Beng Tie [The Soul Turns to Bai Heng's Past and Present Life]

The subject matter of the novel is good, but it is one of the rare good books where the handling of the plot is erratic. When I read it, I either felt out of place or felt uncomfortable. The author has a strong imagination, but is still a little lacking in plot connection and grasp of priorities.

? ? ? I couldn't help but think of the plot. The changes were so dramatic that everyone was confused. It feels okay, not bad.

It's okay, but I remember I said before that Bai Lu would be in a dream. I don't know if Bai Yan will be stabbed in the back when I recall Bai Yan's memory like this. If that were the case, I would probably pull him out and stab him several times. If you don't believe me, I will tell a story about 13 people stabbing him more than 40 times. Author, can you write more about Bai Yan in the future? Others write about the same as 10, but your writing is okay.

It's good to watch, but I feel like the plot deviates a little too much, but it's still very good to watch. I'll give it four stars.

It's a good-looking story that belongs to Wuxiaoxin on the Cloud. It's just that Jingyuan still has his responsibilities and will definitely accompany him in the future.

Since it looks so good, it's time for you to add more. I'll give you the five-star praise first. Treasure author [laughing evilly] Author, update soon, I love you.

When I saw the plot of "Five Dawns on the Cloud" later, I felt so emotional and felt like I was in it.

Personally think it's pretty good

Beautiful, beautiful, very beautiful! !

This is the first time I saw Bai Heng written on it, but unfortunately I can't understand it😵

I feel that the rest of the writing is quite good. I hope that in the future the author will not ignore the character, the rationality of the plot, and the rhythm of the whole book in order to deliberately cater to the readers' preferences [Sending Hearts]

Although the pace is fast and somewhat deviates from the original plot, it is one of the few good books about Bai Heng.

No one asked me if I was getting married? Aren't you afraid of the author backstabbing you [face covering]

It looks good, keep up the good work, author It's getting more and more exciting, author, come on!

Super super pretty!

Haokang's plot is a bit deviated from the original plot. Overall, it's quite enjoyable.

5 Stars is okay as a parallel world

No matter what the subject matter is, I will give it a five-star rating. Moreover, the style of painting is my favorite. Hahahaha. The author's writing is quite beautiful. The good-looking ones are the kind I like. Well, I must give a five-star rating.

Are the ears in the wrong position?

Why is there no post [angry]

Nice to watch, love to watch, love to watch Really super healthy

This book is very good

Very good, not as good looking as Bai Heng

Let's comment a little bit, so if you say something nice, it means there is nothing unpleasant to say. If you say something ugly, it means there is nothing nice to say.

It's been a long time since I've seen a book written by Bai Heng. I'll give it a small five stars.

Come on, there are so few books by Bai Heng

It's okay, but there are some details.

There are really few articles about Bai Heng. This book is really good.

There are too few Bai Yan fan fictions of the same type, and it is really an indelible regret when playing games.

This book is very good if you have read it, but if you have not read it, it feels very cumbersome, especially the word "back then" in the Xianzhou chapter. It can appear more than 20 times in one chapter, but I have to say that this book is really well written.