Ghost Hand*******

As long as the Douluo fan novels are tit for tat with Tang San, I think they are all good novels, and this one is also good to read.

I'll give it four stars. I've read a lot of fanfics and this one is very well written. Compared to most of the ones on the market, it's more detailed and more detailed. However, the first part is a bit too cruel. You can use a little more abuse, including some adjectives and modifiers. It's very detailed and even better than others. The great author, some of the popular works are better and more detailed in descriptions, but some individual parts need to be more straightforward. There is no need for too many modifying words, and the protagonist's character arc can be made clearer. Let's see how it goes in the later stage. So far, it is good and I will not give up for the time being. Come on, author.

The fighting is very exciting, and the layout is clever. Although some small details are not satisfactory, they are innocuous. The only emotional line and Meng Yiran have to be developed in the early stage. . . It gave me a feeling of powerlessness as I was in a good mood of admiring flowers in the garden and was about to recite a poem when I suddenly stepped on shit. . . Too much emotional description not only does not add to the charm of the character, but also gives people the impression of being too brainless and causing trouble. . . This is also the main reason for the four stars. . In the later stage, I planned to choose the main plot and look at the emotional plot, but gave up temporarily. . . The conclusion is. Recommended, it is a high-quality food.

I guess the author's favorite DNF game is Devil May Cry. It's normal to do a little bit of abuse before the martial soul awakens. After awakening, it's okay to do a bit of abuse every 10 levels. After all, you have to sign a contract with ghosts and gods. After activating the martial soul at the beginning and having full soul power, the level disappears and the level can no longer jump.

I read the comments and read ten chapters. First of all, I'm a little new to the plot. Whether it's the changes in the Qishe staff, Tang San's heaven-defying ability, or even Xiao Wu's whereabouts, there are still too many descriptions, and the protagonist will die at every turn. It looks very strange, and the description of the scene does not match the actual situation, but it can also be seen that the author is writing carefully, come on [eating melon]

The early stage of this book is best paired with unravel (Tokyo foodie ditty)👍👍👍

Okay, use the Devil May Cry skill to travel to Douluo and severely punish the hypocrite Tang San. Douluo fans are good books as long as they don't lick Tang San.

It's so cool, my favorite Devil May Cry and my favorite Douluo, two favorite things come together!

I feel like I was a little bit harsh in the early stages, but it was pretty good later on.

It was a little depressing in the early stage, but the feeling of relief after the suppression burst out really made me feel good! Good reviews

It's not a brainless feeling, it's a little depressing in the early stage, I think it's okay, but the feeling after the suppression is the real feeling hahh

It's not a brainless Long Aotian refreshing article, but the refreshing feeling after suppressing it is really refreshing.

It's a very good book. Whether it's the Devil May Cry part or the Douluo part, it can be seen that the author has a good understanding of both works.

A very nice Douluo fan novel. The author's writing about the collision of power systems from different worldviews is quite reasonable.

Pretty good but what about the sword?

After reading Chapter 30, I don't know how much soul power there is, but what a martial soul is. I only know the skills to travel through the past and bring it to the dungeon.

It's been a long time since I've seen a good Douluo novel.

I read another book today and found that this one was not so cruel, it was normal.

Deducted one star, some surprises struck me