Lucky Star Nuannuan: Five-Year-Old Koi Carp Is Loved by the Whole Family

The author's writing style is very good. I usually read a lot of fast-paced long and short stories on Tomato. The overly compact plot actually reduces the performance of the writing style. However, this story is more detailed and long-lasting, not as compact as most articles. It is mostly realistic about daily life and narrated in a eloquent way. The plot direction is not exaggerated. There is no particularly exaggerated golden finger. Instead, the family works together and slowly makes progress. The descriptions of the group portraits are also great, whether they are family members or neighbors in the village, they are all simple and vivid. Give me a little suggestion! The plot can be sped up a little, and some descriptions can be shortened. It would be more harmonious to balance the two. I also hope that the author can create more and better works.

The story tells the growth story of a five-year-old koi fake daughter, but it is more of a group portrait. The book is special and has no other koi books. Today's Thousand-Year Ginseng and Tomorrow's Peerless Treasures are more about the little heroine's luck. For example, she avoids the eldest brother's calculations in the examination room, helps the second brother avoid the dangers of hunting, points out the direction for the whole village to resist bandits, and starts catching fish with a bit of fantasy. I thought it would develop into a situation where the young heroine hunts for treasures and the whole family gets rich, but the author's style is big and the whole family works together to bring the whole village forward for the safe development of the village. It has feelings about family and country, and the intention is good. The characters in the book are very vivid, the fair and selfless Li Zheng, the generous and straightforward sister-in-law, the mountainous father's love and the warm mother's love are all quite touching, and the heroine is also there I gradually grew up with the care of my family, but my favorite is the clever and mischievous third brother Mai Geer. There are no big villains in the book. From the Shangguan to the county magistrate, they are all good officials. In short, it is still worth reading. After talking about the advantages and disadvantages, the author's writing is good, but he uses a lot of metaphors and modifiers in the writing, such as scene descriptions, character descriptions, etc., Especially in the first half. Too much description makes the reading experience not good and affects the interest of the story. It is like reading a composition or prose with gorgeous words. It would be better if a little more finishing touch can be added to the text. The second half of the plot is relatively more readable. Maybe because the novel is short, it does not feel developed, and the content is still a bit empty in the later period. It is not easy to write five stars!

I am an old reader and have read many books. I don't have a good academic background, but I also want to comment on this book sincerely. This book takes a little warm baby as the core and unfolds a series of things around her. The characteristics of each person are so distinct and unique, and the life of a farm family ranges from bitter to sweet. Everyone's hard work, the villagers' heart-to-heart treatment, the magic of Nuan Bao, and the author's cultural background are all so wonderful. The description of the heart, the description of the expression, the description of the environment, the description of the language, all the descriptions needed in the article are so vivid and vivid, it is really worth recommending

It vividly and delicately depicts the characters' psychology in the ordinary days of a farm family. It is a novel that is more like a collection of prose poems. Reading it makes people unconsciously imagine the scenes and objects, just like the atmosphere of our childhood, it is real. The author's writing is very good, first bitter and then sweet.

The author's writing is so heartwarming. I like this kind of slow-warming rural writing. Don't give up! Come on, don't give up! Really good writing. I hope more people will see [Sending Hearts] What a loving family brother, grandparents, [Sending Hearts]

Nuan Baobao's childhood experience was so pitiful, heartbreaking and pitiful. Fortunately, he returned to his parents and his family gradually healed the trauma in his heart. We look forward to the subsequent development of the storyline. The writing style is delicate and touching, I like it and it is worth recommending.

Warm, loving, vivid and smart scenes slowly unfold... The physical and mental pain is slowly healed by the love, safety, trust and recognition of relatives...💞💖💓

It looks good, although there are a bit too many adjectives, but it is quite attractive. It just feels like the word count is being crammed to increase the space. It could be more compact, especially if there is no need to go back and forth about the content of the letter. In fact, it can be summarized.

It is very warm, and the whole family is united with love. Nuan Nuan suffered too much hardship before she was five years old, but fortunately she has found her real home. Grandpa, grandma, father, mother, uncle, aunt, three brothers, two cousins ​​and people from the village. They gave Nuan Nuan a lot of love and raised our Nuan Nuan into a lively, cheerful, lovely and kind little girl.

It's very interesting. I can see that the author has strong writing skills. I finished reading it in one day. It doesn't have too many exciting plots. It's very warm and makes people feel at peace after reading it. I recommend it. It's the only one I've been able to finish reading recently.

Yes, there are not too many super relatives and cannon fodder. The focus is on the positive attitude of a family and a village of people who help and love each other. The writing is okay, but there are quite a lot of adjectives. It feels like reading prose chronicles, but it is still acceptable. After the abused Nuanbao returned home, he gradually came out of it under the care and tolerance of his relatives. There are no real bad guys in the whole story (except for the other family who mistook him). The whole village was really nervous when they jointly resisted the bandits, but the dangers were all passed safely. Without CP, the article ends smoothly after the big brother wins the election, which is good, otherwise it will not be readable if it drags on for too long~

I hope to see that the Liu family who abused Nuanbao will not have a good end. The author will work hard for more updates.

Although the title of the book is Fu Bao Koi, after reading it, I felt that it was about a family redeeming their little daughter's soul. It was quite uncomfortable to read it before, knowing that Nuan Bao burst into tears when she took off her heart wall. The ability of the koi fish only plays a supporting role in the full text, unlike those brainless ones. Koi Shuang's novel, the characters in it are real ordinary people, and there are not so many weird and official things. How could the most basic people meet officials and rich people every day? The most difficult thing in the article is the affairs between officials and bandits.

I think this novel is okay. I think the literary style he wrote in it is very good. I think the words used by the author to describe the environment are very right, and then describe the demeanor of the children. I like it very much. The words in it feel very novel, and they are very descriptive and very close to the reality of life. It is worth reading.

Okay, okay, very beautiful

Very everyday, ordinary, like home

It's really beautiful and full of life. We should read books like this.

It can be seen that the author has good writing skills. The characters are delicately drawn and the story is told gracefully.

It's very depressing in the early stages, but it's also fascinating. I want to watch it, and I hope it will be more joyful in the later stages.

The psychological description of the characters is delicate and interesting to watch. Come on, the author. The characters are described in detail, and the growth of the family can be seen. Well worth watching.

A very nice book,

I feel like I'm still unsatisfied after reading it

The Fubao family is so warm

Xiao Nuannuan is a bit like a little fairy who descended to earth to overcome the tribulation~

Nuan Bao was abused at a young age and was very timid. Unexpectedly, he turned out to be a little lucky baby. His family was very loving, and his parents were both short and handsome.

Little warm baby, go back to your home and get well soon.

The atmosphere in the front may be very depressing, and those who watch it will feel distressed Nuan Nuan, but the atmosphere in the back slowly warms up, and those who watch it will be softly [blowing kisses]

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

The content written by the author is linked to each other, which arouses interest and keeps reading.

Beautiful, deliberately written to be very attractive