The Dao Falls into Another World

I was a little confused while reading it. It would be better if the novel was written more naturally. The protagonist's character design is okay, but the others are deliberately portrayed. In the early part, the protagonist met a mixed-race girl, and later came to a tribe. The author's setting for them is "weak", so they are trying their best to move closer to this setting. The descendants of orcs and elves are all female (although I don't know why this is the setting), so this small tribe should be gone soon. On the other hand, being disliked and expelled by both parties, they can only be independent in the wild. In this case, the environment affects the character's personality and ability. It is understandable if they are sensitive to their own identity or have low self-esteem, but everyone is like this and only has this kind of emotion. That is servility. They are shaped so uniformly that they are too similar, have flaws in ability, and have no ability to survive. At the same time, they also regard themselves as the lowest in mind. Because a certain plot setting is needed, it is necessary to frame the characters, rather than fully considering the plot and creating three-dimensional characters. From the reader's perspective, such a character will naturally cause such a plot. If the novel wants to highlight the gentle character setting of the protagonist, then all the women in the small village must be extremely weak and have tragic pasts, then the corresponding plot will be triggered. In the plot, we will see Weak No. 1, Weak No. 2, And Weak No. 3... They talk to the protagonist carefully, and then something happens to the weak one accidentally, and then apologize to the protagonist. The protagonist is gentle and does not care, and then they have indescribable emotions for the protagonist. So in the novel, what I hope to see is that the village is in a relatively private place, with women and, of course, men. Of course, although there are shortcomings in abilities, basic cultivation and hunting of small creatures can be done. Their attitudes towards their identity and the elves and orcs include inferiority, dissatisfaction, decadence, hatred, or acceptance of the status quo. They will be curious, welcoming, wary, and repelled by the protagonist (because they have suffered discrimination). They have their own division of labor and internal order. They need to survive, so their character won't be so bad. What I said should be relatively natural. After all, if someone in real life told me that someone was so weak that he would faint at the sight of an ant, I would probably complain, but there is no such person in reality. If you write this kind of character in a novel, I think readers would complain too. I really like the character of the protagonist. Overall, it's a pity to write it. After knowing what the author wanted to write,

The writing is good, and I feel that the author has thought carefully about it, and evil seems to be intentional according to the rules of this world. In other words, defeating evil and ascending to the next level can be achieved quickly, so the greatest evil is those 'righteous' people at the top.

There are five shortcomings and three shortcomings in Taoism. I wonder which one is missing in the protagonist? Moreover, the Taoist sect's use of forbidden skills can cause a regression in one's cultivation, or may lead to death and Taoism disappearing. The cost of the protagonist's use of forbidden skills is too small [Note]

Alas, give it a good review. I don't know what to say. It's just that sometimes the logic is wrong, but the content is still very good.

Very good, very exciting

Very well written! The author's description of the orcs is very attentive! The plot is also very interesting!

This is the best novel I have read on Tomato this year, bar none. Come on, author

A very good book

Not bad. It's just that the pit of crossing at the beginning has not been filled. Qingyun Temple was charged and killed by a fierce ghost. Has Blue Star already suffered? Can't you go back?

After reading 7 chapters, I feel that this book is very well written, with beautiful writing style and vivid details. It is worth following.