Next Generation Faiz's World Journey

Yes, the plot description is complete, the protagonist's characterization is OK, and the plot content should be outlined, but why did he jump to the hospital to propose after being coaxed to sleep by Jin Dou's punch? This paragraph is not handled very well. There is no problem with other contents. The writing style should be written by someone who has written other works. The descriptions of fighting and life scenes are quite good. If you polish it and improve the connection between the articles, this book will be a good one. Come on, author.

Okay, okay, this book is good. Come on, the author, and try not to delay it. More, support you, hope this book can continue to be written, Tomato Mask There aren't many good novels about knights, but there are so many that I won't be able to write them later. I'm going down, I hope I won't be a eunuch, come on, author (-w-) Author, you know, "The Analects of Confucius" has been updated by you. Standing at thirty: It means updating thirty chapters in order to gain a foothold in the online literary circle. Forty without Confusion: Forty chapters are updated every day. Only then can you continue to receive gratitude and praise from readers and no longer be confused about the meaning of writing. You know your destiny at fifty: 50 chapters are updated every day, you are your destiny, and the entire website praises you. Sixty and easy to listen to: that is, when you can update 60 chapters a day, everything you say will be easy to listen to, including readers. When you are seventy, just follow your heart and do not go beyond the rules: if you can update 70 chapters a day, you can do whatever you want!

There's nothing wrong with chivalry. I can't stand it when the police hand over the knight's belt.

The writing is quite nice, but there are a few things you should avoid: don't open up too much about romance, don't write too forward about love, don't be too funny, and don't be too groveling to other protagonists. It's normal for a new book to have no data. If you write more, more people will support it. Five stars [like]

This book is a second creation by a fan, and the setting is different from the official information. The general background is the end of TV, and the direction of the story is the disappearance of paradise. At the same time, the character background refers to the 20th anniversary theatrical version and the official novel, Alien Flower. The belt setting in this book requires the consumption of Enochian factors (except for Leo Cavalry because there is no photon blood). The stronger the belt, the higher the consumption, and ordinary people cannot use it. The protagonist's plug-in ability is a linkage mechanism, such as using Kuuga's sublimation power to combine with fazi, etc. In addition, the time travel chapter is more about interacting with the original knight and the two protagonists.

It's very good. Although there are some minor problems, it does not affect the viewing. Compared with some of Tomato's initial articles, it is actually very good. It does not write so much childishness, but also writes the spirit and emotion of the knight, especially the section where Qiao Ye returns. I can be called a soul, what problem does the Lord have for you? It's just that the number of words is too small. It's obvious that what you wrote is a dimensional text, that is, Zhu Tianwen. In fact, you can also think about what you will say after telling us about Qiaoye's world, and you can also connect it with words from other knight worlds, such as me, Ajituo, and the like. Don't go into those plug-in knight stories.

How to put it, at least the previous writing is quite good. It has the sense of fate of the knight like Kamen Rider. With the help of Kuuga's growth, it inspires the protagonist and makes the protagonist more like a real Kamen Rider.

From what I have read so far, the writing is really good. I like Faiz very much. The writing, including the smoothness of the plot, and the connection with each world are handled very well, and no poisonous points have been found so far. I hope that if you don't hang too hard and become too invincible all at once, then the world after that will not be difficult at all. I quite look forward to him using his tattered body to save one world after another [Thoughts] Seeing that so far there are no poison points and no fighting power. This is really commendable, but the updates are too slow.

It's still quite possible at the moment. I suggest strengthening the protagonist's physical body so that the protagonist can gain superpowers in the world of Yajituo. In addition, the knight chip obtained by the protagonist is actually collecting the power of knights in disguise. There is hope for more updates. It's not enough.

Well written, keep up the good work! Let me add some more questions about Kamen Rider's combat power. The T2 level means that the basic data is around 100 tons, but there are no other settings for the main rider and the basic data is not around 100 tons, but it is the final form of the main knight and similar Kamen Riders and special warriors, with surface-level combat power. . The T1 level refers to Kamen Riders whose basic data can reach more than 200 tons, as well as Kamen Riders and gods whose own settings are much higher than the T2 level. Here are a few examples, such as Ultimate Levis (stellar level, whose ancestor has the state of immortality in its own subspace, and Levis inherits the ability of the basic ancestor, the host is with the devil, and cannot be defeated. At the same time, the combat power reaches the highest level, and also has the ability to summon unspecified It shows that the data is weaker than the ability of the main body's clone. At the same time, its own data is also unique among Kamen Riders, with punching power of 83.7 Tons and kicking power of 308.1 Tons. The T1 level data can only be used as a reference, and it also depends on the specific settings. It can only be said that the T1 level is almost the same level, but the gap between the specific data and settings is very large. Some can borrow the power of the entire planet, and some can change the planet themselves. After the main body is destroyed, the soul can still be attached to the world and resurrected. It depends on the official specific settings in the theater version and TV. For example, in Kamen Rider Fantasy, in the theater version, the unparalleled form and the super immortal form, the former has reached the top level of T2 level, which is the level of Kamen Rider Exide's final form, while the latter already has T1 level combat power. As for fan fiction, it depends on the author's own setting.

The mouth is so chivalrous! This is the mouth that I want to see! The author should work hard on the mouth!

I support reading it. After all, it is a fan of 555 that I really like. The writing is not bad. It is not as awkward as the white text. From my personal taste, the plot description is okay. It is just that the current chapter is a little short and I just finished it. I want to lock the author in a small dark room and give him a hard whip [eating melon]

It looks okay. After all, there are so few knight-type books. This one looks good, but there are still few. The author is still too short. Finally, I hope the author will work harder and update it so that it doesn't end up being unfinished.

It's good-looking, and there's nothing bad about it. I support reasonable adaptations and second creations without changing the main theme. It has its own characteristics and is not boring. The ending of the first volume is very interesting. I like it. Stick to it and don't be a eunuch.

Pretty good, although relevant information shows that Kageyama Yako collapsed directly due to genes after transferring away Ou. It just turned into sand like normal Ao Fei.

It's well written. I've actually never watched this drama. I've only seen that man on Douyin. I'm currently interested in seeing how you fulfill this infinite time travel setting. The plot is quite well written.

Support orthodox Kamen Rider

The writing is wonderful

The plot is reasonable and not obtrusive. It is considered to be the first echelon of Mask fans in Tomato.

9 Out of 10 points for good looking

It's good to recommend it.

Big cheers for the author

The protagonist himself can be strengthened. By the way, if the protagonist dies, he can become Orphenoch?

The plot is okay, but there is something about Chapter 29 that I can't describe. You can take a look. Anyone who has seen it will understand.

It looks good, no need to say more, but the update is too slow, and I hope the policewoman will appear less often, nothing else, it must be five stars

It's good, but it's a pity Nami

Kuoyi, just want to strengthen the physical fitness of the pig's feet.

Old bookworm thinks it's pretty good, so I'll give it a five-star rating first.

Come on, author, please code, why is it so short and weak [shy]

This book is good, and the book about knights is pretty good.