Miss HK416 in the End of Madness

It's a very good book, but the pace feels very fast. I feel like I could slow down and write about the perspective of grassroots survivors and the description of the protagonist. I feel that except for the first two chapters, the protagonist only plays a role in summoning the army🤔

It's okay, but the pace is a bit fast Also, a reminder, if possible, use less realistic place names. It will be pleasing to readers, but it may not be pleasing to Fukaku.

I think the author's writing is very innovative! But the words in some countries still need to be changed. The author should be careful [you taste carefully] [you taste carefully] [you taste carefully]

Come on, author, the book is beautiful

Author, you must keep writing, come on

I'll give it four stars. The first five pictures are a bit immature, but the rest of the writing is pretty good.

The first two chapters of this novel are indeed like this. The protagonist just plays two soldiers. Behind them are a lot of soldiers. This is a lot. Other materials, some construction and so on. I feel this novel deserves five stars. Necessary

It's more palatable to me

Good start, but too fast

Good looking😄 Greatness needs no words

You can try some of the perspectives of the various protagonists in Lao Mo's videos, otherwise it would be too monotonous.