As the Only Player, I Put the Game into Open Beta.

There is a suspicion of selling sheep's heads for dog meat. Some of the book titles and introductions are not yet available. [Look carefully] It's not that there are none. I just want to buy sheep's heads and find that there are only sheep's tails () Foreign Persimmon has wiped out my 200-word long review [crying] (Why is it not automatically saved when I click on it late? Isn't the life of a draft a life?) So I won't re-code the original one. I just want to ask if you have thought about your target group. I don't have any good suggestions. I just have a feeling that you have used the writing style of female videos to create the plot and effect of male videos, but most of them are attracted by female readers (it is not a romance novel or a female channel. Let me explain in advance. Don't argue with me about the future or misunderstanding. I refuse to fight back) What I can say is that the plot of the public beta is not that fast yet. If you rush to this because of the book title and introduction, you will easily be disappointed (you will not be able to get effective feedback). If you can, change it to two book titles, or fine-tune the introduction (you also said it was in the later stage, in fact, I have a feeling that you have moved the outline...) Now the focus of the 100 chapters is on the growth of the protagonist and the colorfulness of the world. Players are not heavy. For those who want to watch the game and the fourth natural disaster, just come in and kill... Anyway, keep it up [exploration], I may not always be with you [get it], but my long comment may (?)

Nice! Tied! Praise The heroine's character is very vivid! Boast There are a lot of women in the article! Even more boastful! The little mermaid (Chen tide) and little cloud (somersault cloud) are baby girls! If nothing else, I really like this! Boast That is, there may be neutral words and female words used together in the text! Hope it can be changed! I mentioned it here, I don't know if it will be changed [send heart] I haven't seen too many degrading words in this area! There is only one "fuck" at the moment! Hope to change it Summary: Beautiful! Kua Kua [blowing kiss]

I really like this setting of learning magic from a young age. There are only two books of this type that I can read. The other one is the million-dollar one at 7 o'clock. Author, you have to work hard to catch up with that one. This is also the first time I have received a five-star review in such a short period of time. The author, please don't stop updating. I like golden-fingered female protagonists who are not very hard-working. My pet Zai Zai is also a girl. There are many women on the powerful boss page.

It's good-looking, as humorous as the wine-making style. I haven't read this article. Mainly because I thought it was just like ordinary articles at first. I didn't read invasion-type articles at that time. It wasn't until recently that Invasion became popular, and then I discovered the sense of humor after reading it. Normally, the writing is refreshing and straightforward. I have read a lot of them, and they all went straight to writing about love, hate, and hatred. It made people feel numb when they read it because it was so straightforward and even a novice. Until the bookshelf was full and I was about to start cleaning out the bookshelf, I found this article and clicked on it to read the heroine who is so humorous and witty. It's not as humorous as the heroine, and the atmosphere written by the author also has that feeling. However, I don't know if it is because of the lack of fantasy. I always feel that there is a lack of description of the surrounding environment and a lack of fantasy about the surrounding situation. Not as good as changed to not only, the voice input is wrong. When I saw Chapter 51, there was really a lack of environment and no sense of fantasy at all. I felt the humor in their exchanges, but I couldn't feel it or imagine where they were. I always felt that there was a lack of environment. - Now that I am reading chapter 216, I later found that the environment lacked fantasy, which was not serious. The main reason was that the author did not write about adventure, but mainly about communication. There was a lack of fantasy in the early stages, mainly because the protagonist had to go on adventures and couldn't imagine what it would be like. Later, I discovered that the protagonist's main place is the academy, and the adventure plot is relatively small. At least it is not as vague as the previous adventure of leaving the academy for the first time. The main reason is that the adventures encountered in the middle are too vague, and the environment is too vague, so I can understand the encounter and first communication with a pet.

It's nice and interesting. I haven't seen anything similar to Xunge in the comment section. I'm a senior reader of Game Invasion. I watched it at the earliest. I watched it three times and read it for 180 hours. I think I can say it's not like it. I may have learned from what you said, but it doesn't matter. Ya, isn't it? I have a low reading threshold, so I think this novel is still worth reading. It has an excellent female supporting character and a strong, responsible and gentle heroine. It's very good. The 700,000-word plot has progressed to the point where the heroine and the player are about to play a game. The first 130 chapters are probably about me being a student in a different world. In the later stage, there will be communication between different worlds, and the heroine has a heavy burden, taking care of a planet by herself.

Super Invincible likes the author's world view! ! ! ! Somersault Cloud is still a soft and waxy little girl! ! ! And a lot of the characters are female, which makes it extremely comfortable for me to read. I hope the author can persist in shaping his own world! ! !

Very nice! Praise the heroine's character: When you are weak, you lie dormant. When you get along with the strong, you don't flatter. Pursue power wholeheartedly, but never lose yourself because of power. He has his own moral bottom line and is a "tyrant", but he will do his best to protect the people of Blue Star. Emotional and miserly. Among the articles about game invasion, it is rare that the authorities and the majority of the public do not hold back.

It's a good-looking book. Huanhuan travels to the magical world. The concept of the whole book is very innovative. I like it very much. Whether she is a villain or a decent person, many of the heroines come into contact with her. I really like it. The heroine's pets are also women. This feeling is great. It makes me feel that the heroine and them are one.

I watched it, and I felt average at first, but then it became more and more enjoyable. The character of the heroine reminded me of Wei San, who is a gangster-like heroine. I really like the heroine with this kind of character. Like, like, like, I hope the heroine is more rogue.

I feel like this book will be very popular among men's videos. The super golden finger, the killing without saying a word, the sudden speech of the second half, etc.

Not bad, it revolves around the growth of the heroine, which is great. There are a lot of great female characters and the writing style is interesting. After the heroine grew up, she dealt with the problem of interconnection between the two worlds. She was not kidnapped by morality, she controlled and helped, and she handled it very well.

Finished reading Chapter 68. It's super, super good-looking. The heroine's character is very interesting and cute. The world view is very rich and large. Everyone has their own different personality, which is very distinctive. Relaxing and happy, magic campus. It's really super, super good-looking, I like it very much.

It's a very good article👌. Some parts may be foreshadowing or something. I feel that the explanation is not very clear🤔. There are relatively few details, but the overall writing style is very good. I look forward to it (✧∀✧)❤️

I finally found a magic book [face covering]. I just clicked on it because it's a game invasion. If you want to read the game invasion, you can avoid it. It's very good. 5000 Hours Bookworm really recommends it to anyone who wants to read a magic book. [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss] Let me add that this book focuses on the magical world, and the main plot is the game invasion.

It's great, the characters and settings are great, and there seems to be nothing out of the ordinary so far

It's a good read. I didn't want to read it when I read the introduction. Fortunately, I clicked in. This is the magic world novel I was looking for. Although there are less battles inside the school, there are more battles outside the school. There is also an element of infinite flow. I hope the author can finish it without getting into trouble💓💓💓

Good-looking (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ Good-looking (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ Recommended The author promised me not to finish it too early, it was so good [blowing kiss]

Super pretty (♥∀♥)! I like it so much (ღ˘⌣˘ღ)

I really like this kind of magical world🥰, and I like the heroine to learn all kinds of magic

The setting is very interesting and I like the heroine's character [sending my heart]

It's very interesting. To be honest, it's a bit familiar in the early stage. When the world view is overall huge and dark but not depressing, it directly ties it up in one breath.

It's very beautiful, the heroine is very powerful, smart and motivated, and the writing is also very good.

No poisonous spots so far, it looks great!

A colorful world

Very interesting, the story is well paced

Really beautiful, highly recommended

Nice ! Very beautiful

I think it's pretty good-looking, but why don't many people watch it?

Good-looking, good-looking, super good-looking

It's super beautiful, but not many people see it. I don't know why.