Also known as: [Trainer: My fantasy beasts are all god-level], [The promised fantasy beasts, why are they all super evolving into beautiful girls!
Travel back to the large-scale adventure game "Phantom Beast: The Wish of the Seven Goddess" that stitches together elements of "Cyberpunk", "Cthulhu" and "Phantom Beast Palu".
There is bad news. The reincarnated "Lu Ming" is a passerby character (deceased) who only appears in dialogues. He has no money, no talent, and no powerful fantasy beast. All strategies are useless.
Not only do you have to face the flag of death, but you also have a sister (mine) who may turn into the final boss at any time.
After being fired by Manager Laodeng, Lu Ming decided to embark on a pioneering ship to the world of fantasy beasts to prevent his sister from turning evil and for a second round of life...
The conflict between humans and the world of fantasy beasts, the violated star covenant, the imprisoned Seven Goddesses, and the evil gods from outside the world, are involved in the torrent of the world and destiny. The young man... (The narrator is held in one hand).
"Go aside!" Lu Ming threw away the subtitles and panicked, "They didn't catch up, did they?"
"Who are you talking about?" (In unison)
Sisters who are discriminated against because of their blood. Sister: "I don't care about you. This, this is just repaying a favor." Sister: "Hehe, sister is acting arrogant again. I like brother Lu Ming the most!"
The rebellious foreign gangster lady: "Darling~ I heard that you were bullied by Lao Deng. Come and bankrupt that express company!"
The sister who failed to become a black man: "Humph, my honest brother has learned bad things. Go to hell, you bastard!"
The former good-for-nothing fantasy beast that super evolved into a beautiful girl with animal ears: "Master, I want to hug you as before~" "I want to eat candy and ice cream!"
The trainer you promised.
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The author stops writing, as if a handsome man has stopped fighting; the readers are raising their heads, as if they are waiting for orders. Gaiwen is like a war, and serialization is like attacking a city. If you stop for one day, the barriers will be weakened, and if you stop for three days, the morale of the army will be scattered.
In the past, Sun Tzu said: "The soldiers heard of clumsy speed, but did not see the long time of cleverness." This chapter is left unresolved, the foreshadowing is hidden but not revealed, like encircling but not attacking, encamping but not advancing, it is not the work of a wise man. Readers are like soldiers, chasing updates like coins, looking forward to updated orders day and night, as if waiting for the strike of thunder.
Moreover, "Soldiers are more valuable to win, not more expensive to last." Wealth is more valuable to continue, but not more valuable to stagnate. I hope the author writes like a sword, and the sequel is like breaking the formation, quickly resolving the suspense, so as to comfort the readers. Otherwise, it will be like blunt force defeating sharp enemy. Wouldn't it be better to waste your sharpness in vain?
Give me five stars to encourage you~ [Laughs] At the same time, there are the following points that I hope the author can improve.
1. The author can learn how to describe battle scenes. I feel that all the conflicts that have occurred so far can be covered in a few words.
2. As a beast-control article, the main part of the battle scene should be beast-control. However, the main force in the current battles is basically not the beast-control. I hope the author can give more ink to the beast-control.
3. Appropriately add environmental and psychological descriptions to avoid being too monotonous.
4. Remember to describe the image of the beast
The author's emotional writing is pretty good, come on, come on
The characters are very vivid, and a vivid Li Gongbing is portrayed in just a few pictures.
The plot advancement is currently more natural and the logic is more self-consistent. The hook given to the protagonist also happened to take care of the protagonist's younger sister's future strength, so the hook appears more reasonably.
The writing is excellent, and the plot rhythm has a bit of Shuke's flavor. It is considered top-notch on Tomato (current quality)
Personally I think it looks pretty good.
It looks good, keep it up, but you can put the magic element in the introduction.
I think it's pretty good. It's a bit like a dark version of Phantom Beast Palu (the world of Phantom Beast Pallu seems to be quite dark to begin with). I think it's well written. Why are so few people reading it?
Reminder message The author stops writing, as if a handsome man has stopped fighting; the readers are raising their heads, as if they are waiting for orders. Gaiwen is like a war, and serialization is like attacking a city. If you stop for one day, the barriers will be weakened, and if you stop for three days, the morale of the army will be scattered. In the past, Sun Tzu said: "The soldiers heard of clumsy speed, but did not see the long time of cleverness." This chapter is left unresolved, the foreshadowing is hidden but not revealed, like encircling but not attacking, encamping but not advancing, it is not the work of a wise man. Readers are like soldiers, chasing updates like coins, looking forward to updated orders day and night, as if waiting for the strike of thunder. Moreover, "Soldiers are more valuable to win, not more expensive to last." Wealth is more valuable to continue, but not more valuable to stagnate. I hope the author writes like a sword, and the sequel is like breaking the formation, quickly resolving the suspense, so as to comfort the readers. Otherwise, it will be like blunt force defeating sharp enemy. Wouldn't it be better to waste your sharpness in vain?
Give me five stars to encourage you~ [Laughs] At the same time, there are the following points that I hope the author can improve. 1. The author can learn how to describe battle scenes. I feel that all the conflicts that have occurred so far can be covered in a few words. 2. As a beast-control article, the main part of the battle scene should be beast-control. However, the main force in the current battles is basically not the beast-control. I hope the author can give more ink to the beast-control. 3. Appropriately add environmental and psychological descriptions to avoid being too monotonous. 4. Remember to describe the image of the beast The author's emotional writing is pretty good, come on, come on
The characters are very vivid, and a vivid Li Gongbing is portrayed in just a few pictures. The plot advancement is currently more natural and the logic is more self-consistent. The hook given to the protagonist also happened to take care of the protagonist's younger sister's future strength, so the hook appears more reasonably. The writing is excellent, and the plot rhythm has a bit of Shuke's flavor. It is considered top-notch on Tomato (current quality)
Personally I think it looks pretty good.
It looks good, keep it up, but you can put the magic element in the introduction.
I think it's pretty good. It's a bit like a dark version of Phantom Beast Palu (the world of Phantom Beast Pallu seems to be quite dark to begin with). I think it's well written. Why are so few people reading it?
Come on, author, it's super cool.
It's so arrogant, I support it.
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