Starting with Fazi, Let the Crossovers Begin

Yes, the plot description is complete, the protagonist's characterization is OK, and the plot content should be outlined, but why did he jump to the hospital to propose after being coaxed to sleep by Jin Dou's punch? This paragraph is not handled very well. There is no problem with other contents. The writing style should be written by someone who has written other works. The descriptions of fighting and life scenes are quite good. If you polish it and improve the connection between the articles, this book will be a good one. Come on, author.

Okay, okay, this book is good. Come on, the author, and try not to delay it. More, support you, hope this book can continue to be written, Tomato Mask There aren't many good novels about knights, but there are so many that I won't be able to write them later. I'm going down, I hope I won't be a eunuch, come on, author (-w-) Author, you know, "The Analects of Confucius" has been updated by you. Standing at thirty: It means updating thirty chapters in order to gain a foothold in the online literary circle. Forty without Confusion: Forty chapters are updated every day. Only then can you continue to receive gratitude and praise from readers and no longer be confused about the meaning of writing. You know your destiny at fifty: 50 chapters are updated every day, you are your destiny, and the entire website praises you. Sixty and easy to listen to: that is, when you can update 60 chapters a day, everything you say will be easy to listen to, including readers. When you are seventy, just follow your heart and do not go beyond the rules: if you can update 70 chapters a day, you can do whatever you want!

The writing is quite nice, but there are a few things you should avoid: don't open up too much about romance, don't write too forward about love, don't be too funny, and don't be too groveling to other protagonists. It's normal for a new book to have no data. If you write more, more people will support it. Five stars 👍

There's nothing wrong with chivalry. I can't stand it when the police hand over the knight's belt.

This book is a second creation by a fan, and the setting is different from the official information. The general background is the end of TV, and the direction of the story is the disappearance of paradise. At the same time, the character background refers to the 20th anniversary theatrical version and the official novel, Alien Flower. The belt setting in this book requires the consumption of Enochian factors (except for Leo Cavalry because there is no photon blood). The stronger the belt, the higher the consumption, and ordinary people cannot use it. The protagonist's plug-in ability is a linkage mechanism, such as using Kuuga's sublimation power to combine with fazi, etc. In addition, the time travel chapter is more about interacting with the original knight and the two protagonists.

It's very good. Although there are some minor problems, it does not affect the viewing. Compared with some of Tomato's initial articles, it is actually very good. It does not write so much childishness, but also writes the spirit and emotion of the knight, especially the section where Qiao Ye returns. I can be called a soul, what problem does the Lord have for you? It's just that the number of words is too small. It's obvious that what you wrote is a dimensional text, that is, Zhu Tianwen. In fact, you can also think about what you will say after telling us about Qiaoye's world, and you can also connect it with words from other knight worlds, such as me, Ajituo, and the like. Don't go into those plug-in knight stories.

I support reading it. After all, it is a fan of 555 that I really like. The writing is not bad. It is not as awkward as the white text. From my personal taste, the plot description is okay. It is just that the current chapter is a little short and I just finished it. I want to lock the author in a small dark room and give him a hard whip 🍉

From what I have read so far, the writing is really good. I like Faiz very much. The writing, including the smoothness of the plot, and the connection with each world are handled very well, and no poisonous points have been found so far. I hope that if you don't hang too hard and become too invincible all at once, then the world after that will not be difficult at all. I quite look forward to him using his tattered body to save one world after another [Thoughts] Seeing that so far there are no poison points and no fighting power. This is really commendable, but the updates are too slow.

How to put it, at least the previous writing is quite good. It has the sense of fate of the knight like Kamen Rider. With the help of Kuuga's growth, it inspires the protagonist and makes the protagonist more like a real Kamen Rider.

The mouth is so chivalrous! This is the mouth that I want to see! The author should work hard on the mouth!