Become Merry and Go on Adventures with the Straw Hats!

It's a good-looking, new book with great potential. It's very interesting. The protagonists don't overwhelm the main characters, and the original Straw Hat members have enough presence. There are many parallel timelines, various animation props, game spaces, and the whole protagonist group traveling through other animation worlds. Many of them can be expanded and written, such as the world view of the game space. All members have traveled through other anime worlds and are currently writing Kung Fu Panda. The overall writing is quite good. The protagonist has a weak sense of presence and is a bit like a group portrait. It is an alternative to make up for the endings of other anime. At present, the overall strength of the protagonist group has improved very quickly. It depends on how to deal with it later. In fact, transcending One Piece World will lead to the premature ending of the One Piece World plot. In fact, we can also expand the game space and time travel to other anime later. The group portrait of all members traveling through time is quite interesting. It would be boring if villains from other worlds also traveled through time and joined the pirate world. It was already complicated and was sewn into the pirate world. It would be better to set it as a fusion world from the beginning.

Overall, it's pretty good. I like this kind of follow-up story that hasn't changed much. It's just that the number of words in the early plot needs to be improved, but it can be seen that it will improve later. What should be omitted will be omitted. There is no ambiguity and no good reviews from the heroine. I look forward to the subsequent stories.

Regarding One Piece fics, I still like to watch Yoshima because the plot aspect of Yoshima is more controllable. I saw that most of the One Piece fans did not join the group, and many plots later collapsed, or they went to other worlds. It may not sound nice to say, but the quality of most online writers is more than a little worse than Oda-mae! There are some good original writings in One Piece, but very few. Most of the writing is average or even not good at all, especially when they go around snatching members to collect harems. Most of the subsequent plots are either unfinished or can only be changed to another world.

Good looking, better looking than the other one.

This kind of driving the protagonist group to the dungeon world is very good! Just don't turn Luffy into a mass killing type like some other pirate novels.

It's very interesting and interesting, I hope it stays that way.

It's okay and it's pretty good to watch. Isn't it enough to write 2,000 words a day? [What]

Not bad, interesting

It's very interesting, good luck to the author! !

I am very satisfied with this book

I've read a few chapters, it's pretty good

Luffy is a bit smart

It's pretty, but there are so few, not enough to see~

Very nice, cheers author

He boasts that the villain's fighting ability is tougher than his neighbor's, and he improves his own fighting ability just to suffer an even more ugly defeat.

It's pretty good, except that characters from other worlds also come to One Piece and the fact that pirates are extremely poisonous is good [eating melon]

The writing is very good. It doesn't just follow the plot all the time. The author adds many of his own ideas and other elements, which is very imaginative. Not bad, worth watching

It doesn't just follow the main line of animation, but incorporates elements from other movies and animations, which is quite novel.

It's really well written [laughs] It's worth reading.

'It's really brilliant. Very good hope

It's so good-looking, and I've seen so many stories about it, that's what attracted me to follow it. I hope this writing style can be maintained. I also hope that it will be as updated as the original work. I hope it will be updated soon to maintain the charm of the beginning, and it is best not to lose combat effectiveness.