There is no system cheat in the traditional sense, which is good in my opinion. Currently, 8 out of 10 Douluo fanfics have a built-in system. It's not that this is bad. It's just that the system is just a basket. If you try to put everything into it, it will be very easy for the system to collapse. It starts with a mad scientist. Experiencing the mystery of the womb. Suffering injustice and persecution. In the end, the kind personality was completely wiped out. The evil personality awakens, takes over the body, starts revenge, and brings disaster to the world. This is really a rare masterpiece among Douluo fan fiction in recent years. An eye-catching angle of entry. Everything is natural, not obtrusive or artificial. Of course there are some disadvantages. Readers with more cautious views may find it uncomfortable to read. After all, mad scientists regard human life as nothing. Of course, this does not affect its excellence. In fact, the only thing I'm worried about is its follow-up. There are too many obstacles in the novel. Novels about human beings are among the hardest hit areas. First, it is easy to collapse the system, which I mentioned above. Secondly, fan fiction like this is often blocked from review for no apparent reason. Sometimes I just read the book and lose it. I have seen this Douluo fanfic on Tomato many times. Overall, this book is worth reading. Of course, the number of words is currently small, after all, the author has just started the book. Friends who don't want to wait for updates can keep it for a while. Interested in following up. You can also come and take a look. But give the author some encouragement. Come on, man! Although there are very few people reading it now, your writing is not bad. So don't let some of my comments mislead you. After all, everyone has different opinions. Everyone has different understandings of the characters and plot aspects of a book. I really didn't expect that. I am actually the first book review, hahahaha! [Laughs] [Laughs] It's quite an honor to say that. Alas, it's been several days. The author has also been working hard to update. I could tell he was a little lost. The flow of books is indeed unsatisfactory. The author also replied to me. I said I was a little bit shocked. This book still looks okay. Just on the Tomato platform. The traffic is crazy. Of course, due to character issues, the evaluation of this book. It is destined to be polarized. We are not the ones doing the coding. To be honest, I don't dare to make any suggestions. The story in everyone's heart. All unique. I don't think taking advice is necessarily a good thing.

To be honest, this book is one of the better ones I have seen in Douluo fanfics. The author has his own ideas. Although the protagonist is quite crazy, I still think it is well written. Looking at other books, no matter how the character is, it is all hypocritical, but this one is more realistic. I am very curious about what the ending will be like. In fact, I like the feeling of the protagonist written by the author. I feel that this is not only a test for the author, but also a test for us readers.

I have read a lot of Douluo fanfics, and I think this one is quite well written. First of all, the setting is a bit novel, and the protagonist is not particularly brainless Long Aotian. Secondly, the author is very good at describing the scenes, and the battlefield and psychological portrayal are superb and impressive. Furthermore, the plot is compact and not just clumsy. It can be regarded as a fairy tale. I hope the author will keep writing more. This book is just short of being a masterpiece and will keep writing until it is completed. Persistence is a spiritual treasure that is difficult for many people to obtain, but as long as you can persevere, this will be a world-famous work of art! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

Although it is a fanfic of Douluo, most of what the author wrote is the setting and content created by himself. The original text of Douluo only has one framework. Very well written and novel

Why give 4 stars? Because you may be suppressed in rating, so 4 stars is better. I can definitely give 5 stars, because this can be a perfect work that completely surpasses other Douluo fics. I have read so many Douluo fanfics, and none of them can give me a rating of more than 3 stars. But it appeared. I can't imagine that there is a Douluo fic. There is such an author with such an open mind, and his writing is not bad. I should be the only reader who has finished listening to the book.

This is the best Douluo time travel novel I have ever read, but I think it is better for the protagonist to leave a close friend, such as the old tree, otherwise he will be too lonely.

Very beautiful [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration] But why can't I find it when I search on another phone [I'm about to cry]

I finished reading it in one sitting, the author did a good job [blowing kiss]

I like the author very much, cheers

The writing is pretty good. Good luck, author.

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It's so curious. Excellent. I originally gave it a five-star rating but deducted one star after seeing the plot of pretending to slap people in the face.

It has been blocked. Finally, while I can still comment and see the title of the book, I will give it a 5-star review to commemorate the author's suppressed talent.

Not bad, author, keep up the good work.

! Look, look, look, look, look

I have the taste of the Holy Spirit from the Qidian book. This book has better logic, and that book has better imagination.

It's very interesting and the point of view is very novel. Alas, I hope the author can keep updating.

The author's writing is quite good, and he didn't mean to black jade Xiaogang. This is something he can do. Did he strip away his golden holy dragon martial spirit later? [Thinking]

It's pretty, but I'm not happy with it.

If it looks good,

The content is shady and very interesting.

So pretty! ! ! I really like the protagonist

Quite a novel angle, not bad

It's so beautiful, why has it been removed from the shelves? ,,

Nice! Look good! ! ! What a pity...(ಥ_ಥ)

Good, good, good, good. Just a bit short

It's cool, because if modern people travel to ancient times, they will definitely become weird.

Are the books gone? How can I show the bottom shelf [face covering]

I haven't read a book like this for a long time