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The group portraits are well written and lively. A lonely and broken rich second generation, a cold assassin, a cowardly deserter, an ordinary nun, and a knight-errant like the wind. Everyone may not be perfect, but the sincere feelings between them are extremely moving and loving. Good night, Nott

The setting is inspired by the Korean comic Jobless But I can see that I have my own thoughts in it. But to be honest, the protagonist's strength is a bit too strong, and it feels like it dilutes the performance of others. I found a problem. Because the protagonist's strength has increased too much, once someone challenges the protagonist in a duel, he will be killed instantly with one sword. It doesn't look particularly good, but it also reflects the protagonist's sense of invincibility. However, I feel that this article is a group portrait. I hope that the protagonist's personal ability is not so outstanding. I feel that the role of other teammates will be weakened a lot. In summary, I still like this article very much. I hope the author will continue to work hard and update it well (≖‿≖)✧

Previous: It's so beautiful. It's an invincible and refreshing article at first glance. There must be no knife at all [adoration][adoration][adoration] After reading: There are no knives at all, there are many small knives, and there are many big knives. Looking at me, I am like a dog [crying] [crying] [crying]

I don't know, I thought the character has been replaced. The protagonist is much more interesting than your previous books. I don't know if it will change in the future [laughing], but it can also be read.

Very good. The book has great potential. The characters of the protagonist and supporting characters are well written. There is no poisonous point at present. The background is also well laid out. There are also some interesting points. This book does not need to be used as a spare food. It is recommended to read. Also, will the little nurse get inside in the end? I kind of want to see it, just a little bit🤏

It has complex ingredients, is relatively comfortable, and doesn't have any hot spots. I thought it was cruel at first, but it turned out to be quite warm. Considering that I don't have many wrinkles on my skin, it's not a big problem. OK, approved: OK

All things considered, this book is quite good. The climax of the book is when Nott dies, which is very moving. However, due to the insufficient description of Nott in the previous article, it fails to show the epic feeling very well. It just arouses emotions and makes people feel excited. But for an online article author, it is already quite good. In the follow-up plot, it seems that Donna will awaken and join the protagonist's team. Tina's resonance is also fixed. Donna will replace Tina as a new member. Lin and Hei may become a knight combination in the future. It is unlikely to be kicked. The only one who can be kicked is Tina Nightingale. They are both two stars and will definitely be kicked. It is estimated that the protagonist will be the only one left in the team in the end, and then the resonance will be full.

666 Is so beautiful, there is no knife in it, it is all sweet, and the story between the teammates and the protagonist is very good [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration], ,[Sneaky smile]

The pace is fast, the emotional feedback is strong, the protagonist kills very well, and the realistic scenes account for 1% of the whole story. The advice I would like to give to the author is to try not to discriminate against the protagonist with high-star character cards, because this is considered a poisonous point (it has not appeared yet). Since you have written such a straightforward and exciting article, don't engage in the pig-eating-tiger routine. In short, it's okay.

It's great, it's simply not the quality Tomato should have. The author's writing is good, and his character creation is unparalleled. There is no problem with advancing the plot. At present, there is not a single poisonous point in the book. The rhythm is particularly good.

The protagonist has a good personality. He is not blindly arrogant or has his own goals. He will cultivate the intelligence of the team. And the other characters in the team are also well developed. Is it the protagonist who has two souls? And the mirror is bound to the trumpet but can summon the hero soul of the big one? I don't understand these two points. [Eat melon]

Nice succubus form, but sigma man. And there are a lot of foreshadowings in the early stage. It should be very exciting to write in the later stage. If all these pitfalls are filled in, it will be an absolute masterpiece. The male protagonist is a double-character time-travelling. The world seems to be destroyed in one time-travel, so there is no sadness or joy. Another thing is that he grows up very fast. It is very enjoyable to watch, and it is not a dry description in words, but a description of actions. Visible growth is growth

The overall tempo is relatively fast without drama, and there won't be too many emotional dramas, but it can still make you feel like it. , I generally don't like reading novels with less than 100 chapters, mainly introductory novels. I like reading this type of novel. Even if it only has 63 pictures, I'm still willing to give it a try and it's very good after reading it. As for the shortcomings, because I enjoyed watching it for the first time, I may not be emotionally involved too deeply, or it may be because of spoilers. When the guard died, I felt really uncomfortable in my heart, but I didn't feel much. And I think the real world can actually be added. It can't be too much, but it still feels like it's still very small. Just looking at the game, I prefer the balanced development of the two lines. Of course, it may be that there are too few updates. Do you have any similar novels that you can recommend? Really like it.

Yes, the theme is relatively new, the creativity is good, and it does not particularly stress the protagonist's combat power. At least the probability of passive triggering of [Heart of Killing] is quite high, and many of the skills and characteristics obtained are powerful skills or characteristics of the BOSS. At least for now, it mainly describes the distinction between minor injuries and serious injuries when the protagonist starts fighting. , Has not been reflected in other heroic souls or enemies. The protagonist team is well written, and it feels like the passionate protagonist team of the second grade. Another point: I feel that there are not many places where players can actually control the game (I don't know if it is my illusion). I feel that if this game really existed and played, there would be very few people (relatively). There are good and bad things written in other places, so I won't comment too much. Generally speaking, the writing is very good. Ignoring some of the things that are wrong (if there are some obvious things), it is worth reading.

It's okay to read, there's basically nothing toxic about it, and the protagonist's character is okay, but I don't know if there will be a female protagonist in the future, but judging from this situation, I feel that the most likely female protagonist now is the nanny who looks like she's going to die. Author, I advise you not to issue a knife [smile]

Interesting, interesting, this novel tastes great! The protagonist, well, it should be said that he kills decisively, right? ! Anyway... It looks very smooth and attractive. It feels right. The story is also very attractive and grabbed my attention.

The overall style is somewhat similar to that of Lost City. , All seek meaning in absurdity, and the fast-paced plot always gives people a long period of reflection. Going deep into it, there will always be a moment of trance, and then the fingertips will stop and think unconsciously, and there will be a satisfactory, but slightly sloppy ending. For signature. Also the expectations placed on it, as well as the author's belief. I have followed it from more than 200 chapters to now. The rhythm behind it is fast. The feeling of emptiness is too strong, and there is no way to fill it with meaning later. Although Sheng Sheng has literary talent, it is still a little weak in the face of this grand narrative. It also dissolves the meaning. I want to prove that it is reasonable, but it is not enough.

The book that you can read if you are in a book shortage is that the author probably thought that the traffic was not very good, so he started to rush the progress after Lit came out, and the world began to merge quickly. Because it was given a passable he, it is considered half-finished to me. In fact, there is quite a lot that can be written in the middle. It is a pity for this book. We will see if the author will update some extra chapters later.

I used to be a bit disgusted by the name, but I haven't looked at it since I swiped it too many times, so I still looked at it. I found that although it was not very good, I could make do with it and read it slowly. This deserves a five-star rating. But the pace of the next few dozen pictures is too fast. Spoiler alert, Tina is considered the heroine. Perhaps this is the reason why there are so few descriptions of the contracted women in the original account. It ended too quickly. It's not too much to write about 700 for this rhythm. More than 500 is fine. That's it for Garlic Bird. Let's just look at the ending. It can be considered a HE. It can only be said that it is still awesome. The Skyfall genre is the author's favorite genre. 4 Stars food and grass.

It's a very exquisite book. I don't think there are any poisonous points, and there are corresponding explanations. It also made me, a heavy Soul P and Cthulhu lover, enjoy reading it. Norden's virtues are really as exciting as watching the characters' virtues in the game.

It's not bad. I have a good look and feel. I generally recommend it. Of course, it only represents my personal opinion. Everyone has different preferences. Whether this book is good or not depends on each person. The previous plot has a strong sense of immediateness. It is exactly the same as what I have seen before. Although the name is not very impressive, when I saw the name of the book, I felt that I had read it. But when I saw that the chapter was published this year... Strange thing In the book that I remember, I forgot the name of the protagonist: One Star, Heroic Soul, Player Summon, Tower Climb, Lord of the Haze (I kind of forgot it), but I remember which floor the protagonist was on. He fought against powerful enemies specifically targeting him, and paid a heavy price. The sense of déjà vu is too strong in the first 60 chapters of this book. Many of the contents are very similar to another book in my memory, and the difference is not obvious. However, the subsequent plot does not have such a strong sense of déjà vu.

I'm surprised. It's really well written. I never read team stories, but I really liked it. Will Tina be the heroine? Author [crying][crying][crying]

The author's description of the bond between the protagonist and his teammates is very profound. I haven't seen this kind of novel in a long time. The teammates are not treated as tools, but as family members. Come on, author! [Laughing][laughing][laughing]

It's pretty good. The protagonist Wu Quan is very good, and the author's overall concept is also very smart. This smart concept and subsequent overall method can keep the overall structure from collapsing, and it doesn't describe too much about other daily aspects, so it doesn't occupy the main plot, and it can also be known. What is the general free time like? I personally feel that the ratio of increase and decrease in favorability between each character needs to be fine-tuned. Then when you read Chapter 50, it will feel like the plot has suddenly changed. All the things that were less mentioned in the previous article will be thrown out, which can easily lead to some annoying surprises. However, people who don't understand things give up reading this book. Fortunately, some explanations are gradually added later. So far, it seems that there are no flaws. Then I feel that the description of specific attribute values ​​and upgrades in this book is relatively clear. Compared with other books, it is very comfortable to read. Overall, it is still very good.

The creativity is excellent. I haven't seen a novel set in a dark dungeon for a long time. However, some plot developments are too deliberate and the protagonist's aura is too obvious. However, these can be changed. The most important thing is to stick to it and don't become a pigeon [face covering]

It's very good. The protagonist's character is very delicately portrayed. Other characters in the book also have their own distinctive characteristics and personalities, especially Tina, Link, Xiao Hei, Wu Pan, Lelia, Qingyu, Li Te, Amber, etc., And there are some others that I won't list. These are my favorites. I rarely finish a book because I feel that when the book is finished, everything will end. But I think that as long as it is not finished, everything in the book will have an infinite future. They will not end and will keep going like this! I really hope they have a bright future!

At about 8.5 Points, I have seen this counter-routine of traveling through time to become a card in the hands of other players, but the author did a good job of balancing it, and in order to avoid repetition, he also added a lot of special copies, and there are a lot of private goods from anime and games hidden in them, which is quite interesting. I think the settings of several characters are pretty good. But as for the shortcomings, I think there may be a few. How to put it this way, the foreshadowing of the characters may be a bit stiff at certain moments, but the characters are indeed likable. Then the author laid a lot of groundwork in the early stage, but had to rush to the end in the later stage. I felt it was a pity that many parts were not finished, but it can be considered complete. I think it's worth taking a look at my leisure time. After all, it's not ugly, it's still smooth, and it's pretty cool to see the values ​​increase. I hope the author will keep up the good work.

The pace of the start was very good. It's been a long time since I've encountered a book like this. Cool and dense. It's just that the title of the book is so difficult to describe in one sentence that I almost didn't get into it. In the third level of the hidden dungeon, I skipped through the section about asking questions, and found it a bit boring. When Lily appears later, she looks a bit like a deus ex machina. For me, my sense of urgency and interest in reading have dropped a lot.

Okay, it's worth reading. There is no clear heroine at the moment, but even if there is one, I will accept it, because the protagonist of this book is much more comfortable than most heroine-less protagonists. This alone makes it worth reading.

The background is similar to that of a Korean comic. I hope the author can write something of his own [Like][Like][Like]