Wuxia Online Game: When a Transmigrator Meets Someone Reborn

I would say it is a traditional online novel. It is too long-winded. If you can explain it clearly in one sentence, it has to be a long paragraph. There are so many adjectives and inner descriptions that it is boring. Call it a modern novel, but the first few chapters abuse the protagonist and the descriptions are long-winded. Why do you want readers to feel the same way? Not to mention the three golden chapters and so on, how many chapters does a protagonist have to get the Nine Sun Magic Ink Marks? According to this way of writing, if the protagonist plays the game for a month, the author can write for two years.

No, I originally deleted it, but I still have to come and say it: You are Chen Mo, a reborn person who has just gone through a life-and-death catastrophe and your mind is dizzy. However, you still want to tell your biggest secret to your best brother. Unexpectedly, just after buying a gaming helmet, your good brother can no longer read it back. What does he want to do? He already knew his biggest secret. It was clear that he had poured out his heart and soul to him without any reservation, but he didn't expect that he would not say a word or even come on time as promised. He doesn't even bother to reply to me. Is he going to betray me? Now I not only have to get the golden secret book first, but I also have to be wary of my "good brother". To the mute protagonist

The writing technique I used many years ago. I haven't even started to walk the road yet. I have already considered the end scene. But the problem is that you don't know even tenth of the way.

Writer, stop writing novels and go act. You are a capable actor at least.

Hey, it's not good for you to impose plot difficulty and conflict. Beiming Divine Skill conflicts with Jiuyang Divine Skill. Beiming Divine Skill cannot be learned without internal strength. You should directly set it up. You have several internal skills. How to practice it?

Very watery at the beginning. Your reborn brother told you his secret. It's normal for you not to tell him about your time travel. They have made an agreement with you, but if you don't go, just say something.

You can add some 🍉 to your understanding, and everyone will be invincible in the later stage.

Those chapters of Jiuyang made me want to vomit. Did I run out of words later? It turned into an assembly line again, a wolf in sheep's clothing.

There's a lot of nonsense, and the data and stuff are all in the word water.

It's not that the game cares so much about not dying, so why is it that the game loses its life?